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December 18, 2022

NOTE: I try to have a nice balance of plot and "plot," but it's been a while (I think) since we've had some "plot," so this chapter has a little of both.

It's 7,000 words (or an extra 2,000 over my minimum).

 

ARTWORK: I uploaded Artwork for Natalie (apparently the best picture so far, out of all of them), as well as a different outfit for Avery.

Everyone reading this should also now be able to view Michelle's picture (blue stripper outfit), so check it out!

 

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- CHAPTER 110: Sharing -

The rest of our dinner went fairly well, with the cook eventually bringing out dessert just after I finished my plate of food, the middle aged woman having been asked by Miriam to stay late, while also given specific instructions on certain expectations. Including where she was allowed to venture off to initially, since I’d arrived with a bit of a situation, only giving the woman permission to move about more freely once we were in the clear.

Essentially, once I was no longer missing an arm, and once Delilah was awake and alright.

Of course, considering that no one was using illusion spells, it was clear the woman was at least aware that there were nonhumans in the group, but that didn’t mean she was going to be privy to everything going on.

Unsurprisingly, my torn clothing, ripped along many of the seams but still technically functional, had not gone unnoticed by the somewhat plain woman, but she’d avoided eye contact with me and otherwise pretended like she didn’t notice.

No doubt she would have looked if I was fully transformed, but shockingly I was keeping that mostly under control right now.

Alternatively, when she brought out the dessert, she did seem to take notice that a certain black-haired blue-eyed guest was breathing suspiciously heavy, given that the short minx was supposedly only sitting in my lap, followed by the woman bringing around desserts to our side of the table, allowing her to also notice just how much Delilah’s leather-clad thighs were tensing as she sucked in ragged breaths.

The rest of us pretended not to notice, but I could see in her eyes that she wasn’t at all fooled.

She knew exactly what was going on.

That my cock was actually buried deep in the sexy succubus, even though we both appeared to be fully clothed.

Oh well.

Not like I particularly cared if she knew or not.

Once the cook went back to the kitchen, Delilah didn’t seem to have any interest in the big slice of cake in front of her, so I decided to feed her, enjoying it when she obediently opened her mouth for the bite, only for her to whimper when she wrapped her lips around it, fork and all, and just let her mouth flood with saliva in response to the sweet flavor.

She then finally moaned and began gently bobbing her head, prompting me to roll my eyes as I pulled the fork out of her mouth.

Miriam laughed. “Wow, your yummy cum really is like a drug. Knowing how it feels to suffer with so much passion, while being unable to get relief, versus actually seeing someone else experience it, are clearly two different things.” She smiled widely. “Watching her suffer is actually a lot of fun.”

I thought about that, realizing she was right, in the sense that she hadn’t really seen someone else try to resist. Certainly, she’d witnessed Gwen and a few others succumb to the effect, but otherwise, I’d mostly only had sex with Miriam by herself. And, out of all my women, Miriam was really the only one who occasionally tried to hold off actually having orgasms, wanting the ‘build up’ to last as long as possible.

No one else had really suffered with passion like this for so long.

“Although,” Miriam continued. “You might have to eat that cake in her mouth, because she’s just holding onto it.”

Glancing down at the trembling succubus in my arms, I realized she was right.

Delilah almost looked like she was in a passionate drugged trance, still whimpering gently as she savored the flavor of the cake I’d just put in her mouth. Which prompted me to smile, liking Miriam’s idea.

Easing up my embrace around the short blue-eyed minx, instead winding my fingers in her black hair with one hand and then cupping her cheek with the other, I made her tilt her face to the side and up to me.

I then mashed my lips against hers, causing her to whimper and moan again as I tasted the frosting in her mouth.

All of which only prompted her to finally liven in response to the intimacy of our kiss, swallowing audibly the saliva that had collected as she pushed some of the cake into my mouth with her tongue.

Fuck, Delilah was a good kisser.

I couldn’t even place my finger on exactly why, but she truly had it down to a mastered art.

Truly was in a league of her own.

And so, we passionately made-out for a few minutes as she finally started rocking incrementally on my throbbing shaft, her pulsing pussy beginning to build me up to my climax, the cake disappearing pretty quickly between the two of us sharing it. Until finally I was almost there, something she undoubtedly sensed, with her unexpectedly tensing her cervix down on my head and making it impossible for me to cum.

Fuck, suddenly I was the one in desperate need of relief, beginning to feel even more aggressive as I tugged on her hair more, her eyebrows twitching as I forced her head back.

Until finally I sucked up the rest of the passion in the air, fully recharged on magical energy at this point, and forced my orgasm to blow through the dam she’d created.

The intense ball of pleasure, caused by her, thereby turning into a tension in my balls and gut from my own efforts, and thus cumming the hardest I’d ever done for the second time in my life, instantly causing her to scream into my mouth at the intense pleasure it gave her to feel my cock pulse with such intensity.

MMMMMMMM! MMMMMMMMMMMMMM!”

Fuck, she wasn’t even climaxing herself yet.

MMMMMMMMMMMMMM!” she screamed into my mouth.

Good thing there was an eavesdropping spell, because otherwise I was sure the cook would be calling the cops right about now, concerned someone was dying in the other room. But I could hear the woman just fine in the kitchen, and she wasn’t reacting to Delilah’s muffled scream of ecstasy.

However, it was obvious the short minx’s absorption of lust was also out of control now, something that wouldn’t usually be a problem with a normal person, since she could only suck up however much lust was there.

At least, assuming she knew not to accidentally tap into their lifeforce, something I was sure she was more than practiced at avoiding.

Which meant, losing control really only became a problem when the lust she was sucking up was unending.

However, since I’d only allowed myself to produce a slightly above average amount, by not focusing too heavily on our sex, she simply got to the end of it and then cummed super hard, causing her to go limp against me, gasping for breath now with her eyes closed.

Miriam just giggled, holding up a piece of cake up to her perfect lips. “That was fun to watch. But now that she’s stuffed with your yummy cum, maybe she can be dessert. We’ll put her on the table, and take turns eating her out.” She giggled again when Delilah just whimpered. “Or actually, maybe we can make her suck on your cock while I fist her. My hands are the perfect size for it, and it’s been almost three-thousand years since I last gave her a really good fisting.”

Delilah whimpered again.

I smirked but didn’t respond, instead readjusting the trembling girl’s slightly twisted form in my right arm and then using my left to get a bite of my own piece of cake, simply enjoying the moment.

It wasn’t that I didn’t like either of those ideas that my short redhead mentioned, but now that I’d finally gotten there and had that rush of euphoric relief, combined with absorbing enough passion to fill up on magic again, I felt truly back to normal ever since everything happened.

Felt truly at peace now.

My body was healed, my magic restored, my cock satisfied, and…now that some time had passed, I felt much less uneasy about some of the decisions I’d been forced to make.

Much less miserable about the losses I’d endured.

