Bareknuckle Notes (Patreon)
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At the top is the final version of page 1. I like the idea of Brooke writing a diary about her fights, and I think you guys will like it when I reveal who the diary's for. I expect this current fight to run about ten more pages or so, making it around 30 total. Once this first story's done, I plan on taking a break from it to finish some other projects, and come back to do the next fight after the first of the year.
I like the concept of a shadowy "organization" that moves from place to place, throwing up the ring and the lights in whatever space they can find. I tested using an empty warehouse I'd picked up a few weeks back, and I'll probably save it to use on something else in the future:
SPOILERS (kinda) BEYOND THIS POINT:
I intend for part 2 to take place in this barn. Brooke's opponent will be Bobbie Fitzgibbons, a veteran fighter in her mid-40's wanting one last fight:
Part 2 will have two fights, the second will introduce Suzie Sullivan, the queen of the bareknuckle fights:
She'll show of her skills against Donna "Diamond" Cutter, Brooke's opponent in The House of Pain, my prison boxing story:
Brooke and Suzie stare each other down at the end of part 2:
Leading to part 3: