Petticoat Junction train intermission script (Patreon)

So this is a script I've been trying to finish for eight months now. All the gray parts have long been recorded and edited. It's Part 4, pertaining to the model stuff, that is brand new and VERY long and detailed. I'm shopping this around to people to review for errors because it's a lot of stuff I didn't know about before researching further. But mostly I'm hoping it's just as interesting a story as I hope - this intermission is meant to be a century of film and TV history and I'm really proud of it so far! I honestly think it might be my best work.