Much less guilty about the actions that couldn’t be undone.

Which left everyone silent for a few minutes, all of them again having access to what was on my mind, except for Rebecca and Elizabeth, with Rosa at least having a general sense of my emotional state, even if she couldn’t detect specific thoughts.

But then my phone began vibrating in Natalie’s grasp, prompting her to focus on the screen to see that Joseph or Rachel was calling back.

Readjusting my hold on Delilah, having my arm wrapped firmly around her small chest as I slouched a little, so she could more comfortably rest against me, her eyes still closed as she just focused on her breathing, I then accepted the phone from Natalie and answered the call.

It was actually Joseph this time.

“Hello,” I said simply.

“Hey, sorry I missed your call,” he apologized right away. “We just got home about an hour and a half ago, and I’ve been talking to everyone.”

“It’s fine,” I replied, frowning when Delilah let out a quiet whimper, not wanting to chastise her for it, but hoping he didn’t hear.

At the moment, I didn’t feel at all awkward about the fact that my cock was still buried in the short succubus, since it wasn’t a big deal for me to compartmentalize that kind of thing in my head, but it could certainly become awkward if attention was brought to it.

I continued. “And I did talk to Rachel briefly, so it’s not like no one picked up. I actually…” I paused. “Umm, well I actually had no idea that my mom and dad, the ones who raised me, were also your parents.”

He was silent for a long few seconds. “Umm, yeah. Our father doesn’t like us to interact with each other, prior to him meeting each of us as adults. Kind of wasn’t allowed to come back home, even just to visit, once you started living there.”

“I’m really sorry,” I said sincerely. “I had no idea.”

He sighed heavily. “I know. Not your fault. I’m technically his grandson, and his direct sons get priority, so it was to be expected. Technically, you’re my uncle even though you’re younger, but father prefers we all consider each other brothers.”

“Right,” I replied. “Ms. Monroe mentioned that as well. Oh wait, if that’s the case, then who is your father?”

He sighed. “Umm, it was actually the person we had a funeral for.”

I couldn’t believe what I was hearing. “Oh shit, I’m really sorry.”

“No, don’t be,” he said seriously. “Barely knew the guy, and he was a bit of an ass. Literally only saw him like twice in my entire life. Wanted nothing to do with me.”

“And you’re thirty-seven, right? Did he die of old age?”

“Yeah, our kind is weird like that. We’ll stay young and healthy for a long time, but then we’ll just start aging one day, and we’ll grow really old within twenty or thirty years. It’s rare for us to have kids so late in life, but it happens occasionally. I was born right before he started looking old.”

“Makes sense,” I said simply.

“Yeah.” He paused. “Oh, and Rachel also said you had some news to share.”

I frowned again, noting that he left out the ‘bad’ part that I’d originally told Rachel, causing me to wonder if that’s what she told him -- that I just had ‘news,’ since it was something she specifically might consider to be ‘good news.’

I cleared my throat. “Yeah, but it’s not something we should discuss on the phone. We can talk about it when we meet up. Speaking of which, did everyone come to a decision?”

“Umm, yes.” He hesitated. “Sort of. Sarah and Emily kind of feel like it’s too good to be true, but Rachel insisted she would be the first, and they at least agreed to keep an open mind if it turns out well. Laura and Jamie trust our judgement and are fine with it.”

Elizabeth spoke up from across the table, keeping her voice low. “They’re probably afraid this is a trick, and that you’re just going to compel them.”

I nodded in acknowledgment, directing my words at Joseph. “Well, on average it’s going to be about four hours per person. Rachel can be first, and then after that it’s probably best if everyone goes at the same time.”

“Including me?” he wondered hesitantly.

I frowned as I considered his tone, wondering if he was concerned about something happening while they were all passed out.

I then sighed. “Well, that’s up to you. Once Rachel is awake, I can do everyone else, including you. Or if you want to wait, then I can do you last. It’ll just be twelve hours then, is all, instead of eight.”

“Okay.” He paused. “And, will you be bringing anyone with you?”

“Yeah, I’ll bring the girl who was with me today. And maybe one more person,” I added, initially planning on taking Delilah, but now beginning to second-guess if that was wise, wondering if it might be best to take someone else instead.

“One of your wives?” he asked hesitantly.

For half a second, I was confused why he needed the clarification, only to realize that ‘person’ could technically imply someone else, and clearly he was a bit nervous about this somehow turning into a really elaborate ploy to mess with him, like what my other brothers might do.

Without thinking, I glanced to my left at Natalie, since out of everyone, I applied the concept of ‘wife’ to her now, mainly because that’s how I’d chosen to define her in our werewolf bond. I then smiled when she gave me a pleading look, clearly wanting me to take her with me.

“Yeah, one of my wives. Rachel actually talked to her briefly when I first called. I think they’ll hit it off great, since they both seem a little bullheaded.”

Surprisingly, Joseph laughed at that. “Oh.” He chuckled some more. “Yeah, Rachel actually mentioned that too. Said one of your wives called her an ‘awesome bitch’ or something like that.”

“Something like that,” I agreed, knowing that was at least the general sentiment, even if ‘awesome’ wasn’t the word Natalie had used. “So then, given that this is going to be eight to twelve hours, is tomorrow morning an alright time to meet up?”

“Umm, yeah, that’s fine. We, umm, normally go to church, but we can skip.”

I frowned, almost automatically wanting to offer to just do it afterward, but then decided that this was a bit more important than missing a single service. Especially if Joseph did decide to go last, since us arriving at noon might mean we didn’t leave until midnight.

“Okay,” I said simply. “Then I just need you to give me a time and place. We need to do this in private, so one option is you can come to my house, or I can come to yours. I would offer a neutral location, but I don’t know of any that would give us the privacy needed.”

“Right,” he agreed. “Umm, are you fine with coming here? I can send you the address after we get off the phone.”

“Yeah, I don’t have a problem with that.”

He took a deep breath. “Okay, then is 8 AM fine, or is that too early?”

“We can aim for that time, and if I think we’re going to be running late, then I’ll just let you know.”

“Okay, great.” He took a deep breath, seemingly in relief. “And…thanks. Really, thank you.”

“You’re welcome. See you tomorrow.”

“Yeah, see you tomorrow. Bye.”

“Bye,” I replied simply, hanging up and setting my phone on the table.

Gabriella spoke up from my left. “I kind of want to go too, but I guess too many people might freak them out a little.”

I nodded, tightening my embrace on Delilah in my arms. “Yeah, sorry to not include you,” I said sincerely, sort of directing my words to both Gabriella and Delilah. “It’s just they’ve already met Serenity, and if something were to happen, then I think we can all agree that Natalie is going to be the best in a fight.”

“Yeah, and I understand that,” Gabriella agreed. “Wasn’t meaning to complain or anything.”

