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March 30, 2024

NOTE: Things are getting interesting. I have quite a bit of fun things planned.

 

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- CHAPTER 149 -

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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?

1. Did you enjoy Claire's 'growth' discussed at the beginning?

2. Did anything interesting stick out to you?

3. Did you enjoy the meeting with Tracey?

 

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Comments

Christopher Miller

As far as Serenity's "medical emergency", couldn't Miriam write her a fake doctor's note to give her several days off? Between her medical knowledge and swinging some money to make a fake letterhead/website or charm a doctor in an established practice. She could potentially give any of the extended family a believable excuse to avoid situations that leave them exposed.

Christopher Miller

Oh, and maybe Michelle should tag along to one of Kai's visits to Tracey's place? Not only would Claire love that, but it would be fun to see Tracey's reaction to seeing Michelle again.

Noitcereon

Personally I find the constant sex to be a bit too much (a bit of flirting is fine). I like there to be at least a chapter or two without sex, since we're so long into the story. Not being bombarded with sex scenes also make the sex scenes feel more impactful, while progressing the plot faster. If it is integral that sex needs to happen as frequently as it does, perhaps one can skim over them a bit instead of going into details. That's just my two cents, take it or leave it :)

KaizerWolf

This story has arcs that last roughly 10 to 30 chapters. Some arcs are very heavily focused on plot, and other arcs are heavily focused more on slice-of-life stuff. I try to do an overall balance of going back and forth between the two, because while you are saying that you want less steamy stuff, others are saying they want more. It's impossible for me to make everyone happy.