Halloween Riff Challenge #4 (Patreon)

Patron Jared has submitted his entry for the Halloween Riff Lord Contest. 

It's in the saddest of all keys, D minor 😢, with a memorable melodic theme. There's a classical tonality that arises when he plays the raised 7th of the scale. Overall, this is an idea worth developing 

HOW TO IMPROVE:

What's your feedback for Jared? Try really syncing to the metronome to make your ideas more clear. A drum track would be even better. I can hear your melody playing in a higher register as a guitar lead. You could also make a lower register riff out of the line. Lot's of ways to restate your solid melodic idea muhahaha