Miriam sighed heavily. “Well, maybe you can sleep with him tonight,” she unexpectedly offered to Gabriella, only to glance at Natalie. “Don’t want to be perceived as hogging.”

The blue-haired vixen sighed heavily on my left. “Look, I’m really sorry about what I said yesterday. I say things sometimes, and it comes off as rude, but I’m really just meaning to ask a question. I was just curious what your plans were, since we kind of need to talk about stuff like that.”

“But you were kind of right,” Miriam admitted. “I did have selfish reasons for wanting to sleep with him.”

“Yeah!” Natalie scoffed, leaning forward more. “Because you watched his heart get ripped out and were having nightmares! That’s a perfectly okay reason to want to sleep with him. I’m cool with that.”

“Yeah,” Gabriella agreed from Serenity’s other side. “I’m actually okay with it too. Especially since you can enhance his vigor or whatever.”

Miriam shrugged. “You and Rebecca are practically full-blooded succubi now, just without some of the negative aspects. I mean, Gabriella, you can even transform to look like one now. Wings and all. So it’s very likely you would have that same effect on others. It’s one of the reasons why I offered.”

Gabriella’s red eyebrows furrowed slightly as she considered that. “Oh…how would we know?”

Miriam shrugged. “Honestly, that wouldn’t be easy to test. One option is I could hire a new maid who was sick with something chronic, and see if you just hanging out with her made her healthy. I would just have to avoid her, so we could be confident that any positive effect was coming from you.”

Gabriella nodded. “Oh, okay. Yeah, I’d be fine with doing something like that.”

Miriam simply nodded, glancing up at Gwen, who likewise nodded.

“Yes mistress,” she said simply at the unspoken request to hire someone who fit that criteria.

Delilah unexpectedly spoke up. “Umm, w-what about me?” she wondered. “Where should I sleep?”

“With me,” Miriam said simply. “My bed is yours now, although tomorrow we’ll need to have a little talk about what you are, and are not, allowed to touch in my room. And if you have a lot of stuff you want to move in, then we’ll need to discuss that too.”

“O-kay,” Delilah whined, like she was being chastised for something she hadn’t even done yet.

Avery chimed in then, across from Gabriella. “Honestly, I think it’s a good idea if our man sleeps with both of you tonight. I mean, you just found out that he’s the guy you loved when you were still human. That’s kind of a big deal.”

Unexpectedly, out of nowhere, an extremely brief, but extremely intense, wave of sorrow hit me, coming from Miriam…but when I focused on her in alarm, it was already gone, with her outwardly looking like everything was perfectly fine.

The short redhead shrugged casually in response to Avery’s comment. “I admit, it would be nice.”

Not all my women had been focused on me when it happened, but Gwen, Serenity, and Michelle caught what I felt, realizing that Miriam might not be handling all this as well as she seemed. Likewise realizing that she might just be ‘doing her best’ to appear fine outwardly, hiding deep within that she was far from fine.

Far from it.

Hiding how it affected her that she’d just found out the man she loved had spent the last three-thousand years all alone, desperately searching for a way to be reunited with her, and that she hadn’t a clue all this time, having long since moved on, since she couldn’t really remember much of him to begin with, and since she even assumed he was long since dead.

Which was largely due to the curse itself.

The curse I’d apparently suffered for an unfathomable amount of time.

Growing in strength and knowledge as I sought out a way to end my suffering.

Michelle spoke up then, outwardly acting as if she was just agreeing with her daughter. “Let’s do that then. Our sweet boy can sleep with you tonight, probably tomorrow night too, and we’ll just take it one day at a time after that, okay?”

Everyone nodded in agreement.

Elizabeth finally spoke up, changing the subject entirely.

“I’m sorry to interrupt all of this, but Bethel is driving me nuts, because she wants me to ask a question.”

Gabriella spoke up again. “Is that weird having a fire spirit inside you? And do you even get along?”

Elizabeth paused, almost as if she was debating even answering the question, before sighing. “Umm, it’s not weird now. And yes, we get along.”

Serenity chimed in. “Even though you sort of captured her?”

Elizabeth shook her head. “No, it’s not exactly what you think. It’s true that I sort of captured and tamed her, but she knows she would be dead had I not done so.” She sighed. “When fire spirits are created, they die the moment their flames burn out. So, by me taming her when she was still just a beast, I basically gave her immortality.” She paused. “Well, and she gave me immortality too. But the point is, it’s more of a symbiotic relationship. So yeah, we get along great. We don’t always agree on everything, but she understands that this was originally my body, and that my decision trumps hers. However, that’s not to say I don’t respect her and what she wants.” She frowned. “Being in the same body usually means that our overall interests align for the most part.”

“Makes sense,” I commented. “So, what’s your question, Lizbeth?”

Elizabeth’s cheeks flushed at that, knowing that I was specifically talking to both of them whenever I called her by that name. “Umm…” She cleared her throat, seeming to try to gather herself. “You may not be surprised that it’s a question about your power, since she’s pretty focused on that.”

“Sure,” I said simply, squeezing Delilah a little. “Go ahead.”

She nodded, sitting up straighter. “There’s supposedly a lost magic that we read about once, and she wants to know if you can use it. Essentially, it’s a way to turn fire magic into a solid weapon. One that can cut through anything.”

My eyebrows raised at that.

Miriam chimed in, leaning forward to focus on my brunette MILF past Gwen. “I think I’ve read that somewhere once too, but I don’t think it’s a real thing.”

Elizabeth frowned. “I know, but Bethel feels like it’s a real thing. And when she felt his flames earlier today, she sensed it was a thing. I’m not sure how to explain it, but it’s like an instinct for her.”

I frowned as I considered that.

“C-Can you try?” Elizabeth pressed eagerly.

I sighed. “Yeah, I suppose so. I also need to try my fire magic on that stone anyway, to see if Rosa’s idea is correct. Which means…” I bent down to plant a tender kiss on Delilah’s temple, causing her to whimper as I gently squeezed her. “I’m afraid it’s time for you to get up, cutie. Really enjoyed being inside you though.”

“O-kay,” she whined. “B-But we can do this again tonight, right?” she pleaded.

“Yep,” I replied as she began trying to ease herself up off me, her legs a tiny bit too short to just stand up. “Try not to make a mess,” I added.

She simply whimpered with a nod, balancing on her left leg as she pulled fully off and reached down to carefully zip up her leather pants between her thighs. However, as she carefully pulled her other leather-clad leg up over, to stand on my left side next to Natalie, two things happened almost at once.

I felt an intense need from one of my other women, very close by and very unexpected, just as Delilah spoke up.

“Oh no, you’re leaking again,” the blue-eyed succubus exclaimed, immediately dropping to her knees. “Let me clean you up.”

With mouth wide open, the succubus almost engulfed my cock before I reached down to grab her head in time. “Delilah,” I said gently. “You’ve got to share a little, okay?”

