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January 2, 2022

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<< Chapter 69 | Ch 1 (Book1) | Ch 16 (Book 2) | Ch 31 (Book 3) | Ch 46 (Book 4) | Ch 61 (Book 5)

 

- CHAPTER 70: Touching Base -

 

Now that the blonde vamp would be fine after drinking some of my blood, I had my own thirsts to deal with, since I’d been injured several times now and had my own cravings for the thick crimson fluid. But thankfully, I could satiate the desire with animal blood.

Having risen to my feet, now standing up in the middle of the bathroom, with the short Miriam and busty Gabriella on either side of the blonde vampire on her hands and knees, I focused on Serenity who was still sitting next to where I’d just been.

Reaching down to help her to her feet, knowing she wanted to come with me outside, I went ahead and began heading to the bathroom exit, giving Miriam a simple nod, only for the blonde to speak up urgently, her voice having a thick accent, even though her words were perfectly clear.

“Wait!” she exclaimed, prompting me to glance back at her. “I am…I am so sorry,” she said with a gulp, staring at my neck, clearly seeing that the damage she’d done was already healed.

I shrugged. “I offered my blood willingly. Nothing to be sorry about.”

Her expression pained as she glanced at Miriam, her accent thick. “This…umm…ailment. Is what killed so many. Everyone began dying, and the assault began soon after. Signor Lucius believed it to be a…coup d'etat. But he believed we escaped the ailment.”

Miriam nodded. “We can talk about it more later. But as we’ve just discovered, it looks like both of you were ticking bombs. The moment you ingested blood, the curse would have activated. You’re lucky my maid’s blood is dangerous to your kind, and that it never made it past your mouth.”

The girl immediately grimaced and looked down, her voice quiet. “I am so sorry. We had not drank for many weeks. Signor Lucius demanded I should consume a little. I didn’t want to, but I was so thirsty. I am so very sorry.”

Miriam shrugged. “What’s done is done. And you have been forgiven.”

The blonde’s expression pained and she ducked her head at that, tears forming in her crimson eyes again. My best guess was that ‘being forgiven,’ in particular, really hit home for her.

But I didn’t focus on it long, realizing it was truly time for me to go hunting, because my own craving for blood was getting worse, and I definitely didn’t want to sample any of Miriam’s blood. Just the very idea kind of scared me a little, because she smelled so good as it was, and her blood had that same scent.

I felt confident it would be like tasting candy, and I was already well aware that those like me could lose consciousness and attack anyone nearby without meaning to. After all, that was how we found out Gabriella was different, when she attacked Serenity. And the last thing I needed was for my body to learn to target Miriam of all people, by having first-hand experience with tasting her blood.

Just the idea was disturbing and unforgivable.

Thus, while holding Serenity’s hand, I went ahead and began leading her back through the guest bedroom and into the hallway, just in time to give Gwen a small smile in passing as we made our way downstairs. In the meantime, I heard Miriam finally ask the girl what her name was.

“Serafina Rosana de Luca Casella, ma’am.”

“Serafina, then?” Miriam wondered. “Or Sera?”

“Umm, I have a preference for Rosa, ma’am.”

“That’s fine,” Miriam replied reassuringly. “Well then, Rosa. After we get this mess mostly cleaned up, I’ll ask that you shower and change your clothing. Then we can talk.”

“Yes, ma’am. I…I am so sorry.”

“I’ll accept your obedience as apology. Do as I ask, and we won’t have any problems.”

“I…I understand, ma’am.”

Once Serenity and I got outside, I finally gave her most of my attention when she spoke up quietly, still holding onto my hand. The crate rested undisturbed where Miriam and I had set it on the porch, so I ignored it for now.

“How are you holding up?” she wondered softly, her tone laced with concern.

I took a deep breath. “I’m okay, considering all that’s happened.”

She nodded.

“And how are you?” I wondered.

She sighed, still holding my hand, but grabbing onto my arm too, pulling herself closer. “There were several times tonight that I thought you were going to die. Thought we were all going to die.” She grimaced. “Please don’t let anyone bite your neck like that again. I know you can heal fast, but…” Her voice trailed off.

“Sorry,” I said sincerely. “I didn’t even consider how scary that would be for you.”

“You didn’t see her face, Kai. In a weird way, she was almost more scary than those werewolves.”

“Really?” I said skeptically. “Because those grinning deformed faces were pretty creepy.”

She grimaced as we continued walking past the rear gate and through the trees, with the forest just as noisy as ever, as if there hadn’t been a huge massacre of monsters not long ago. “I guess you’re right,” she agreed. “It’s just, their faces almost didn’t feel like real life, in a strange way. Like, they looked so bizarre that it almost felt like they could have come from some fake movie, made up with CGI or something. But that girl’s face…” Her voice trailed off.

“Felt more real,” I assumed. “Especially close up.”

“Yes,” she whispered.

I nodded, deciding I should probably try to change the mood and get her mind off it.

Unlike me, who was shirtless at this point and wearing black gym shorts, Serenity had never changed from our date at the mall the previous morning. Thus, she was wearing the same faded skinny jeans that made her ass look amazing, along with the black blouse-like shirt that was made of a stretchy material sort of like spandex, feeling very smooth to the touch. The buttons only went up to the middle of her chest, exposing quite a bit of cleavage, which I focused on now, as I reached over with my free hand to cup her plump C-cup breast.

She looked up at me in alarm, only for her face to begin flushing. “K-Kai!” she exclaimed.

I laughed at that. “We literally had sex in a mall restroom, never mind the time in the recliner while everyone was listening, and then in your bed before that…” My voice trailed off as I grinned wider at her flushed expression, her skin turning a medium gray now. “Still not used to the change, huh?”

She held onto my arm tighter, squishing her tits against me. “So much is different,” she admitted. “And in such a short period of time. I’m so happy we’ve crossed that line, but I’m just so ready to get back to a normal routine. Ready for these crazy problems to go away.”

I sighed. “Well, that serial killer guy is definitely gone for good, and we didn’t even know that this werewolf bastard actually led to an even bigger problem, but even the main leader is taken care of.” I took a deep breath, my tone becoming more lighthearted. “So yeah, hopefully we can finally relax and deal with more normal stuff, like where everyone’s going to sleep.”

She smiled slightly at that.

“Thank you, by the way,” I said seriously.

“For what?” she wondered, her deep brown eyes endearing, but also a little confused.

I shrugged. “Just for everything. For wanting me. For being okay with this situation with me needing to be with multiple women.” I sighed. “Just everything.”

“Of course, baby,” she replied seriously. “Like, I don’t think you realize how important you are to me. You are all I’ve had to live for ever since we started living on our own. I just want to see you happy, and I want to be a part of that happiness.”

“Me too,” I replied warmly, only to smirk again. “And wow, that game all of you decided to play made me extremely happy. I kind of wish we could do it every day.”

