Emotion Sickness Page 09 (Patreon)

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COLOR:

The colors for page 9 of Emotion Sickness are now complete. Starfire utilizes her Tamaranean resilience to go full steam ahead without worry, although it seems to be a bit much for Raven. Robin then decides to again act on his own, which appears to further stimulate Raven.

I added a little more red for the internal shot of Starfire, which I have adjusted slightly on the previous page in the first insertion panel.

NEW LINES:

So I felt the top half of the lines were unnecessary, and didn't quite pace well after the way the previous page ended, perhaps seeming a bit repetitive when combined with how the last page was done. It also added a little bit of excess length in terms of trying to script this in the page count goal I'm aiming for, so I adjusted it accordingly by moving the latter half of the page up and redoing the bottom half.

ORIGINAL LINES:

Here are the lines for page 9 of Emotion Sickness. Starfire's Tamaranean fortitude seems to enable her to take quite a thrashing, but it appears to be a bit much for Raven to endure.

Still unsure about quite a bit in this, but I didn't want to get caught up thinking about it much longer so I may change some things later.