May NSFW Redo WIP (Patreon)

So I did some thinking and decided to redo the NSFW piece for this month. While it's still something I plan on finishing up in the future it wasn't quite NSFW enough. 

Here's where I'm at so far, thoughts?  ( ͡ ͡° ͜ ʖ ͡ ͡°) 

-Monori