She seemed amused, a small smirk tugging on her full pink lips. “I mean, I suppose we could. It might lose its novelty after a few times though.”

I grinned. “Well, that’s where you could mix it up. Always leave me guessing which two are going to sit in the recliner with me.” I paused. “We would just need to get Avery involved, is all, to make it harder for me to anticipate what all of you are planning.”

Serenity continued to smile as she considered that. “Okay. And how open are you to us experimenting a little with surprising you?”

I lowered my voice a bit. “Like what?” I wondered, also slowing down a little to walk more quietly, since I didn’t want to spook any deer in the distance.

She took my lead as she responded, her voice almost a whisper. “Well, Gabriella pretty much made it clear that it was going to be difficult to match what Miriam can offer sexually. And after meeting her, I realize now how true that is.”

I frowned at that. “Well, just so you know, while she is amazing, sex isn’t everything. No one could ever replace you, Ren.”

She gave me an affectionate smile. “That makes me really happy to hear, baby. But still, Gabriella is convinced that sex with all of us involved at the same time is going to be a thing.”

I tried not to grin.

On the one hand, of course my busty redhead was going to push for that, because I was sure it was what she wanted too, but on the other hand, it really was what I wanted as well. And…I suspected that Serenity was interested in the idea too, but just felt more embarrassed to openly admit and discuss it.

“I wouldlike that,” I admitted.

Her face flushed slightly, only for her to clear her throat softly. “So then, you’re okay with us doing whatever to surprise you?”

I nodded. “Yeah, as long as it’s just between the five of us, that’s perfectly fine with me.”

She nodded. “And, by five of us, you mean me, Gabriella, Michelle, Avery, and of course yourself, correct?”

I frowned. “Well, yeah. Why?”

“Well, you’re sort of with Miriam and Gwen too. And I guess now Natalie as well.”

“Oh,” I said in surprise, especially at that last part. “I think that if Natalie wants to be involved, then that’s okay, but I’m not planning on it. But if we’re talking about surprises here, then I don’t think I want to be surprised when it involves Miriam. I’d rather just know.”

She nodded with a small frown. “I really am sorry about what I said earlier. I don’t…I don’t know why I feel like that.”

“About her being your mistress?” I assumed.

She grimaced. “I wasn’t going to say anything, but then she sort of pulled it out of me.”

“Well, that’s okay. It’s like she said, choice still matters. And it’s probably because she and I are sort of connected in a weird way now.” I paused. “I hope that doesn’t bother you.”

She shook her head. “I mean, it’s something we can’t really control, by the sound of it, and if she’s the reason why you didn’t die the other day, because you clung to her soul or whatever, then I definitely don’t care.”

I smiled, my tone affectionate. “Love you, Ren.”

“Love you too, baby. So much,” she said sincerely, hugging my arm tighter. “And we’ll try to make sure every night is exciting for you.”

“Shouldn’t be too hard,” I said reassuringly. “Just mixing it up should be enough. Although, I should probably go on a date with Avery before I advance things with her. I know I see her every day at school, but we haven’t really had a chance to spend time together under these different circumstances. Previously, I mostly just ignored her.”

“Of course,” she agreed simply.

We were both quiet for a few long seconds, listening to the night sounds.

Finally, I took a deep breath, knowing I was definitely ready for the hunting part. “Well, I hear a small herd of like four or five deer, so I should probably go run one down. Are you thirsty at all?”

She shook her head. “Not for blood. I haven’t really been hurt, so I assume I won’t need any, right?”

I nodded. “Yeah. Shouldn’t need it unless you get injured. But then, what do you want to do after that?”

She hesitated. “Do you need sex?” she wondered.

My eyes widened in surprise. “Oh. No, I’m honestly not in the mood right now. And even though I used up all my magic in that fight, I don’t feel like I’m needing it to ‘sustain myself,’ or whatever.” I paused. “Maybe it’s because I’ve subconsciously been refusing to tap into that energy that I need to keep my body healthy.”

Actually, I knew that was exactly the case, considering I didn’t view that energy within me as ‘disposable’ magic. Only the excess that I had. Which made me wonder if that was the secret to having more energy for spells, to be willing to tap into what I needed more long-term. Or if the problem was actually just that I was inefficient in my use of it.

Serenity nodded. “Just wanted to make sure. But in that case, I’m fine with going back after you’re done. I’m actually getting pretty tired, but just needed a moment with you.”

“I completely understand,” I replied. “Be right back.”

She gave me a smile as she let go, our intertwined fingers remaining stuck for a few seconds as we began separating, like she didn’t want to let me go, before I was finally off to go track down my meal. Of course, catching a deer was no problem, the others scurrying away from the danger.

But then I was done feeding and heading back to regroup with Serenity, barely ten minutes having passed. However, on the way back, I caught a dim glimmer of light on the forest floor in the moonlight streaming through the trees, causing me to check it out.

Surprisingly, it was a regular looking knife not far away from a dead body.

The decayed corpse didn’t have clothes on, much like the rest of them, so I wasn’t sure how it had been carried -- wondering if maybe this was one of the few who had remained mostly human, much like the leader had done -- or if the weapon was even significant, but decided to grab it just in case.

Of course, Serenity commented on it right away when we regrouped.

“Where did that come from?”

“Just found it,” I said simply. “Wanted to have Miriam look at it and make sure it wasn’t special, like the other black blade.”

She nodded. “Good idea. Looks normal to me, but never know.”

I wrapped my arm around her this time, prompting her to wrap her arms around my torso as we headed back, walking mostly in silence, just content to be together. From the sounds I was hearing inside the mansion, I realized everyone must be done cleaning up, with it sounding as if Rosa was already done with a quick shower and just finishing up with dressing in whatever she’d been provided.

Honestly, from the sounds I was hearing, I was beginning to suspect she’d just been given normal stuff, like jeans and maybe a nice shirt. Not that I was really expecting anything different, but I had to admit I was a little curious to know what she looked like in normal clothing, as opposed to a large cloak that pretty much hid her body.

Granted, based on the fact that she’d basically starved for a seemingly long time, I suspected it wouldn’t be hard to imagine. No doubt she was pretty emaciated and thin overall…not that I really cared one way or the other.

Even though my opinion on her had changed pretty dramatically in the last hour, I wasn’t about to get in bed with her, even if her face was ridiculously pretty. I had too many other things to worry about and focus on at this point, never mind the fact that the interest would have to go both ways, and all my other women would have to be fine with it…

Yeah, too much of a headache to even think about.

When Serenity and I reached the rear gate, we both hesitated briefly, as if we were having the same thought. She angled herself more toward me in my embrace as I focused on her rich chocolate brown eyes, seeing the longing in them. Not one of arousal, but simply one of want.

I leaned my face toward her as she tilted her chin up incrementally, our lips meeting in a soft tender kiss. She then let go a little so that she could slide more in front of me as we continued to keep our lips locked, her arms slowly wrapping around my neck as I wrapped mine around her thin waist.