“O…Okay,” she gasped, breathing heavily from being so close to her goal, but stopped short and desperately wanting to close that gap.

“Sit up please. I’ll let you go second.”

“O-Okay,” she repeated, slowly easing away and sitting on her heels.

I then looked to my right, at the deeply flushed face framed by blonde hair, seeing the desire and anxiousness in her crimson eyes.

“Go ahead Rosa,” I said gently.

Shockingly, her face flushed even more at that, unable to look at me as her hands began to tremble, only for her to reach up and tuck some of her blonde hair behind her ear, as she slowly began leaning down, aiming straight for her prize.

Delilah and Rosa both whimpered as the blonde wrapped her lips around my leaking head, her tongue rolling along the top, only for her to convulsively swallow hard as she sucked in a ragged breath through her nose.

Because she loved the taste.

She’d experienced food after spending most of her life unable to consume anything other than blood, and now, for the first time ever, she was experiencing the taste of my cum.

She loved it so much.

She wanted more.

She wanted me to cum in her mouth.

But she didn’t know what to do, in order to make it happen. Didn’t seem to know what a blowjob was, or how to do one, and when I had that realization, Delilah spoke up right away.

“Oh! I can help! Here,” she said almost urgently, reaching out to gently cup Rosa’s face. “Start by raising your head up and down like this…” She began pushing up and down on the blonde’s cheeks. “Yeah, like that. Tense your lips more, and you can use your tongue too.” Her tone became more educational sounding. “There’s lots of ways to give a blowjob. A lot of guys love it when you use your throat. Do you think you can use your throat? If not, then you can use your hand and mouth together, but…”

Without hesitation, Rosa was pushing down as far as she could, beginning to swallow as she got her nose all the way down to my skin, reflexively gulping over and over from having my head that far deep. Fuck, I could literally see a bulge in her neck.

And she just held that there for an impressively long time, her face flushed red as she repeatedly swallowed.

“Oh my God, you’re a natural,” Delilah groaned affectionately, gently stroking Rosa’s cheeks and beginning to run her fingers through the blonde’s hair. “But if you want him to cum then you have to go up and down, okay? Yeah, that’s good, just like that…” she praised, as Rosa finally pulled up about halfway and then thrust downward again. “Yeah, and now just a little bit faster. Here, let me help,” she offered, with Rosa pausing as Delilah began bunching up her hair…

Only to shove the blonde’s head downward with surprising force in her thin arms, and pull it back up, followed by shoving down again, and pulling up again, all by a ponytail, starting to pick up the pace when Rosa moaned loudly on my cock.

The roughness of Delilah’s movements, combined with the tugging on her hair, really turned sexy blonde on.

“Yeah, I know you like that, don’t you?” Delilah said affectionately. “You’re just like me. You want it rough. You want our man to fuck your throat, don’t you?” she wondered innocently, her thin arm beginning to use even more force and speed as she thrust Rosa’s face down on my cock.

But then again, maybe I shouldn’t have been surprised by Delilah’s strength, since Miriam was obviously stronger than the average woman. And definitely had a ton of endurance.

Needless to say, I hadn’t been expecting to get a blowjob out of this, but knew from my bond with the blonde vamp that she sincerely wanted this, her arousal really thick in the air now, so I was perfectly fine with letting it happen.

And I was sincerely getting close again.

Until finally, as I was reaching my climax, Delilah tugged the blonde’s head up much further, only to hold it there, even when Rosa tried to thrust downward again, unable to get far.

“Here it comes,” Delilah whispered reassuringly, giggling when Rosa yelped at my first shot. “Please don’t swallow it though. Savor the taste, okay?”

Rosa nodded urgently as she moaned from the thick cum hitting her tongue three more times.

Delilah then quickly offered more instructions, as she carefully pulled Rosa up a little higher, finally letting go of her hair, to hold her cheeks instead, beginning to lean forward.

“He said he wants us to share, okay? I taught you how to give a blowjob, so you’ll share with me, right?”

Delilah didn’t wait for a response, holding the blonde’s face tightly as she mashed their lips together, both of them moaning as the short succubus thrusted her tongue and began slurping in an attempt to get as much of my cum out of Rosa’s mouth as she could, gulping loudly and deepening the kiss even more.

Holy fuck, I was so turned on right now, and I literally just got there.

Glancing up at Elizabeth, since I’d originally been planning on trying to see if I could do this fire weapon thing, I was surprised that her face was deeply flushed, her emerald eyes lit up with little pinpricks of orange light, realizing she was aroused by what was happening right in front of her too.

Only reason why I hadn’t noticed…

Was because there were eleven women around me…

And eleven arousals filling up the room, the scent of maple syrup especially potent, between Miriam, Gabriella, Rebecca, and Delilah, to the point that it took effort to distinguish the others. But without a doubt…Elizabeth smelled like burnt marshmallows…almost exactly like the devil maid sitting next to her.

Eccentric or not, Delilah really knew how to turn everyone on.

An expert kisser, and an expert in the art of seduction.

She was making everyone super horny right now.

However, I didn’t want to get sidetracked too much until I’d taken care of certain things, so after a few minutes of really intense passionate kissing, I silently requested the two of them finish up, with Rosa being the one to pull away first, her breathing heavy, her face deeply flushed. Unsurprisingly, she obediently sat up in her seat, definitely looking drugged, whereas Delilah went straight for my cock, silently speaking to me in my head.

‘You promised I’d be second,’ she complained as she engulfed me and thrust all the way down, swallowing my head to silently gag herself…silently wishing someone really would fist her.

Natalie sighed heavily, as if in annoyance, her tone coming out almost harsh. “Ugh, fine I’ll do it,” she commented, her own arousal very potent, almost making her feel aggressive, as she reached down to feel for the zipper between Delilah’s thighs. “Little bitch wants a good fisting, so I’ll give her a fucking good fisting.”

The black-haired succubus whimpered as she began bobbing on my head urgently.

I half expected for Natalie to test the waters a little as she began shoving her fingers inside, but nope. She eased four of her fingers into Delilah’s loose cunt, and then got her thumb involved, only to begin curling her fingers right into a fist as she thrust even deeper inside.

“Oh fuck,” Natalie groaned, easing out of her chair, as she shoved even deeper. “Oh shit, this feels so good. I had no idea fisting this little bitch would feel so good.”

Miriam giggled, only to fold her wings tightly, and slip underneath the table, causing Natalie to jump slightly when she realized the redhead was right there with her now.

“H-Hey, what…” she started complaining when Miriam began easing down her pants.

Shhh,” Miriam said gently. “You took my fun, so now I’m going to fist you instead, okay?”

Natalie swallowed loudly, very nervous about being sandwiched between a pair of succubi, shoving her hand even deeper into Delilah, getting up almost to the middle of her forearm, only to gasp as Miriam likewise started to shove her fingers into the blue-haired vixen’s cunt.

