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This is the month to watch out for. April is gonna be something. Story-wise, at least. Here's hoping it's a good one. (42,500 Words)


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https://wanderinginn.com/2022/04/10/8-78-f/ 

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CromCruach

A Dylan Thomas chapter "Do Not Go Gentle into that Good Night" with a few pages of the Horns glorious chaos added to it! Loved it.

OBS

Amazing! Loved it!

Craig

Wow, this chapter was a treat! We got some great lore in the beginning , heart pounding action throughout, and we got such a perfect end to the chapter. I am excited for the next volume

Talin

You have had some great chapters, but this might be the best one yet. I love this story Aba. It's truly unique and I feel really lucky to have been able to watch this develop week by week over the last few years. Keep it up, I'm with you all the way.

Anonymous

The best part about this chapter is the stress it managed to evoke. I almost feel like the last part of the chapter should have been a separate one because it killed the amazing pacing. Overall one of the best chapters of TWI I’ve read though.

Anonymous

Holy hell what a chapter! what an ending to a Volume!! the end omg i can't wait for the next chapter to come out :)

Anonymous

Loved the chapter, to say much else would be redundant after all the comments. Yes it was intense, full of ......OMG.... moments. But .... did I miss a chapter? Did we get to see when something took over her? If what i said is a spoiler I'm sorry..... but very curious on what the hell happened in liscor.

Jeff Gault

How dare you be this good.

Jeff Gault

We have not. It apparently happened while we were watching the world of the dead

Finn Ryan

I really loved this chapter overall however one problem I had with it was seeing Fetohep running and knowing he considers it urgent and relevant but not having a good idea of what he is running towards or why he has to get there so quick.

Ethan

He’s going to save Erin’s body, because a god has hijacked it. Hence asking necrolad to help out.

Finn Ryan

Right I knew that by the end of the chapter, but during the (Fairly long) Run sequence I didn't know the purpose so the stakes felt weird.

Finn Ryan

Right I get that by the end of that segment, but it was a long part of the chapter to not really know why this matters.

sinra

This chapter was very thrilling and fun to read! But it also felt kind of rushed, like all the individual stories were closed and brought to an abrupt conclusion. And i am wondering why Fetohep didn't use Mass teleport or Greater teleport? Since even Gazi has a scroll, surely the vault should have multiple of those. Instead of running through Chandrar take your best 20-100 men teleport to liscor, hire Named adventurers and get the job done? would save like at least 2-5days assuming the sea travel time.

Anonymous

I assume it has to do with him needing a literal army to go fight other armies with. He is going to end the war AND protect Mersha and the others. Not just protect Mersha. Thus he needs an army.

Anonymous

Can't wait for some drakes to get rekt by Flos leadingan army with the titan as his strategist and Erin as the cook/moral person!!!!

Jamie Messier

I want Ksmvr to use his teammate skills. So bad. As in, please please, let us [Readers of Pirate] see this evolve and see him (Ksmvr) drive up the amount of Linked / shared skills the Horns would be capable of. Also, he should level up simply because he succeeded in seeing his team put back together.

Anonymous

It may be tough to get Niers and Flos to work together...

JazBird

What a ride, My heart was beating so fast, at times I had to remember to breathe. I cried, I laughed out loud. Most of all, I was on the edge of my seat throughout. Amazing how you wove it all together. Storyteller or Bard, well done. I await the next with bated breath.

Eilluna

Hopefully we'll get it later. I have a feeling we're going to be seeing the point of view of this exact time from all the different continents.