I slipped my tongue in her mouth when hers probed at mine, beginning to gently rock my head with hers as our intimacy deepened.

I knew this was all she wanted right now, and so I wasn’t surprised when she pulled away after a couple of minutes.

“I love you so much,” she whispered affectionately.

“Love you too,” I replied, pecking her again on the lips. “Maybe I should skip one more day of school.”

She smiled warmly at me. “Well, I still might go into work, remember? And you do have a good point about people asking questions. Never mind the possibility of someone accusing you of truancy.”

Of course, I was very familiar with the subject since the court had made it clear that they might reconsider our living arrangements if I missed too much school. Which was why I had perfect attendance, since neither one of us wanted that.

Still, I couldn’t help but scoff. “I’m about to graduate and otherwise have perfect attendance. Plus, it’s kind of normal for seniors to skip a little during the last few weeks.”

She sighed heavily, moving her arms to my torso and resting her head underneath my chin as she gave me a tight hug. “Barely one more month, and things will be so much easier.”

“How much longer do you think you’ll continue working?” I wondered seriously.

She shrugged incrementally. “We’ll have to play that by ear. I do like my job for the most part, but if we decide to move in with Miriam, then it’ll be difficult to keep my current job either way. Not unless I want to spend two hours on the road every day.”

“Didn’t realize you were already seriously considering that,” I commented, enjoying the warmth of her body against mine, her head still tucked underneath my chin.

She sighed. “Gabriella and I talked about it a little while you were searching for a survivor with Miriam. We know there’s a lot to consider, but we don’t really have enough room back home to fit everyone permanently. And we don’t want Avery and Michelle to feel like perpetual guests.”

“I guess that makes sense.”

“Plus, there’s Natalie. She needs a place to stay, and we already don’t have the room.”

I frowned as I considered that, realizing she was right. If anything, Natalie was the most in need of both temporary and permanent living arrangements, since she literally had nowhere to go. Which meant, I either needed to talk to Mrs. Copeland about letting her stay at her place for a while, or I needed to ask Miriam if she was willing to let Natalie just remain at the mansion.

If anything, I suspected the blue-haired vixen might appreciate the extra protection that being here afforded, and might also be thankful of the distance between the two of us, so that she could breathe a little apart from her alpha and start feeling like a normal person. Certainly, I doubted that the distance would reduce the strong bond we shared, but it would at least allow her to live some normal days without an alpha looming over her shoulder.

Although, there was the issue of giving her some of my blood.

That still needed to happen, and I needed to be present the whole time to make sure she didn’t attack anyone like Gabriella did. Technically, I knew that giving her my blood could wait, but I felt like it should be a priority -- enough of a priority that it did actually merit me staying home from school one more day.

I took a deep breath, knowing that doing it now might mean staying at the mansion while sending Serenity home in the only car we brought. Or it might mean that I take Natalie along with us after all.

“I might really need to skip school one more day,” I commented out loud. “And then, either bring Natalie home with us, or send you and Gabriella home by yourselves. Assuming Gabriella plans on going into work too.”

Serenity looked up at me in surprise. “Oh.” She paused. “Okay.”

“Not because I’m trying to hang out here all day,” I clarified, assuming she must think I had a preference. “I just want to make sure Natalie gets some of my blood, and at this point that’ll likely mean I have to stay with her until at least seven in the morning. Maybe longer, depending on how long it takes. With an hour drive, that would make you late, especially since you need to go home to change.”

She nodded. “Do you think there’s any downside to bringing her with us then? I just don’t want to leave you away from home without your own transportation,” she added.

I frowned as I considered that.

On the one hand, if I was here, then I wouldn’t need my own transportation, because there was nowhere else I’d want to go. However, I was well aware of how addicting Miriam could be, especially after we’d already fucked so many times just this evening, and I knew it might be wise to give us a little bit of space again.

Which meant, even if I did stay here, I’d probably ask Gwen to take me home once Natalie was awake. It might mean I’d end up home alone, especially if I left the blue-haired vixen behind, but it honestly might not be a bad idea to force that on myself.

To give myself a chance to really be alone and think about everything that’d happened recently, so I could decompress a little.

Plus, I did need to sleep.

“I guess we either need to leave soon, Natalie with us, or else I give her some of my blood now, and you can just leave without me if she’s not awake by the time you have to go.”

Serenity nodded. “Let’s just go ahead and plan to stay until morning. I know Miriam is probably the second most powerful person here, but I can’t help but feel bad about leaving her alone so soon after everything that happened.”

I nodded, moving my arm to her shoulders and gesturing for us to start walking again. “Okay, then I’ll help her finish up any last-minute things she needs me to do, and then focus on Natalie. You and Gabriella can then find a room to crash in, and we’ll regroup when it’s close to time for you to head back home.”

She gave me a confused look. “You don’t want to just sleep in the same room as me?” she wondered.

I shook my head. “I don’t want to chance Natalie waking up and trying to attack someone. I think it’s best if I stay with her in one of Miriam’s basement rooms. Behind a locked door, just in case.”

She nodded. “Okay, that makes sense.”

I simply nodded.

She then sighed as we reached the grassy patch before the long porch, focusing on the undisturbed crate where Miriam and I had set it down. “I guess should we go ahead and bring this in?” she wondered.

I shrugged. “Sure,” I replied simply, readjusting the knife in my hands as I climbed onto the porch and moved to pick up one end of the crate. Serenity took my lead and grabbed the other side, and we both began hoisting it to the conservatory’s sliding glass door.

Realizing we were out of hands, I grew out a wing to get the door, and proceeded to close it again once we were inside. I then did the same for the door leading to the breakfast room, followed by us making our way through the dining room.

I could hear a couple of people coming down one of the twin staircases now, knowing at least two people were already in the grand foyer area. Thus, Serenity and I set the crate down just as we passed through the dining hall entrance, with me wanting to show Miriam the knife I’d found.

Sure enough, Gabriella, Natalie, and Miriam were all angled toward each other at the bottom of the stairs, while Gwen was leading the blonde vamp down the last few steps, all five of them turning to focus on me and Serenity as we walked into sight.

I held up the knife as I spoke. “Hey, Miriam, I…” My voice cut off as I focused on Rosa, sincerely shocked by her expression.

She’d stopped just on the last step, wearing dark blue jeans and a nice navy blue blouse, her clothing a sharp contrast to her blonde hair, pale skin, and crimson eyes. Overall, she looked even more attractive than I was anticipating, though also far skinnier, and part of me couldn’t help but feel a little annoyed and disgusted at myself for liking what I saw.

Just because I felt like I should be happy at this point.

Happy to have Serenity, Gabriella, Avery, Michelle, Miriam, and Gwen. And possibly even Mrs. Rebecca and Natalie too. Yet, it was like I couldn’t help but find what I saw appealing.

