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7.49 (Patreon)

Published:
2020-09-23 01:41:38
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2020-10

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The last chapter this month! I'm on a much-needed break! Hope you enjoy and look out for the monthly poll sometime this week! (18,900 Words)


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Comments

Andrew

Thank you!

Anonymous

Your chapters are a much-needed break for me. So, thank you for that.

Alvin Baena

Chair gripping action in this chapter. I loved it. Thanks pirate

taukid

I'm dumb. When they said the pirates were toasting Waterbear with drinks, I thought they were like waterboarding him or something. I mean the BloodWhatever raiders are monsters so I assumed the BloodWhatever pirates would be too.

a.m.

This was thrilling! Thank you and hope you have a great break to recharge.

Tom Prouty

Great chapter! Though I am sad it didn’t end on a W.

Logan

"The Lord of House Veltras called for aid. And heard only silence." This makes me so sick and angry inside. anyone who would hurt children deserves to be erased from existence. Anyway thanks for the chapter.

Kevin Choi

... Felt like this chapter was a bit weak. The storm came out of nowhere and really seems like it came to be just to add an obstacle for the cure. I think pirates and foreign nations confiscating the cure would have been enough. Having a storm just start up seemed random and out of left field. Seems like the plot of Saliss, Erin and Maviola/The Ball/Octavia got put to the side for fluff. Felt like that revelation that we are being cliffed on got stolen from us :P. Made for the cliffy. But the Ball itself could have been a side chapter where we learned a lot more about culture. Similarly, Octavia getting the fame and reknown she's always wanted and refusing Palass' sponsorship could have been shown as a huge moment of character growth. I see that you wanted the chapter busy, to show the unfortunate impact on Tyrion Veltras and gain the audience's sympathy for him, but the storm just seems so contrived, even more so when there are so many cool events happening to the side that are happening off screen. Hope we see that revelation soon!!! 3 K chapters and then a random storm seemed to push the meat of the story away this month. Felt like the storm was crazy music going everywhere, and every now and then we would get a clip about the plot, like a trailer or something. So long to wait for the next chapter! Successfully excited... Just a bit bitter.

Kevin Choi
>>44550497

I hope we see some retribution and some loss of faith amongst the thorns for killing those healers too....

David Giles
>>44554237

There have been mentions of the danger of weather spells before, and a few characters have worried they're being overused aloud. At a guess Pirate probably went 'okay what irons have I got in the fire and can I combine any of them?'

Alan McBrayer
>>44554237

Agreed, the storm came out of no where. Also I didn't like the 4 days passing with almost nothing happening in the Inn. How long is it going to take for Griffon Hunt to send a damn message spell explaining that Peeblesnatch is alive. It would have been a lot better if the storm started brewing in this chapter, mention some problems with transportation, maybe a random snippet of an earther talking about hurricanes, and we got some continuation of the multiple goblin story lines. Then next chapter we get the courier's epic journey through the Typhoon

matt emmons

Ah...it was a great chapter...well written I really enjoyed it...glad the cure made it across the sea and we got to see into some sea couriers....but i agree....the inn needs some catch up to many king and clown stories leaves me in need of the inn....and ryokas treasure needs some descriptions (wonder if she could find the lonely road again on her own)...hopefully the inn will continue on pirates return....i need coffee, bikes, skateboards, potions of youth, goblins, and treasure badly............i feel the mega storm might like a field of sage grass located over a hugely magical dungeon. Enjoy your break!

Anonymous
>>44548781

The Bloodtear Pirates are the original group and would tear apart the Raiders apart if they ever ran into each other because the raiders are using their name.

Ram nevet
>>44554237

The storm was needed to stop magical solution or else someone would have just agreed to teleport it to get it there

Ram nevet
>>44555919

people saying that the inn needs to catch up are weird to me, we had more inn this volume then any other volume bar vol 1 and the plots were rushing forward on all fronts, while things like clown were rotting for 3 volumes with 0 progress. I would like inn, but it got plenty of focus this volume

Arroww

I really hope someone can/will help Tyrion

Durzo

Well written chapter. But I felt that too many things were crammed in. Cure journey Nations confiscating the ships Magic Storm Ball Yellow flower breakthrough I think if they were broken down it would have been better. cure + confiscating + storm ball + yellow flower + inn The storm was a little surprising but it fits with the cure transport. If there was a little build up to it then it would have been even greater. The ball was completely left field for me.

Osiris

Good chapter. Laken and witches save Tyrion's sons, calling it now

Anonymous

A peculiar chapter, while the storm, and ball plotlines were not uninteresting. and resolve parts of the D and halfseeker plots. They still feel like a side court performance as the hints of the center court events from other plotlines take most of my attention. Trey arriving at Wistram, Octavia reaffirming her recent comittment to friends and allies, Saliss new strange potion for Maviola. The total disruption of trade in terandria resulting from Aliendramus’s war, for aid in which calanfear promised Veltras son Lyonette‘s hand in marriage. Even the potential interractions of the Titans students and the Inncrowd. Have a nice time off, then come back and tell us more about the fantastical world of the wandering inn! ^^

Joshua Flowers
>>44566692

I was kind of hoping to see the Druid enclave in his lands make an appearance, but they are more militant in nature so probably not.

Osiris
>>44566692

Fair point. It's kinda wild he didn't even think to reach out to them. As we've seen, Druids have an outstanding network

Stormlock

The theme of showing off high level characters continues. I do like seeing them once in a while, but when they're too common and especially when they're mentioned just in passing they start to feel less special. I liked Cognita and Feor getting a chance to flex- they're established characters and seeing a bit of what they can do is cool. Very curious about whatever Cognita attacked. Good chapter overall though, very excited about the faerie flowers and glad to see some lose threads moving forward a bit.

Osiris
>>44554237

K chapters are the meat for me. Erin's troubles seem so small compared to the greater inn-verse. I'm glad the story isn't stuck on her anymore and evolved to cater around Earthers in general.

T34Z0MB13

Wow what a ride, great chapter!!!!

Beth Rasmussen

Loved the couriers -- yes I teared up ... but I hope the Lord finds a way out of his trap. He's an ass but he'd be worse if controlled by those bastards. &gt;&lt;