“Oh God,” Natalie whimpered, the redhead likewise not taking her time, being rough with her hand. A roughness that Natalie was basically designed for.

“Yeah, now who’s a little bitch?” Miriam teased, pulling her fist out and then shoving back in even further. “Are you my good little bitch?”

Natalie whimpered in response, which prompted Delilah to whimper as she continue to bob up and down on my cock.

Reaching out to begin running my fingers through Delilah’s hair, I glanced at Serenity when I sensed that strong need coming from her too, silently giving her permission to continue the lesbian train.

As Serenity slipped out of her chair, Miriam looked back with flushed cheeks as the transformed imp began easing off the redhead’s leather shorts, only to start feeling for the short minx’s wet snatch, my brunette’s eyes fluttering as she felt Miriam’s swollen pussy lips and then started to ease her fingers inside.

Thus far, Serenity hadn’t been sexual with Miriam at all, despite the desire being present, and crossing that line for the first time was making her extremely passionate.

Gabriella didn’t even hesitate to join in, slipping out of her chair and beginning to pull up on Serenity’s dress, a wired look in her emerald eyes as she began reaching down to feel and play with my brunette’s pussy.

I was shocked by how quickly everyone was joining in.

Even more shocked when it didn’t end there.

The moment Gabriella was starting to finger the girl I’d grown up with, she immediately focused across the table at Avery briefly, the girl she was technically dating…only for her gaze to shift to Michelle instead, the mature woman she’d been fucking.

My mature blonde MILF stood up, and began walking around the table, moving past us and then kneeling behind Gabriella to ease her pants down and start fingering her as well while planting tender kisses on the back of her neck, my busty redhead moaning loudly now as she got her whole hand inside Serenity.

Avery was trembling as she watched, only to yelp quietly as Mrs. Rebecca scooted over a seat and pulled my blonde classmate into a passionate kiss, reaching down underneath her pants to begin feeling her up, the two of them beginning to make-out on their own.

Focusing on Elizabeth, she gulped loudly, glancing up at Gwen hesitantly, prompting the maid to speak up quietly.

“My body can get very hot when I’m aroused,” she whispered.

Elizabeth visibly swallowed. “Umm…I can…handle a lot of heat.”

Gwen simply nodded, and leaned toward my brunette MILF to gently press their lips together, slowly starting to kiss and explore each other’s bodies.

Holy fuck.

This had gone from ‘we’re done for now,’ to ‘everyone being involved’ in barely a minute.

The only one not currently engaged in an act of passion was Rosa, though her face was deeply flushed as she watched Delilah go down on me, as if she was silently taking notes for the next time she gave me a blowjob.

I then focused on Avery and Rebecca as my classmate began easing her hand into the mature MILF’s pants, both of them now fingering each other as they passionately kissed, with Avery whimpering at the realization that I was watching. She was extremely turned on by the awareness that I was aroused by the fact that this pairing was determined by sex itself, rather than companionship. That I loved the fact that Avery was technically dating Gabriella, but had been claimed by Rebecca sexually as her sex pet.

And that I loved the fact that Michelle was leaning over Gabriella just across from them, her hand buried deep inside the busty redhead as the blonde MILF grasped at the younger woman’s tits and tenderly kissed the back of Gabriella’s neck.

Delilah was mostly focused on my cock, and Miriam was mostly focused on me and her friend, even though she was fisting Natalie.

Alternatively, Natalie was heavily focused on being fisted by Miriam, Serenity was focused on being the one to fist Miriam, and both women were turned on by the fact that Miriam herself wasn’t paying either of them much attention even as they grew more passionate.

To the point that Natalie leaned down more to kiss Delilah’s lower back as she fisted the blue-eyed succubus, the short minx’s midnight tail wrapping around her neck, while Serenity almost simultaneously began licking Miriam’s ass, the latter of whom noticed what Delilah had done, and likewise wrapped her tail around Serenity’s neck.

All while Michelle and Gabriella were more focused on each other, even though my busty fiancé had her hand buried in Serenity.

Fuck, it was so fucking hot.

This was the first time we’d all done something together like this, and watching how the groupings formed, both isolated in their own passion, while still involved with everyone else, all just turned me on so much.

I didn’t even want to get there.

I just wanted to watch all of them get there.

But, Delilah was truly amazing with her mouth, and before long I was climbing that peak of my own climax.

I wasn’t the first to cum though.

Gabriella got there first, followed by Natalie, and then Serenity.

Then Avery got there as Mrs. Rebecca fingered her, followed by me as I watched my redhead MILF pleasure my classmate. Locked eyes with Avery as she got there right before I did.

Delilah whimpered as I pumped hot sticky cum into her mouth, only for her to gulp it down loudly, really trembling now as Miriam shoved her wet fist into Delilah, since Natalie needed a second to recover, fisting urgently until the blue-eyed succubus was moaning loudly on my cock as she got there too.

Which only left Miriam, Michelle, and Rebecca, along with Elizabeth and Gwen, and of course Rosa.

However, all four of the older women, specifically the ones I considered MILFs, seemed perfectly satisfied at just having experienced the intimacy, Miriam with a warm smirk on her face as she pulled her hand out of Delilah’s cunt, beginning to lick it clean, even as Serenity finally pulled her fist out of the short redhead.

Michelle and Gabriella, along with Avery and Rebecca, continued to kiss, but it seemed obvious my MILFs weren’t aiming to get there themselves right now.

And similarly, Gwen and Elizabeth pecked each other one last time, before exchanging a hug and then sitting in their own seats, focused on me with warm expressions.

That really only left one individual sincerely wanting to get there right now, her face flushed red from the effect of my cum.

Thus, as Delilah eased off and gave Miriam a big hug, I silently gave some instructions for Rosa.

She immediately whimpered as she stood up and began unbuttoning her jeans, slipping them down in front of everyone without hesitation, and then carefully stepping over my lap facing me, her skinny thighs extremely pale, and sinking right down on my cock as she wrapped her arms desperately around my neck, burying her face against me.

“It’s okay,” I said gently as she started moving before I knew she was ready. “Take your time. This is for you right now.”

Rosa whimpered at that, squeezing her arms around my neck tighter as she focused on her breathing, her entire world having shrunk down to this intimacy shared between the two of us, as if there was no one else in the room right now, the warmth of my cock inside of her sending waves of pleasure throughout her body. Then, once she was ready, she slowly began easing up and down, even the tiniest movement unfathomably intense for her, causing her to whimper with each motion.

“Good girl,” I whispered, slowly reaching underneath her shirt to feel her smooth back. “Take your time. Everyone’s watching you now, and they want to see you enjoy my cock, okay?”

She whimpered at that, trembling at the thought, her world growing a little larger clearly loving the idea, her breathing now heavier as her thrusting became more confident each time.

And truly, everyone was watching now, with Avery and Rebecca still holding hands, but focused on what we were doing, and with Miriam and Delilah now hugging, but both their heads turned our way to see what Rosa was doing.