Was it because I was an incubus?

Or simply because I was a guy, who was attracted to all women?

No, I knew that couldn’t be true.

There were plenty of women out there who were only average in appearance. Not even worth giving a second glance. And honestly, on second thought, when I considered the reason ‘why’ Rosa had been adopted into royalty, elevated to the status of princess due to her being one of several suitresses to a potential heir, it made sense that she was gorgeous, considering that beauty was probably the primary factor in deciding who was chosen.

So maybe I was being too hard on myself for thinking she was so ridiculously attractive.

However, those fleeting thoughts were all in passing, as I quickly became confused as to why she looked so terrified right now.

It took me a second to realize I was still transformed after growing out my wings to open the doors, my skin gray, my eyes gold and black. But I quickly realized that wasn’t her primary focus the moment she opened her mouth, one of her hands sticking out in the universal stop gesture, while her other hand flew over her chest, her face rapidly contorting in fear, grief, and panic.

“Please no!” she abruptly yelled, rapidly falling apart. “Please! I will do anything you ask! Just please!”

Needless to say, everyone looked back at her in shock, Gwen quickly reaching out for her. “Rosa, it’s alright. He’s not--”

The blonde screamed the moment Gwen touched her, attempting to move backward so quickly that she tripped on the stairs and fell on her ass, prompting the maid to reach out and grab her wrist before she could run away up the stairs.

Miriam moved faster than I was expecting, quickly darting for them and grabbing Rosa’s other wrist, her other hand reaching for her knee. Immediately, I felt that gentle motherly presence erupt into Miriam’s aura, a sharp contrast to her normal erotic existence, even if that was still potent in the air, the effect seeming instantaneous.

Rosa must have been able to feel it, because her panicked breathing transitioned to sobbing as she wrapped her thin arms around Miriam and began crying.

I glanced at Serenity by my side with wide eyes, completely confused about what just happened, only to glance in Gabriella’s direction who seemed equally stunned.

My busty redhead was the first to speak up. “What’s wrong with her?”

Gwen responded. “She’s never died before. Killing her was traumatizing.”

Serenity’s brown eyes widened. “She’s showing signs of PTSD,” she suddenly realized out loud. “She must have seen the knife and it triggered her.”

“Yes,” Gwen said simply, focusing down at Rosa’s head buried against Miriam’s chest.

Of course, I wasn’t too surprised by Miriam’s sincere concern, because first and foremost she trusted that Gwen’s assessment of the girl was accurate, and that she truly was the victim here, having been forced into a life she didn’t want, and having truly done everything in her power to remain good.

So Miriam’s concern was sincere.

“I do not wish to die,” Rosa whimpered. “Please, I do not…” Her voice trailed off as she sobbed again.

“Shh,” Miriam hushed, gently stroking her blonde hair now. “No one is going to harm you. And I am very sorry for what I did earlier. I made assumptions about you, based on what you were, and I was grossly incorrect in those assumptions. No one is going to harm you again. You are safe in my home.”

The blonde simply sobbed in response.

Glancing at Serenity again, I decided to hand the knife off to her and get closer, figuring I should probably say something as well, to reassure her that I meant her no harm. Stopping once I was a couple feet away from Gabriella and Natalie, I cleared my throat.

“Umm, Rosa, I’m sorry for scaring you. I found that knife in the woods, and was just going to ask Miriam if she could make sure it was normal. I’m not going to hurt you.” I then scoffed at the idea. “I mean, the reason why I was able to break your curse was because I gave my blood to you willingly. Why would I hurt you after saving your life?”

She sobbed again, her voice muffled by Miriam’s chest. “B-But, you were killed b-because of m-me.”

I frowned as I considered that, only to sigh. “Yes, and it made me really angry. But honestly, it’s that guy who was responsible, and I remember seeing your remorse when I woke up. I saw your guilt. Plus, we’re kind of even now anyway, since we sort of killed you too.”

She trembled slightly at that, only to sob uncontrollably again.

“Sorry,” I quickly added. “Didn’t mean to bring that up. Point is, I’ve decided to forgive you, and I hope you’ll forgive all of us for our role in what happened to you.”

“You saved my life,” she whimpered. “I owe you everything. All the others…they are all gone now because of that aliment.”

“The other suitresses?” Miriam unexpectedly wondered, sounding as if she was trying to get the girl’s mind off the subject of dying. “Or did the prince die too?”

Rosa sniffled, before slowly pulling away to look up at the redhead minx, her flushed cheeks wet with tears. “Many perished. The suitresses, their handmaids, the guards. I assume the others did as well, but I had very little access to them. We were kept separate unless our presence was requested.”

“And how often did that happen?” Miriam wondered.

“None for me. It was not yet my turn to meet the prince.”

“There must have been a lot of you then, huh?”

“Very many,” Rosa agreed with a sniffle.

Miriam nodded. “And…” She hesitated. “Are you aware of what happens to the suitresses who are not picked?”

Rosa’s crimson eyes widened slightly. “N-No. Do you know?”

She shook her head. “No, I have intentionally stayed far away from your kind, and am thus unfamiliar with their current customs. However, while I do not wish to trouble you with the thought, I think it’s at least a possibility that the attack was a ruse. That the final selection had already taken place and the curse you suffered was meant to rid the royal family of the burden of those who were not chosen.”

Rosa suddenly looked shell-shocked at the idea.

“B-But I had not yet met the prince,” she repeated.

Miriam nodded. “I know. But the reason why you were turned in the first place appears to be seemingly for only one purpose. To be a candidate for the prince. And there were probably many other girls who were turned at a young age, but ended up not being pretty enough to be a suitress. I’m afraid those girls were also likely dealt with, long before they had the opportunity to even grow up.”

Rosa’s eyes were filling with tears again. Her voice sounded more defeated and broken. “B-But I had not yet met the prince,” she repeated again.

“Would you return to them if given the chance?” Miriam asked seriously. “Would you choose to be chosen by the prince, if he wanted you?”

Rosa immediately shook her head.

“Then, while I may be completely wrong, if my theory is actually correct, it simply means that you were one of the lucky ones. You escaped death, and no one is coming to look for you. Rosa, that means you’re free now.” She paused. “Well, free in the sense that I won’t harm you, or get rid of you. But I’ll take care of you, make sure you have plenty of blood bags to get your meals, and otherwise give you a home where you’ll be safe from now on.”

“I can never repay you,” she whispered.

“You can work for me, and obey me. That will be your repayment. If you can handle that, then I believe you can find happiness again.”

“I cannot remember a time when I was happy,” she replied quietly.

Miriam’s tone was more lighthearted. “Well, I won’t force that on you either. If you decide you don’t want to be happy, then that is fine as well. You can choose to be sad if you want.”

Rosa gave her a bizarre look, only to smile slightly. “Was that a joke?” she asked seriously.

