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Wistram Days (Pt. 3) (Patreon)

Published:
2017-11-11 07:29:11
Imported:
2020-10

Content

SURPRISE! (10,200 Words)


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https://wanderinginn.wordpress.com/2017/11/11/wistram-days-pt-3/

Comments

John Koor

Is this going to be the last Wistram Days story? After the first one I just haven't been able to read the rest. I like the current timeline, not prequels that only tack on a bit of backstory while not advancing the main story. After looking forward to any of the current story line POVs (even brand new POVs that don't directly impact the story but at least exist in the current time frame) I feel like a kid getting only sweaters for christmas when I discover the update is Wistram or the history of the Antium. I love the Wandering Inn, it's just that they lack the fun and emotional impact of the main storyline.

Alan McBrayer

I enjoy the stories about winstram well enough, it's just that the plot pacing is glacial. I noticed the same issue to a lesser degree with the goblin POVs, you get so involved d with the minutiae of the history so that half the story is history and explanation while the other half is plot. I pretty much agree with Ceria, I don't care too much about the politics. The fact that politics leads to crappy teachers is relevant. The specific political situation behind each shitty teacher at the mage academy 4 years ago is too much detail . Your stories about the clown and the doctor on the other hand were damn near perfect when it came to content VS history VS emotional growth VS plot. That is why I tend to vote against windstorm the story is just gonna take so damn long to finish.

Devin J Russell

Heh. Loved the interplay between Pisces and Cognita. Also starting to see why the quality of magic has declined so much over the years.

pirateaba
>>8255073

Hey John, I definitely have a few more chapters planned. I'm going to finish this side story so I can offer new ones each month. However, I don't think that you'll miss anything if you decide to skip these chapters. Going to be writing in this vein for a while, but hopefully not too long!

Anonymous

Wistram is interesting enough for me, but I'm missing the old side-story setup, where some completely other story is told once per month (and wee gots it first! muahaha!), while the main plot continued unhindered. But if that's what the author needs right now, who am I to object :-) Fantastic work!

Nord

This is a weird point for me because I wanted this as a normal release rather than a bonus.