Michelle was also watching, and while Gabriella was licking off the blonde MILF’s hand, she at least was listening to the blonde vamp whimper.

The moment already felt really special at this point, but there was one thing that made it extra special.

I could see into the minds of eight of my ten other women, not counting Rosa, and what I saw made me really warm inside.

Because unanimously, they were all in agreement.

They all felt happy for the girl riding on my cock.

They all felt happy, for Rosa.

And that made her orgasm all the more special, as she quietly whimpered when she got there.

 

FEEDBACK: Thoughts on this chapter? Obviously a good portion of it was dedicated to sexy stuff, but there was some regular plot covered too (fire weapon, scheduling meeting with Joseph and his family, etc.).

Main thing here though is the more 'official' inclusion of Rosa.

 

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Comments

NaxiousGames

CHOO CHOO ALL ABOARD THE FIST TRAIN

gezuvor

Love the progression on IDH (and CH), but would like to make a selfish request: could you add a link to each chapter that brings up a cast of characters list? With the current headcount, in both stories, it’s tough to remember who all the women are!

Edward Collins

A couple of things. First, I agree with Jake Thomas with there being pacing problems. This chapter is fine if it weren't for the fact that the next chapter (for this level) doesn't come out for another 2 weeks. If you could read the entire book at once, then there wouldn't BE pacing problems (like this, atleast, I've seen comments on how slow the story is. It's over a hundred chapters, and yet hasn't - or just barely - covered a week of Kai's life). Second, there are 2 things I want/need to see. First is a question I've been wondering about. WHY was Michelle so sensitive to that rock? The second plot point that needs to be addressed is how Kai feels about Miriam/Delilah and Gabriella/Avery/Serenity. That relationship reminds me of the Nameless One's relationship with Dionairra/Annah/Fall-From-Grace, or how the Knight-Captain from NWN2 Mask of the Betrayer feels about Safyia and her mother. They all lived "prior" lives (how they got to their current "life" is different in each case). Kai himself loves the latter 3, while the being who became Kai loves the former 2. I want to see how Kai resolves that relationship, assuming he's even figured that out.

KaizerWolf (edited)

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2023-05-21 14:04:45 &gt; If you could read the entire book at once, then there wouldn't BE pacing problems Easy solution. Just wait for the book releases then, instead of complaining on here where you are reading a work-in-progress that takes a lot of time to create. It takes 20 to 30 hours just to write ONE chapter, and I've established a 'real-time' pacing since the very beginning for this particular story. 'Real-time' as in it's similar to a 'soap opera,' or the the TV show called '24,' where 1 hour of screen time is 1 hour in their world. Similarly, when you actually read this story, it's at a pace that it takes about 15 chapters for 1 day to pass (aka, 1 hour per 1 chapter, not counting sleeping). I realize that it sucks that you have to wait for the next chapter, but I can only write so quickly. I don't have 60 hours a week to crank out more content for you (which would just burn me out, even if I tried, because 'creativity' is very taxing on the mind). And there's a reason I set the pacing how it is, so I'm also not changing that. You have to understand that these are advanced chapters. As in, you're getting to read stuff before I actually publish it as a book, where the 'pacing' is, as you said, less of a problem. Also, not all my stories have this pacing. In Wolfgirl's Pet Witch, a good month has passed after only 8 chapters. And in Combat Healer, while the pacing is only a little bit faster than IDH, the story also isn't 'slice-of-life,' which means there are not really any downtimes in the plot, and it's just action-action-action from chapter to chapter. Alternatively, this IDH story IS 'slice-of-life' so I balance relationship-building with action/plot progression. Some people actually request these chapters, and wish that the relationship building aspect would happen more often. They are reading this story mainly for the relationships, with the plot advancement just being a bonus. Second, I appreciate you sharing what you'd like to see, as I do listen to that kind of feedback, and keep that kind of thing in mind when I'm writing, but this story is inherently a 'mystery,' and so things get revealed in steps. In particular, the answer to your question will be heavily hinted at in the next chapter I'm writing (which will be Ch 118), but you will just have to be patient, as I'm not going to just dump all the answers just because someone asks. The only reason I'm bringing that up is because 'how you worded' your comment sounds very demanding, and this isn't the place to come demanding anything of me. Suggestions are fine, but I'm not your employee or servant. If you want to pay me $20 an hour to write for you, then that's a different story, but you need to understand that the average waitress makes more in tips in 1 hour of work, than what it cost you to join to support me for an entire month. Maybe I'm just having a bad day, and things are rubbing me the wrong way, just in general, but your comment definitely rubbed me the wrong way. Third, as to the second plot point you are mentioning, I think I understand your point, but I honestly do not know what you are referencing, and I'm not sure if it's common enough knowledge for the average person to know. For that reason, it would be helpful if you could write out what these references are from. The abbreviation, NWN2, for example, is something I had to Google, and the only reason I think it might be a game is because I also Googled 'Knight-Captain' with it, and had some results come up that looked like a match. But when you say you want Kai to 'resolve that relationship,' I'm not sure what you mean, given where we are in the story. Like, they've now realized that Kai is essentially a reincarnation of the man they loved, so I don't know what more would 'resolve that relationship.' He is going to start having flashbacks/memories, but I'm not sure how that would help their relationships out. I want to ask 'clarification questions' like 'Do you mean this?' but I can't even think of one question to try clarifying, because I just don't know what you mean. At the end of the day, I appreciate feedback, but please be mindful how you word things. Negativity, in particular, is a problem for me. It hinders creativity, makes it difficult to write, and so I typically avoid negativity.
2023-02-27 22:19:01 > If you could read the entire book at once, then there wouldn't BE pacing problems Easy solution. Just wait for the book releases then, instead of complaining on here where you are reading a work-in-progress that takes a lot of time to create. It takes 20 to 30 hours just to write ONE chapter, and I've established a 'real-time' pacing since the very beginning for this particular story. 'Real-time' as in it's similar to a 'soap opera,' or the the TV show called '24,' where 1 hour of screen time is 1 hour in their world. Similarly, when you actually read this story, it's at a pace that it takes about 15 chapters for 1 day to pass (aka, 1 hour per 1 chapter, not counting sleeping). I realize that it sucks that you have to wait for the next chapter, but I can only write so quickly. I don't have 60 hours a week to crank out more content for you (which would just burn me out, even if I tried, because 'creativity' is very taxing on the mind). And there's a reason I set the pacing how it is, so I'm also not changing that. You have to understand that these are advanced chapters. As in, you're getting to read stuff before I actually publish it as a book, where the 'pacing' is, as you said, less of a problem. Also, not all my stories have this pacing. In Wolfgirl's Pet Witch, a good month has passed after only 8 chapters. And in Combat Healer, while the pacing is only a little bit faster than IDH, the story also isn't 'slice-of-life,' which means there are not really any downtimes in the plot, and it's just action-action-action from chapter to chapter. Alternatively, this IDH story IS 'slice-of-life' so I balance relationship-building with action/plot progression. Some people actually request these chapters, and wish that the relationship building aspect would happen more often. They are reading this story mainly for the relationships, with the plot advancement just being a bonus. Second, I appreciate you sharing what you'd like to see, as I do listen to that kind of feedback, and keep that kind of thing in mind when I'm writing, but this story is inherently a 'mystery,' and so things get revealed in steps. In particular, the answer to your question will be heavily hinted at in the next chapter I'm writing (which will be Ch 118), but you will just have to be patient, as I'm not going to just dump all the answers just because someone asks. The only reason I'm bringing that up is because 'how you worded' your comment sounds very demanding, and this isn't the place to come demanding anything of me. Suggestions are fine, but I'm not your employee or servant. If you want to pay me $20 an hour to write for you, then that's a different story, but you need to understand that the average waitress makes more in tips in 1 hour of work, than what it cost you to join to support me for an entire month. Maybe I'm just having a bad day, and things are rubbing me the wrong way, just in general, but your comment definitely rubbed me the wrong way. Third, as to the second plot point you are mentioning, I think I understand your point, but I honestly do not know what you are referencing, and I'm not sure if it's common enough knowledge for the average person to know. For that reason, it would be helpful if you could write out what these references are from. The abbreviation, NWN2, for example, is something I had to Google, and the only reason I think it might be a game is because I also Googled 'Knight-Captain' with it, and had some results come up that looked like a match. But when you say you want Kai to 'resolve that relationship,' I'm not sure what you mean, given where we are in the story. Like, they've now realized that Kai is essentially a reincarnation of the man they loved, so I don't know what more would 'resolve that relationship.' He is going to start having flashbacks/memories, but I'm not sure how that would help their relationships out. I want to ask 'clarification questions' like 'Do you mean this?' but I can't even think of one question to try clarifying, because I just don't know what you mean. At the end of the day, I appreciate feedback, but please be mindful how you word things. Negativity, in particular, is a problem for me. It hinders creativity, makes it difficult to write, and so I typically avoid negativity.