Miriam made an amused noise. “If it was, it wasn’t a very good one.”

Rosa frowned. “I have been told that when you understand jokes in another language, it means you are fully fluent. I was hoping I might have understood a joke for once.”

Miriam laughed. “Oh, I have plenty of jokes I could try on you,” she teased, only to sigh heavily, glancing back at the rest of us, only to focus on me since I was still standing pretty close, near Gabriella and Natalie. “Kai, after you help store the old man, what do you plan on doing? You are welcome to stay as long as you want.”

I nodded. “Yeah, it’s already so late, I think it’s best if we crash here. But I was hoping I could take Natalie to one of the basement rooms, so I can try breaking her curse.” I shrugged. “Figured it would be best to do it behind a locked door.”

“And in a room that has concrete walls,” Miriam added for me, glancing at the blue-haired vixen.

“Is that fine with you?” I wondered.

Miriam nodded. “Yeah, that’s fine. And then, what about after she wakes up?”

I heard Serenity set the other knife on the crate, glancing back at her as she walked over. “I plan on going into work tomorrow, which means Gabriella and I might have to leave Kai here, if Natalie is still asleep.”

Miriam’s face lit up like a Christmas tree. “I like that plan,” she said cheerfully.

I cleared my throat. “Well, I was actually hoping that maybe Gwen could take me back home sometime in the morning, once she’s awake.”

Her expression dropped, her tone more serious. “Oh. Of course, Kai. She can take you home. And what about Natalie?” she wondered, glancing at the person in question again.

I sighed. “Figured I’d leave that up to her,” I replied. “Assuming you don’t mind accommodating her,” I added.

Natalie chimed in, her feminine husky Rockstar chick tone coming out thicker than normal, as if due to not speaking much in the last few hours. “Wait, what?” she said seriously, taking a step more toward my side.

I gave her my attention. “I told you from the beginning that I’d give you space, if you needed it. Just because I’m your alpha now doesn’t mean you have to be at my beck and call. Or even be around me at all. Assuming Miriam doesn’t mind, then I figured this was a safe place for you to stay if you wanted that space.”

Miriam chimed in again. “She’d have to work a little if she stays here. A place this big doesn’t get clean on its own.” She focused on Natalie too. “Or is cleaning beneath you?” she asked seriously.

Natalie’s light brown eyes widened in surprise. “N-No, I’ll clean, or whatever else you want me to do. I don’t have any money for rent, so it’s the least I can offer.”

“Perfect,” Miriam said warmly, almost as if her comment was a test of the blue-haired chick’s temperament. “Then yes, you can stay if you want.”

Natalie seemed hesitant, glancing at me again. “C-Can I decide later?” she asked me. “Or is it you who wants the space?”

I shook my head. “Being around you is by no means a hassle, and honestly I’m probably just going to sleep most of the day at home.”

Natalie seemed surprised at that. “Then, I think I’d actually like to go with you, if you don’t mind.”

“Sure,” I said simply. “If that’s what you really want.”

She nodded once.

Miriam let out a dramatic breath. “Well, that makes me feel a little better. I was afraid you wanted to get away from me. And here you just wanted to sleep.”

I shrugged, my tone both casual and lighthearted. “Let’s be honest. I’m probably not going to get much sleep if I stay here, and I kind of need to recover from everything that just happened.”

Miriam giggled. “Yeah, okay. I guess I can give you a little break,” she giggled again. “But then, if that’s the plan, we should probably get to it. Do you mind helping Gwen lock away that crate while I show Rosa to a room? Gwen can then get you and Natalie situated, and the rest of us can try to get a little sleep before morning.” She sighed. “I also need to make a phone call.”

“For blood bags?” I assumed.

Miriam shook her head, glancing at Gabriella. “No, I’ll have to wait until morning for that.” She sighed, focusing on me again. “With a situation this big? My daughter Rebecca is going to want to hear about it directly from me. I at least need to let her know we’re all safe.”

Oh.

Shit.

No doubt that was going to be a rough conversation.

 

FEEDBACK: Rosa's full name is Serafina Rosana de Luca Casella, or basically Serafina Rosana. Do you like Rosa, or would you prefer Sera? (or even Serafina)

I'm open to changing it, or to at least having Kai call her something different eventually, such as using her middle name for everyone else, but eventually telling Kai that he can use her first name. But if you guys like Rosa better, then I might just stick with that.

 

Also, a slight change you may have noticed:

When I first started writing this story, Kai had about a month left of classes. However, at some point I accidentally changed it to 2 weeks. It's been changed back, so that the story is consistent at it being about a month left, which is evident in this chapter, but I just wanted to emphasize that it's supposed to be a month.

It's the last week of April for them, and he graduates roughly the fourth week of May (or is at least done with classes by the fourth week of May).

 

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Comments

Christopher Miller

After 70 chapters it FINALLY feels like we can push to some significant milestones. #1- I can't wait to see when Gabriella and Serenity take their relationship to a physical level. Both with each other and together with Kai. Seeing the culmination of the teasing that's been building since about chapter 12 or so will be epic! #2- Kai and Avery, I'm going to love seeing them develop as a couple and lovers. I'm actually going to enjoy reading about their life at school and how they hide their relationship from everyone around them while growing closer to each other. Fun stuff! #3- Rebecca and Michelle, probably not together as a couple as hot as that would be. But the two MILFs almost seem wide open as to how things will develop between them and the rest of the harem. I mean, they both have daughters who are both with Kai as well. Seeing them figure stuff out will be highly entertaining. #4- Natalie &amp; Rosa/Sera, I actually could see these two getting together romantically. They have very similar traumatic backgrounds they can bond over but have polar opposite personalities. Natalie could be the brash, sarcastic protector and Rosa be the sweet, but delicate rose in need of a guardian to keep her safe, at least emotionally. #5- Michelle &amp; Avery's mystery bloodline needs explained. Personally I'm banking on angelic, but I'd love to be surprised by something out of left field. #6- A surprise pregnancy, preferably Miriam, Gwen, Rebecca or Michelle. I think that would really cause Kai to develop as a character. And a hot MILF with a baby whose half-sister is one of Kai's women as well would be hot. And Gwen helping to bring the next generation of imps along would be hot as well. Hmmm, maybe both Serenity and Gwen preggers together? Lol, just realized, if Miriam gave birth she/he would be 20-21 years younger than Gabriella, but be her great grand-aunt/uncle! #7- Gabriella, Rebecca and possibly Avery and Michelle getting wings! #8- Kai's women learning magic from Miriam, especially Serenity, Avery, Michelle and maybe Rosa. #9- The harem all moving into Miriam's place together! Having Miriam, Rebecca, Gwen, and Rosa under the same roof with Kai and his 5 "house women" has been long anticipated by me. And we are SO close. #10- An explanation of why Kai's blood absolutely eradicates lycanthropy but has zero effect on vampirism? Rosa didn't fall asleep after drinking his blood and still seems to be 100% a vampire. It seems to have wiped out the Alukah's exorcism (a curse) but that was attributed to his innocence and being willing. #11- Further defining Serenity's relationship to Gwen and Miriam. Is Serenity eventually going to pledge herself to Miriam &amp; Kai together, strengthening their bond even further? Is she going to become Kai's familiar? Or is someone else like Rosa or Avery going to fill that role? #12- When the realization hits that Kai's uber-regeneration will keep him from aging past young adulthood. Does he pass that on to the women he shares his blood with? Will they all become fully immortal like Miriam &amp; Kai? Geez, I gotta stop, I could go on for another dozen points. ☺️

