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May 26, 2024

NOTE: This chapter is a longer one (again basically two chapters at almost 9,000 words), but it doesn’t progress the plot a bunch. However, it is ‘setting things up’ so we can progress the plot a lot in the next few chapters.

 

<< Chapter 153 | Ch 1 (Book 1) | Ch 16 (Book 2) | Ch 31 (Book 3) | Ch 46 (Book 4) | Ch 61 (Book 5) | Ch 76 (Book 6) | Ch 91 (Book 7) | Ch 106 (Book 8) | Ch 121 (Book 9)

 

- CHAPTER 154 - 

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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?

Natalie will get her turn next chapter, and the plot will also progress (actual plot).

ALSO, Raegan will probably be the last girl added to the harem (other girls mentioned like Kelsey and potentially Eve will be included, but no new 'harem members' will be introduced -- there are female characters who will be coming up in the story, but they won't be love interests).

1. Thoughts on Raegan?

2. Thoughts on her abrupt 'change of heart' and this steamy scene?

There are plenty of girls who love 'hard and fast' like her in real life, so hopefully her change of heart doesn't seem unrealistic. Especially given the explanation of her personality both in the last chapter and this one.

3. Thoughts on Raegan's fangs and nails? (Something is obviously 'up' with her, but what do you think it is?)

 

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Comments

Maurice Maverick

Honestly, it feels like things have been going nuklear every 5 minutes for weeks now. In my opinion, seeing kai having a nice relaxed weekend with his girls would be kinda nice. But apart from that i love it.

KaizerWolf

I try to strike a balance between drama/action and slice-of-life, because whenever things get really dramatic nonstop, people always beg for more slice-of-life, and whenever there is a bunch of slice-of-life, other people always complain that there isn't enough plot. So I try to go back and forth, so that we can have stretches of both, since I don't think it's realistic for the characters to 'relax' and enjoy each other's company when things are stressful.

Jason

Other than the exposition about whore vs sugar daddy being repetitive in the Early-mid chapter, this was a great one! I know we are in Kai’s head, but sometimes the stream of consciousness sections swerve hard into “telling” rather than “showing”. But seriously- fantastic intro to a new mystery character!