> If you could read the entire book at once, then there wouldn't BE pacing problems Easy solution. Just wait for the book releases then, instead of complaining on here where you are reading a work-in-progress that takes a lot of time to create. It takes 20 to 30 hours just to write ONE chapter, and I've established a 'real-time' pacing since the very beginning for this particular story. 'Real-time' as in it's similar to a 'soap opera,' or the the TV show called '24,' where 1 hour of screen time is 1 hour in their world. Similarly, when you actually read this story, it's at a pace that it takes about 15 chapters for 1 day to pass (aka, 1 hour per 1 chapter, not counting sleeping). I realize that it sucks that you have to wait for the next chapter, but I can only write so quickly. I don't have 60 hours a week to crank out more content for you (which would just burn me out, even if I tried, because 'creativity' is very taxing on the mind). And there's a reason I set the pacing how it is, so I'm also not changing that. You have to understand that these are advanced chapters. As in, you're getting to read stuff before I actually publish it as a book, where the 'pacing' is, as you said, less of a problem. Also, not all my stories have this pacing. In Wolfgirl's Pet Witch, a good month has passed after only 8 chapters. And in Combat Healer, while the pacing is only a little bit faster than IDH, the story also isn't 'slice-of-life,' which means there are not really any downtimes in the plot, and it's just action-action-action from chapter to chapter. Alternatively, this IDH story IS 'slice-of-life' so I balance relationship-building with action/plot progression. Some people actually request these chapters, and wish that the relationship building aspect would happen more often. They are reading this story mainly for the relationships, with the plot advancement just being a bonus. Second, I appreciate you sharing what you'd like to see, as I do listen to that kind of feedback, and keep that kind of thing in mind when I'm writing, but this story is inherently a 'mystery,' and so things get revealed in steps. In particular, the answer to your question will be heavily hinted at in the next chapter I'm writing (which will be Ch 118), but you will just have to be patient, as I'm not going to just dump all the answers just because someone asks. The only reason I'm bringing that up is because 'how you worded' your comment sounds very demanding, and this isn't the place to come demanding anything of me. Suggestions are fine, but I'm not your employee or servant. If you want to pay me $20 an hour to write for you, then that's a different story, but you need to understand that the average waitress makes more in tips in 1 hour of work, than what it cost you to join to support me for an entire month. Maybe I'm just having a bad day, and things are rubbing me the wrong way, just in general, but your comment definitely rubbed me the wrong way. Third, as to the second plot point you are mentioning, I think I understand your point, but I honestly do not know what you are referencing, and I'm not sure if it's common enough knowledge for the average person to know. For that reason, it would be helpful if you could write out what these references are from. The abbreviation, NWN2, for example, is something I had to Google, and the only reason I think it might be a game is because I also Googled 'Knight-Captain' with it, and had some results come up that looked like a match. But when you say you want Kai to 'resolve that relationship,' I'm not sure what you mean, given where we are in the story. Like, they've now realized that Kai is essentially a reincarnation of the man they loved, so I don't know what more would 'resolve that relationship.' He is going to start having flashbacks/memories, but I'm not sure how that would help their relationships out. I want to ask 'clarification questions' like 'Do you mean this?' but I can't even think of one question to try clarifying, because I just don't know what you mean. At the end of the day, I appreciate feedback, but please be mindful how you word things. Negativity, in particular, is a problem for me. It hinders creativity, makes it difficult to write, and so I typically avoid negativity.

Edward Collins

I'm sorry if I sounded negative, that wasn't my intent. I was just agreeing with pacing problems which don't happen when you can read the entire thing at once. I'm a new subscriber, because I wanted to continue the story. You deserve major props for continuing the story when you could just quit. So many other authors have created wonderful stories, then quit half way through leaving the audience hanging for more. Thank you. Innocent Devil's Harem is a story that could have started small, but grown to be a masterpiece. There are erotic stories out there that I read because they tell a story. I may have started wanting session, but the story, plot, and/or characters (I say and/or characters because I'm beta reading a story that I hate all the characters, but the story is interesting enough for me to get over it) make it much more. I apologize for the confusion about NWN2. I guess you figured out it's a game called Neverwinter Nights 2. I didn't want to spoil anything for the game just in case on the small off-chance there are people who might want to play it here. I am VERY guarded with story spoilers in general. If I mention this work somewhere else, I am just as careful about revealing spoilers for THIS story, even if the other person has no intention of reading your story. The other game I referenced is Planescape Torment (in my opinion, one of the greatest games ever written). As far as "resolving the relationships" between Delilah and Miriam and Serenity, Gabriella, and Avery, what I meant is that the being that Kai once was loves the first 2. Would Kai feel the same way about them if they weren't lovers of the being that became Kai? My question( or observation or whatever) is before Miriam came into Kai's life, it was Serenity and Gabriella being Kai's loves, with Avery growing into a third of Kai's loves. I'm just seeing something where Serenity and Gabriella could become less important to Kai because the part of Kai that loves Miriam and Delilah takes over. Maybe not quite like that, but Kai and Miriam keep talking about being soulmates, and I'm just wondering if that status isn't just because they have a symbiotic relationship (Kai can provide all the lust not one but 2 - maybe even more - succubi needs, and they provide the passion Kai needs. I would love to see a line where Miriam has to chastise herself from overindulging with Kai and says something like "If I keep forgetting how much lust you have and try to eat it all, you'll have Miriam guts all over you"), but because Kai's original incarnation was their soulmates. But KAI'S soulmates are the latter 3, atleast to me. Sorry about the wall of text, but there were a few things I wanted to say. And in regards to my first question about Michelle being sensitive to the black rock, I wasn't asking for spoilers, I was just asking if you had something planned for it, since it seems like it's been almost forgotten in all the rest of the story. You said that answers are coming, and that's fine with me.