Anonymous

Woo! Chris, that’s a lot buddy. I’m firmly in the Sera or Serafina camp for names. My guess about Avery and her mom though is some sort of Banshee ancestry. Especially the way Avery’s mom reacted to the orb that would have killed Kai. As for Kai’s mother, I’m going with some sort of mother of all. He seems to be an alpha of all monster types and where better to get that than from the source. Other than that though, I’m kinda ready for this night to end. Just since they arrived this evening we’ve had blood tests, changing Natalie’s alpha, a huge warewolf fight, the vampires, fixing the princess, and now possibly curing Natalie.

Christopher Miller

Kai's mom and dad were indeed another of those dozen points I didn't list. Though a Gaia/Lilith/Tiamat (mother of all monsters) is intriguing I'm still holding out for a generations long supernatural breeding program that genetically engineered Kai. And I concede that a death sensing banshee bloodline is a real possibility for Michelle and Avery. But I think a guardian angelic bloodline also makes sense, as does do Norns-Fates from Norse and Greek mythology make sense to. Both groups are 3 sisters who determine the lifespan of mortals. But I thought the platinum blonde hair, exotic eyes and exquisite skin sounded the most like the traditional description of angels. Not to mention their sweet dispositions. I could definitely be wrong though! I agree that it's been a long day, and longer night. It's been about, what, 15 chapters since Kai and Serenity arrived in the mall yesterday morning? But we are finally to the cusp of some MAJOR changes and I'm stoked!

Anonymous

So no one suggested “Fina”?

Christopher Miller

I guess with the space issues with 6 people crammed into Kai &amp; Serenity's place, maybe as a temporary measure they could move to Michelle &amp; Avery's home until graduation. I'd eventually expect them to sell both houses and invest it into a sort of family nest egg when they live with Miriam.

Chosen Juan

And thus, my 2nd read through has been completed and I am caught up once again. I’d like to give praise where it is due, some constructive criticism where needed, and then a few pleas for the future. Firstly, and I think I probably mentioned this already, but, your dialogue sequences are a master class of how to write a conversation between characters. I can’t think of a single proper dialogue that I wasn’t impressed with. Legitimately, every conversation is easy to understand while having plenty of nuance, both for casual readers and the more analytical folks. Excellent 5 stars! Second, is incredible moments filled with complex emotions. In book 1, when Kai gets to Serenity and kills off the psycho, and finds himself truly powerless in every sense of the word, was phenomenal. Being unable to save the love is his life while 5 feet away from her, with no way out, was incredibly heart wrenching in the best way possible. When Kai experiences Rosa’s aura and is overwhelmed with regret for hating her, is a truly complicated emotion, that is believable without being convoluted. And finally, Michelle in the hospital. Every emotional swing, every story beat, just everything is incredible in how you, KW, help the audience feel what Kai is going through. Your talent to describe complex emotions is satisfying on so many levels and you truly deserve praise for it. There are more, smaller moments, that also deserve mention but I can’t put them all down as there are plenty more.

Chosen Juan

Next, some constructive criticism from a fellow writer. Though I’m not as brave to have published, I’d just like to point some things that I hope can help improve your story overall. First and foremost, the horny descriptions need to be toned down at more somber moments. For example, in this very chapter, while Rosa is actively going into PTSD shock, Kai/KW instead takes the time to describe how pretty she is and why she is pretty, and some more thoughts/observations while the person in question, is actively reliving the trauma of her near death experience just some 4 or so hours prior. Another example, is Michelle actively dying while Kai/KW is occupied describing her pretty face and large tits. While it is nice to have active descriptions, hospitals, especially the critical condition patients, are in no way sexy/appealing in any way, especially with multiple IV’s in her arms, maybe a catheter and a fucking air tube down her throat actively damaging her esophagus For fucks sake, while driving the just dead woman home, whose entire chest cavity was collapsed half an hour ago and we later find out was in unbearable agony, can you not write about her tits being separated by a seatbelt. If misery/involuntary vulnerability are your kink just say it, or at least have Kai realize it makes him uncomfortable how much he likes it because it really doesn’t line up with the “innocent” in IDH. Second, as the story progresses, Kai exhibits manipulative tendencies on several occasions to multiple women. I’ll give Kai the benefit of the doubt in regards to Michelle’s situation, given she was an unknown factor and Kai was under the impression she was happily married and likely to give pushback to the forced change, but a number of other “relationships” are very unsettling. To give specific examples: Kai requiring Avery to give up her old life for him (stalker tendency doesn’t excuse this). Actively claiming Rebecca while she has a marital crisis and taking pride in the fact he’s supplanting her husband. Silently refusing to pursue Miriam unless she cuts off her life style/source of sustenance. Despite Natalie’s situation and how werewolves work here, he was actually quite supportive of her and her personal choices, but also changing his approach to her constantly and openly being affectionate with other women in front of her while being back and forth aggressive to disinterested, could be seen as manipulative. (Making her believe she is undesirable while actively keeping her around.) Others might find other tell tale signs of a controlling boyfriend, these are just a few blaring ones that really go against the idea that Kai is a good person. (Personal opinion time: I’m someone who personally suffered from a manipulative relationship with my first girlfriend that involved verbal abuse and suicidal threats. While it didn’t start out with the shit show, some of the things I’ve seen Kai do is how such relationships start early on. Group therapy is a helluva drug and you find out too much about how ugly people are on the inside or behind closed doors.)

Chosen Juan

One last suggestion before I head to horny jail. So far you haven’t really experimented with some more exotic skin colorations/color combinations. With every transformed gal being either tan or grey to some extent. With Natalie, perhaps we could see something candy colored, like baby blue or vibrant red, to reflect her ‘defiant’ personality (see what I did there?). And even further transformations could be other fun colors. I know you have plenty of creativity to expand on this concept!

