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Combat Healer Ch. 60 (Patreon)

Published:
2024-04-28 21:06:07
Edited:
2024-06-09 19:11:21
Imported:
2024-07
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April 28, 2024

NOTE: This chapter is nearly 70% longer than my baseline (almost 2 chapters long), so I hope you enjoy!

ALSO, I generally write slower on this story just because it involves so much plotting.

Good QUALITY takes time!

 

PLOT!

>>> I need ideas of where you want the plot to go from here!

What do you want to see next? (after this chapter)

  

<< Chapter 59 | Ch 1 (Book 1) | Ch 15 (Book 2) | Ch 29 (Book 3)

 

- CHAPTER 60: Desire -

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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?

1. Did you like this chapter? What did you think about Blake's section with princess Marta?

2. Thoughts on Hailey's stats/abilities/race/Focus? Do you like Hailey?

3. Thoughts on what happened?

 

PLOT: What do you want to see next?

>>> Where do you want the plot to go from here? Who or what do you want to see more of?

 

 

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Comments

Jonathan Depenau

Id like to see all of Allie's women meet, and seeing an official team formed would be awesome. I'd like to see Allie push to really work on the info the Goddess passed to him, and how to apply that to himself and his women and/or team; I think it would be awesome to see strange and powerful new things happen with spells, skills, classes, and reaching new thresholds. I like Hailey as well, she's a keeper. Good chapter

HapiCpl

I'd like to see the story return to action and intrigue. Rather than a hostile takeover - it would be interesting to wage a war of intelligence between the nations. Similar to the financial attack that is happening, it would be good to leverage some of the skills of Allie's team to retaliate in ways that would not instigate a physical war. Get the Eldridge out of the way and use subterfuge and psychological warfare on them. Using the dungeon to travel secretly makes it possible to place and stage people and thanks to create confusion and implicate the evil leaders. Watching them crumble under the pressure of a psychological war is much more satisfying. His team would also need to identify incoming psychological attacks and counter the impact on their team and Kingdom. It would also be good to see more of Allie's peers and adventurer teams involved in guerilla warfare actions, both protecting their kingdom and helping execute the bigger intelligence war. Allie has been largely reactive over the last few chapters, so seeing him respond more strategically and with a larger purpose would allow for more depth of storyline. His team now has an extensive list of skills to leverage and he has a list of allies who now trust him even more. There are a number of sub-threads that need to be followed related to his current harem, so rather than adding more, it would be good to see them finding allies and building alliances from within the enemy stronghold, while trying to unravel the threads. We still haven't seen the full strategic mind of the Greater Eldritch so that could also be a powerful future plot. Having Allie and Queen Eliza engaged in a chess-like battle of the minds against a powerful Greater Eldritch, each moving their teams to attack our defend on the battlefield. In some cases, it would also be interesting to see them lose some battles to win the bigger war.