HS REWRITE PEER REVIEW REQUEST (Patreon)

LINK: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1d9dnOGSs2mTQvyx_UL9jmEcjO0KNrCpq

I am looking for peer review on HOMESTUCK REWRITTEN ACT 1.  If you're interested, feel free to check out this, the first draft for Act 1 in its entirety.  

What I'm looking for: 

-Comments 

-Concerns 

-Questions

-Critique  

What I'm not looking for: 

-Typo proofreading (lol)

-Telling me how you think the project sucks  

Anyone is free to comment on the document in Google Docs or in this Patreon thread!