KaizerWolf

Before I read your comment: First thing I want to say is that I'm not aiming for 'perfection,' and anyone who aims for perfection will never publish anything, because it will never be 'good enough' in their perception. I only aim to tell a good story, and I do what I can to do it as well as possible, but I don't fret about getting elements like the pacing 'perfect.' That's not a goal of mine, and if it was a goal of mine, then I'd never get anything written. Now, as I read your comment: Why did you put "Kai/KW instead takes the time..."? I'm not the character. And to use the example I gave in a previous comment, I would have no problem with Miriam and Rebecca continuing their lifestyles (if I were the character), whereas both Kai (and my target audience) would find that unacceptable. I realize you are of a different opinion about when the MC should, or shouldn't, be having thoughts about someone's physical attractiveness, but I have specific reasons for including that kind of thing at a time like that, and I don't view it as an error when I did it intentionally. Same with Michelle's situation, and him evaluating her appearance after what she experienced. That's intentional, on my part, with me having a particular goal in mind in how it affects the reader. And yeah, maybe it rubbed you the wrong way, and that's fine, but it accomplishes that goal for the primary target audience I'm writing for. If my target audience was different, then this approach might be different. Also, I already addressed your comment about him being manipulative in another response, but to summarize: Establishing boundaries at the beginning of a relationship isn't manipulative, and it isn't unhealthy. A person doesn't have to sacrifice their own self-respect to respect others, and in this very unique situation (with Michelle), Kai is taking the necessary steps to protect himself while also giving her the freedom to decide how she wants to live, within reason. The ability to heal someone from a certain death is 100% his gift/ability, and 100% not something he is required to share with anyone. And if he is going to share it, then it is 100% his prerogative to have certain expectations in return. Now, with your examples: Regarding Avery. Kai made a requirement in exchange for a gift (not really a true gift, as in, free with no strings attached) and he absolutely did not have to offer it. Avery had the freedom to accept or reject that offer, knowing full well that she might be okay without the gift, given some time, if she did reject it. Actively claiming Rebecca was that 'pendulum swinging' I was talking about, and a normal part of his character growth, given the situation he'd found himself in. Even in the narration, he admitted that he might just be letting his horniness get to him. Refusing to pursue Miriam is not, in any form of the definition, manipulation. It is healthy to have certain expectations and boundaries for oneself (that's self-respect) and to not be willing to compromise on those. And if she wasn't willing, then she could walk away. Or he could walk away. Either way, that's how normal healthy relationships function. A person can be 'good' without sacrifice their own self-respect. A person can be 'good' while rejecting a relationship who isn't willing to respect their own boundaries. Or who isn't willing to meet their expectations. The manipulation would only be when that person tries to make someone stay, even when they have decided they don't want to. At this point, I feel like your definition of manipulative is purely 'how it's perceived' and that's not just not how it works. Manipulative has a definition. A person can 'think' someone is being manipulative all they want, but that doesn't mean they are actually being manipulative. I mean, think about your very comments. Is your criticism manipulative? Based on the actual definition, no. Your criticism isn't manipulative at all. But based on 'your definition' (as you're defining here by saying 'could be seen as manipulative') then your very comments are manipulative. You're trying to get me to change the story to suit your tastes. Now, I don't actually feel that way, and I'm not at all accusing you of being manipulative. I'm also not trying to be harsh or rude. I'm just trying to point out that the logic we're following here doesn't pan out when you extrapolate it. To be manipulative, is to be controlling. The very fact that any of these women can walk away if they want to, and that he would let them walk away without trying to make them feel bad, is the exact definition of 'not' being manipulative. He has expectations. Expectations for being with him. Expectations for what he expects if he offers someone his blood, and its healing properties. And that's health and self-respecting for him to have those boundaries and expectations. And if they don't want to meet those expectations, they can walk away. And he wouldn't try to stop them from walking away. That's exactly the opposite of manipulation. Trust me, I know exactly what a 'controlling person' looks like. And this MC is far off the mark. I know exactly what manipulation looks like (real manipulation, not 'perceived' manipulation, which is indefinable). A person 'should' have boundaries, and 'should' have expectations. That's healthy. And those boundaries and expectations should be made clear, on both sides toward the beginning of a potential 'relationship,' and each person should have the ability to choose if they want to get involved in a relationship, knowing what those boundaries and expectations are. In these situations, Kai has made clear what his boundaries are, and what he expects. And in each instance, the woman is able to choose to either accept those expectations and boundaries (as well as the perks associated with it), or to walk away. Now, if Kai tried to 'make them' stay, then that's controlling. But he wouldn't, and that's been made clear in the narrative. Certainly, he wants them to stay, but he's not going to make anyone stay, even though he literally could. And that's not manipulative. It's healthy. I feel like I'm repeating myself, and I'm sorry for that, but I just want to emphasize that 'being a good person' doesn't mean they have to sacrifice their own self-respect. You can be a good person and still have boundaries and expectations for others. Having self-respect doesn't make someone a bad person, but lacking it certainly makes them a doormat for people to walk over and take advantage of. And I'm not saying that to belittle anyone. It's literally just a fact that people who have no self-respect end up getting taken advantage of by others. And aggressively defending your own boundaries does not meant you're a bad person. Nor does 'not' having boundaries mean that you're a good person. As far as your personal experience. Yes, suicidal threats is manipulative. It's an attempt to control. That's true manipulation. But having boundaries and expectations is not manipulative. It's healthy. Also, I am speaking in a more general sense, so please don't take any of this personally. Although, given that you know what true manipulation looks like, I do find it confusing as to why you think the MC is being manipulative. He doesn't have to offer his blood to anyone. And if he does offer it, then it's 100% his right to have certain expectations. And those women can refuse it, and walk away if they want. Now, if he said 'If you leave me, I'll kill myself,' then yeah, that's 100% manipulative, because they can't easily leave without some major consequence. And no, him refusing to offer his blood is not a consequence. It's, by definition, a miracle that he can even help them, and refusing his help does not make him a bad person, nor does it make him manipulative. Instead, what would make him manipulative is if he tried to make them stay, no matter what. Very big difference. Hope that addressed all your concerns, even if you don't agree with everything I said.

KaizerWolf

Appreciate the compliments. I'd say that dialogue is definitely one of my biggest strengths, so glad to hear you think I'm doing well there.

KaizerWolf

Interesting idea. In another story I'm writing, Combat Healer (which you should definitely check out, since you already have access to all the chapters, and a lot of people actually like that story more than this one), there are people with bright red skin, blue skin, and even gree and purple skin. If you want some 'candy' flavors, definitely check it out, because the first woman has red skin: https://www.patreon.com/posts/48641990

KaizerWolf

@Chosen Juan -- For some reason, your comment about 'what you want to see going forward' and the kinky stuff, isn't showing up. This has been a reoccurring problem recently, where people have posted comments and for some reason they don't show up. I think it's a Patreon glitch, but since I get an email with your comment, I'm going to re-post it for you below (unless you want to repost it).

