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Lon

I entered a state of panic when Salvos was unhappy about not being able to kill people. Jesus she is scary.

Robert

Can't wait for Sal to sign up and embarras Salvos into a grand skill.

Aclys

It's not that she wont be able to kill them, its that she wont gain much/any worthwhile experience from all that work.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Anonymous

Is there anyway you can write a different POV? Maybe the devil or headmaster or teachers? We could get progress update on how salvo's is fairing in the academy so far and it will break up the mundane of current salvo's POV

Melting Sky

The Devil already did a pretty good job of that. Also, I imagine the Devil's POV would be horrendously spoilerish. He may play the fool, but there is a method to his madness. The Headmaster could be a fun POV, but people tend to screech like a howler monkey with its testicles in a wood chipper the moment an author switches to an alternate POV even if it's absolutely crucial to the plot.

Anonymous

She just assumed the tournament would be a fight to the death and was dissapointed when her expectations were wrong. The idea of combat for sport/entertainment is probably very unusual for Salvos, who was born into a world where nearly everyone she met tried to kill her.

Yeno Memevig

Wait till Sal shows up replacing Salvos' space magic teacher

Anonymous

I get exhausted when the author doesn't switch up on POV. It becomes less doing and more telling☹️