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I should have taken a break after the last chapter. I DID NOT. (34,800 Words)


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https://wanderinginn.com/2021/07/25/8-32/

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Umar Musa

Please take a break when needed, my crack addiction can wait a week or two, but not months if you become unwell. Cheers for the chapter!

Anonymous

Fetohep continues to be one of my favorite characters. Thanks for the chapter!

Anonymous

Ok so just a random comment not about the chapter, but about the animated Bird. Do any of the Laptops have Alfred Hitchcock's "The Birds" downloaded, and if so can we hear what Bird's reaction was if he saw it?

Anonymous

I admit, I was hoping the [Slavers] would be fed to nothings. But this definitely still makes me all tingly and happy. Fetohep is great. As much as I adore The Bedtime Queen, Fetohep is still just the absolute best Ruler. 10 out of 10. He’s the only properly inspiring King in the whole story. He can’t even use the mental fuckery inherent to the system that all the other [Kings] get since he became a revenant before he became a [King]. My grin hasn’t gone down yet ever since Erin and Fetohep finally got to proper talk and Fetohep got his groove back. He’s just the best!!! gaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!! He just pairs so well with literally every character! And he and Erin actually work as an inspiring force for chaos comedy power duo unlike Erin and Onieva who seem like they should but don’t. Luckily on that front Onieva and Lyonette pair extremely well. But now I’m babbling about irrelevant nonsense! It’s because I can’t stop grinning and I type as I emote! Agggghjhhhh!!!! Anyways, yeah. This chapter had to follow that one. Going to Relc here would’ve been a big “Like wuh “ even if we did vote for it. I don’t believe that Relc, in the situation that he’s in, is capable of generating enough feel goods to counter the previous chapter like this one did. I could be wrong there obv, and I can see in my head theoretical worlds where Relc is such a good cop his chapter about race riots and indentured slavery has enough feel good to successfully follow Pisces’s. But just saying that sentence makes how unlikely that one is seem more obv. Too similar despite how different tonally. Too real, yeah. can’t follow up the rainbow with blunt social commentary. This though . I’m still ear to ear btw. That’s why I’m so inarticulate. Anyways, don’t work too hard, Pirate. These last chapters have been especially massive and fraught with curses. Rest those wrists if you feel like. 🦾

Maniac000

Kinda hoping Pisces becomes the next ruler of Khelt. Not just yet but by the end of the series.

Anonymous

I thought that too, but that’s also hoping for Fetohep to die yknow

KDP

Arghhh, I feel I keep repeating myself too often here in the comments, but again: Great chapter!

Anonymous

The act of dying is one of the acts of life.

Jamie Messier

I want to see what exactly Erin learns in the deathlands. Also would want to see her gain edges with the leveling system.. or move people around the ‘world’ like she does her chess pieces or Inn folk. Is she really going to come back as a [Witch]? [Queen of Witches] so she can kick Beliviere?’s assssola.

Deepak Kamlesh

Another brilliant chapter, Pirate! :)

Martin Page

great chapter pirate. random comment but i love this so much some of the species have inspired species in my tabletop role playing game (friends only not profit or anything) or changes to them. Selphids, Garuda, Drakes and changes to Gnolls. thank you i love your uniqueness in making species interesting and new

sinra

are we getting a chapter today or is it a break day?

T34Z0MB13

Wow! What a chapter! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Anonymous

Quick question. How to you read the ___ words? I remember that there WAS a way to do that but not what that way was.