KaizerWolf

&gt;&gt;&gt; From Chosen Juan (comment isn't showing up): &lt;&lt;&lt; (Part 1) To bring the mood back up and wrap up my long form bitching, a few suggestions/anticipations for the future that I believe would improve the story going forward. The first few will be story improvements, the last few will be kinky suggestions, I’ll make sure to separate the two. A somewhat disturbing trend throughout IDH, is that every girl he interacts with is somehow heavily indebted to him, whether it’s their life or physical dependency. Gabriella and Serenity he saved from being murdered, Avery and Michelle from a fatal car crash, Rebecca, Miriam, and Gwen from the abomination, Natalie and Rosa from the werewolf threat. Imbalanced power dynamics, like Kai’s and each of his Housemates, are in a grossly imbalanced relationship, the sort that leads to guilt tripping and gas lighting. Solution: take a few chapters to develop meaningful relationships that have nothing to do with the life saving incidents, to the point that such traumatic moments are barely an afterthought in the character’s minds. Kai needs to distance himself from Miriam for the sake of the story. I’ve reread every chapter and every comment in said chapters, and I’ve found that Miriam is too much of a good thing. I think you’re aware of this, but I wanted to reinforce this idea. I also think you’ve roadmapped the solution already as you’ve made mention in several chapter headings. Kai seriously needs to humble himself. His unbeatable attitude is seriously a turn off from the series at this point after investing into 70 chapters worth of content. And it’s strange where this arrogance even comes from, like I can barely point to a moment where everything works in Kai’s favor and yet he thinks himself great. Miriam and Rebecca sucking his ego off are seriously not helping and are actively degrading his character, hence why he need time away with normal people. Solution: the fact that the werewolves would’ve won without the vampires disintegration spell really needs to humble him. Also, spending some time at school with Avery would go miles in bringing him back down off his high horse that I think many a folk dislike. Also, giving back domain authority to Miriam would really help to characterize Kai as someone who respects others needs, particularly quelling Miriam’s anxiety.

KaizerWolf

&gt;&gt;&gt; From Chosen Juan (comment isn't showing up): &lt;&lt;&lt; (Part 2) A few kinky ideas before I leave this series in the bin for a few weeks. The first proper sex scene with Natalie, should be post transformation and would benefit from being completely penetration free. Natalie has never to this point had a positive/happy sex experience, so her choosing to pursue Kai and to be rewarded with some mind blowing oral sex, would really be cathartic for her character. Between losing her virginity (which you hinted to have been unpleasant) and all the werewolf domination (even with Kai) she has never had an experience about her own pleasure, and only about the pleasures of her partners. (Also please don’t make her a Sub long term, seeing Natalie take control of her sex life would also be quite cathartic for her character.) Next, would be Kai x Avery. While the entire reason they postponed sex was for covert school going, it would be incredibly cathartic if she decided to say “fuck it”, and she were to fuck him at school, perhaps on the roof or in their car or what not. Avery, who has gotten the shaft of the story (though not Kai’s shaft), seriously needs some love and attention, and getting what’s she’s always wanted at school would likely be an interesting scene and possibly be good for Avery's self control/confidence. Bringing the ‘in-house’ women together again will likely be too much for their current accommodations, and having Gabriella, as the de facto pervert faction leader, going out of her way to push an orgy would be a great character moment as well as great sex scene. If Kai does go to school on Tuesday, it would be funny to have him return home with Gabriella having replaced Serenity’s bed with a King sized bed during the day in preparation for the war games she’s planned. Finally, a question, whose answer could be quite kinky. What are the limits of Kai’s charm/compel? Is he able to just affect a woman’s mind/heart, or can he affect a woman’s body? Can he request for one of his girls, Avery for example, to get horny, thus causing her body to circumvent her mind/inhibitions. Perhaps posing a question like, ‘can Kai force a woman’s body to heal’, can then lead into, ‘can Kai make his girls orgasm with just a question’. This could even be a way to help Avery lean into sex without having Kai touch her, allowing her to get comfortable with the embarrassment of a physical relationship. Finally, I do need to mention that I think you, Kaizer Wolf, write some damn good smut. Outside character dislikes, I don’t really have any complaints about your sex scene writing. Keep up the good work and feel free to ignore my words. But just to let me know you got my feedback, do respond to any of my comments with a middle finger emoji. I’ll likely lurk a while and read your other stories and will probably not talk anymore. Stay hydrated, and find time to relax. :)

Chosen Juan

Horny jail clearly wants me to shut up, thanks for reposting it for me tho :)

Chosen Juan

My main point in speaking about manipulation from Kai, is that he hasn’t shown outright manipulation yet, rather just the earliest of early signs. From my own life experience I tend to see perhaps non-signs as signs, meaning I might be reading more into some of his internal dialogue than I should. Again, thanks for responding in a clear thought with proper responses.

Christopher Miller

I share a lot of Juan's thoughts, but not all. Yes, I enjoy Miriam's character a lot, but I agree that she's"to much of a good thing" at this point. A temporary break from Miriam will do this saga some good, although I'll still be enjoying her return in the future after a significant amount of plot progress occurs. I'm really looking forward to the next few chapters away from the mansion. ☺️I believe I've already posted a few of the plot points I'm eagerly as anticipating.

Chosen Juan

No but seriously, putting complex emotions to paper is so difficult, and you’ve done it so well multiple times. For real keep up the great work!

KaizerWolf

It's not that. It might be partially the length of the response, though I'm not sure since my responses usually get posted without issue (even when long). But I've had several other people post comments (usually long comments, in sequence, one after the other), and one or two of their comments just don't show up for some reason. I still get an email with the comment, but on the post it just isn't there (and I know it's not being filtered, because Patreon doesn't have a comment moderation system -- the comment moderations are left up to the individual Creators).

KaizerWolf

You'll have to forgive me for being so repetitive. I usually answer comments as if I hadn't already answered another comment addressing the same topics, and if you read those comments sequentially, it sounds like I'm on a very long soapbox just repeating myself over and over. Not trying to beat a dead horse here, just wanted to make sure that I didn't miss anything (because sometimes people comment, but then for some reason, possibly due to notification settings, they never see that I responded to them, and might only see my response because they look through the comments of the most recent chapter, etc.).

Rob Thiebeau

The princess was chosen and the protector was from the lord that helped her escape. Could be noticed out and about together in a few chapters.

dfontana59

Ok, I'll chime in on the question of the name. Being of Italian heritage as much as the name is old school, wouldn't fly in today's times. Rosa is as good a name, so I guess I'd prefer Rosa

KaizerWolf

Right, and that was kind of what I was thinking. She was given an old school name, but she probably wouldn't want to use it given modern cultures. Not that I know a ton about Italian culture, but I still just kind of figured she wouldn't go by a first name like that.

dfontana59

I have known a few women from the neighborhood I grew up in that either had that name or aunt or grandmother having the name. While she may have been proud of the name as if I recall my folklore correctly is a powerful name but would have made for some teasing with her growing up. Going forward, maybe bring out her full name or even just Serafina occassionally