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[Thera] 2.06 (Removed for KU) (Patreon)

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2022-07-19 11:19:43
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(Removed for KU)

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Lon

My condolences melasD. Take care of yourself. Ohh, after what happened one year ago... Thera was born like 1 year ago right? And this other Mystic Turtle is probably sibling. Next chapter will be fun.

Phil Pennock

Deepest condolences. It feels awkward to say this but you do usually ask, so: one typo, and feedback. “They were seaweed and seashells as clothing”: “were” -> “wore”. Feedback: the conversation with the guards was very stilted and not up to your usual standard. I know you want to post more (talking about writing on the plane), but seriously, take time to grieve. Revisit the chapter in a month or so to rewrite that dialogue, and try to take a break. Working now will just mess you up more. If you think you must do something then perhaps sketch out more arcs or stories but don’t flesh them out. Not yet. I can’t speak for other patrons, but I’m not going anywhere. We’ll be here for you when you get back to writing.