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March 16, 2024

NOTE: Well, this chapter is a lot of things. Hope you enjoy!

  

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- CHAPTER 58: Chosen -

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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?

Lots of developments here.

Wren is clearly still a work in progress. Hopefully the Shackle situation was an interesting development.

Thoughts on the princess Marta?

 

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Itsasecret

Complete coincidence on timing but I'm just re-reading chapter 60 of IDH and they are talking about soul sharing.

Grant

Forgive me, but I'm actually torn about this chapter. It ended in a very positive way, but I agree with the goddess that denying the "shackle" and leaving Marta would have been more merciful. I have to agree with others here: I was always under the impression that Soulmate was solely between Eliza and Allister so I was having trouble connecting why Wren would be affected, and I don't remember anything about Eliza/Wren being a conflict of souls. I had assumed that if the story went on long enough, Eliza would put her life on the line to save Allie, but first I always assumed Allie would find a way to prevent an ultimate sacrifice and Secondly even with an explanation, I probably could not accept the Eliza and Wren cannot exist at the same time trope. Wren is a monster, a copy. She's not some time traveling version of Eliza where the "original" ceases to exist.