Writing style fixing (Patreon)
Published:
2023-05-26 09:58:59
Imported:
2023-06
Content
I playtested the game and identifying the problems. I can see it can cause a huge confusion.
I apologize for being a crappy writer. I think I will do this kind of style to differentiate who is actually in control of the body.
This way, people can notify me if it's out of character for both Sanako and Ayako.
Since I am planning in for Sanako is:
NTS
- She enjoying the situation of being a futa and eventually got even more horny and perverted.
- She is more to exhibitionism later on where Jack watching excites her even more.
NTR
- She started to listen every bidding of Sayako and eventually listen to her every “commands”.
- She will find the immoral and stealing other person they cares about is turning her even more rather than being a pure exhibitionism.
Ayako is:
NTS
- At first, she is a bit reluctant of having a dick and making a move on the girls. But had to go along with Sanako and Jack perversion.
- She tries to hide her perverted side but eventually, she is into more rough sex and more to dominating type. But she won’t resort to do it when it is against her own morals.
NTR
- At first, she tries to fight Sayako temptation and eventually fall to such temptation. Which leads her to cooperate with Sanako.
- She is willing to use any means necessary to make all the girl hers, seduce the girls and started to share her plans with Sanako on how to get the girls theirs.