Home-Bound Pitch packet (spoilers removed) (Patreon)

So I just sent the Home-Bound pitch off to a few publishers, and as I mentioned before I'm sharing it here for the curious. However, though "don't censor spoilers" won the poll, it was advised I still redact details because I added a new publisher to the list of those I was sending it to, and it seemed better to hedge my bets and remove them just in case. The original platform I was sending it to probably wouldn't have minded, but I have no idea if this'd be a no-no for the other one.

You will notice a few typos in this pitch. Yes, I sent it before I saw them. Yes, I cried on the floor after realizing that.

RIP