Edward Collins

To sum up the last half of my last post, is it Kai who loves Delilah and Miriam, or the being that became Kai? And how does that affect Kai's love for Serenity, Gabriella, and Avery?

KaizerWolf

Honestly, I think I was just having a bad day, and your comment rubbed me the wrong way at a bad time, so sorry if my comment sounded overly harsh. A lot of people don't seem to understand how much work goes into this, and try to act like they're owed something special by them giving me the equivalent of 1 cent per hour of my time, and it's frustrating simply because it is so much work. I appreciate the praise, but honestly the main reason why this story has continued for this long is because I've had loyal supporters who have stuck with me for years now (started this story in August 2020, basically 2.5 years ago, and quite a few have been with me longer than a year). They've been a big factor into it continuing. As to the 'past Kai vs present Kai,' thanks for clarifying. That makes a lot more sense, and honestly, I think you're the first person to even consider that (it's something I've been debating for a while now, whether or not the body 'old Kai' reincarnated into had a soul, or if it was soulless -- as in, did one 'old' person gain a new body, or did one 'old' person MERGE WITH a 'new' person, and create a new entity that is a combination of a brand new soul and an old soul). I 'think' that's sort of what you're getting at. And I still haven't decided which way I want to go with that yet. It technically doesn't affect the plot much, but could have implications for the women (and how they feel about it).

Jake Thomas

As hot as this chapter was. I was kinda hoping for further plot development. It sometimes feels like we get chapters where nothing at all happens and the momentum that has built up over previous chapters suddenly dies. Don't get me wrong, the whole Kai dad situation was cool and i enjoyed it. Then the reveal of Kai identity. But then we come to this. Internal monologues and sex. Just feels like this was a wasted chapter. Again, I still enjoyed it. Just hoped for more story is all.

KaizerWolf

That's why I have to find a balance. There are some who wish there were more chapters like this, hence I have to balance it out between plot and "plot" (there's a lot more regular plot going on compared to chapters like this). In particular, there are some who have been waiting a long time for everyone to be involved like this. Even if you felt like this was a wasted chapter, we do have character development (for real, not just sexy stuff), and it sets up events that are going to happen in the next few chapter (which will be regular plot progression).

Jake Thomas

I know. Can't please everyone. No criticism to you. I like the sexy stuff just fine. Just felt like we were building momentum with the last few chapters and then it stagnated and was put off to one side for the next chapter. Still love the story and your writing though.

Termac

I was kind of hoping for a little more plot advancement than this, but I'm also not disappointed in the slightest. This was a fun, cozy chapter, and not only did it include sexy times, it also developed a bunch of the characters a bit more. For example, we learned a bit more about Rosa's preferences, and the rest of Joseph's harem was introduced.

Pedro Comenda

can't say im Surprised by the outcome but i was hoping for a little more info before everyone succumbed to the power of sex. overall another great chapter.

Termac

I feel like "stagnated" isn't the right word. As I see it, the conflict was resolved for now, (if a bit more abruptly than we might have expected) and it was time for some calmer, slower, slice-of-life type chapters. Just as a song can have fast and slow parts, loud and soft parts, a story should have more intense and less intense. It shouldn't just be fast-paced, intense, high stakes, all the time. Stories that do that end up *needing* to constantly raise the stakes to ever more absurd levels, in order to keep the readers feeling like the outcomes matter at all.

Jake Thomas

I agree with you. "Halted" is a better word. I still enjoy the slice-of-life aspects that we see in this and prior chapters. It just kinda reminds of TSM. We get teased and hinted at. But then something else comes up and the reveal is pushed back or aside. Which is basically story telling in general. Just we're 100+ chapters in and in the grand scheme of things little time has actually past in the story. And we only now know Kai identity. If I was Kai I'd want to explore that, and delve deeper with the stone or discuss Elizabeth mention of the flame-sword-thing. Only now we may get that in the next chapter. Regardless of my desire for the story to progess more fully I still enjoyed the chapter, though Kai needs more time with his "MILFs"

Jon Van Meter

Wonderfully done recovery chapter. I appreciate that you have gotten Lizbeth involved, even if not directly. Rosa being brought along slowly and taught by an expert was a wonderful touch. Natalie is such a badass and so willing. I'm still wondering about the man she killed and how he was connected to Kai's father. This is a great resolution to Miriam's broken heart and the difference between her and Delilah is a lot of fun. Thank you again for this.

KaizerWolf

&gt; This is a great resolution to Miriam's broken heart Well...unfortunately, I can't say that's exactly true just yet.

J Bone

Great Harem bonding chapter

Aaron Floyed

Loved it, except you mixed Miriam and Natalie up at the end there. Natalie had her fist in Delilah and Miriam had her fist in Natalie and you have it with Miriam easing her fist out of Delilah when Kai cums at the end

KaizerWolf

I might have to clarify that Natalie and Miriam switched then, because: &gt; ...really trembling now as Miriam shoved her wet fist into Delilah, "since Natalie needed a second to recover," fisting urgently until the blue-eyed succubus was moaning loudly on my cock as she got there too. I was implying that once Natalie got there, she needed a second, and Miriam switched as Natalie basically sat down to watch. But yeah, I'll probably have to go back and clarify that.

Keepit simple

Just want to say thanks for inviting us into your world KW. So much bad stuff going on in "real" world and nice to have an escape to one you have created. Appreciate you trying to keep Kia centered on strong will of doing well for/to others. Keep up the great writing and Merry Christmas to you and yours!

Christopher Miller

Seconded. I genuinely enjoyed this chapter. I've been anticipating an orgy encounter since about chapter 20, so YAY!

Christopher Miller

Oh, and while I think about it, what is the big wolf bringing us for Christmas? Another installment of IDH, CH or Werewolf Queen?