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156. Weak Hero

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[Lich - Lvl. 143]

“Hello, my beautiful Lilian. It has been so long since I last saw you.”

An ethereal voice spoke out, wispy, as if his words were made of smoke. I aimed the Nebular Bow at him, feeling a chill creep up my shoulders, wrangling around my neck, threatening to suffocate me.

“You’re… the Lich? There’s no one here called Lilian. What do you want?”

I was excited to meet him. He was supposed to be a Human who transcended the need to sleep or eat. A [Hero] who came to this world and became incredibly powerful unlike Daniel. However, I was now nervous. Afraid, even.

Because he didn’t come here to befriend us. The magic I sensed gathering around him— it was filled with the intent to kill.

“Foolish Demon.”

He spoke dismissively, his flaming eyes flickering. His sable robes were untouched by the gust of wind billowing behind him, blaring like the alarms in my head, warning me to flee. I stood my ground as a cackle left his unhinged jaw.

“I have slain thousands of your kind with only my left hand, and brought down those far above your level with only my right. Do not challenge me or you will perish.”

I didn’t back down. Flame and ember engulfed my being as my companions readied themselves for this powerful enemy.

“Tell us why you’ve come here, Lich.”

Daniel boldly stepped forward on wobbly legs. He was still drunk. That idiot.

The Lich’s head tilted. He peered at the [Hero]. There was a moment’s pause as his flaming eyes seemed to burn through the Human man. Finally, he shook his head, disappointed.

“Pathetic.”

“Hey! You don’t get to call him pathetic!”

I stood beside my companion, nodding. Daniel blinked, facing me.

“Salvos…”

“Just because he’s weak, and stupid, and very bad at fighting despite being a [Hero], doesn’t mean he’s pathetic at all! Unlike you, he’s still alive!”

“...why did I think you’d actually defend me?”

Daniel sighed as I shot him a thumbs-up. The Lich ignored us. His gaze slid over our slipper figures, resting gently at Edithe.

“Ah, Lilian, you haven’t aged a day since I last saw you.”

Edithe narrowed her eyes.

“Wait, you’re talking to me? I’m not Lilian—”

He almost seemed to hover as he drew closer. We tensed as he continued.

“Why did you leave me, my darling? My gorgeous red flower. My…”

His voice trailed off. A word was said, but I couldn’t understand it. I rubbed my ears as Daniel cringed.

Edithe stared at him.

“What was that?”

“My lovely Lilian. Come here…”

Again, the word was cut off. I cocked my head as I saw Daniel buried his face in his hands.

“What’s he saying? He’s speaking English, right?”

The Human man nodded. Slowly, he faced me with his red cheeks, murmuring in English.

“He’s saying ‘my bae’. He’s calling Edithe ‘bae’.”

“Huh.”

I didn’t really get what was wrong with it, but Daniel was overwhelmed with embarrassment. Edithe was confused as well. But she didn’t have time to voice her thoughts as the Lich decided the time for talk was over.

“Return my beloved to me, and you will have my eternal gratitude. Keep her, and know that no salvation awaits your future.”

He was mad. He thought Edithe was Lilian, ignoring her words that she was not. We had no choice. I wasn’t just going to part ways with my companion because a bag of walking bones told me to. This would be our toughest fight yet. But just as we defeated Lucerna, we’d beat him back.

I glanced over at Edithe, and she nodded.

“No.”

I spoke simply, loosing the Nebular Arrow straight at him. The bolt slowed, being covered from its tip in a frozen box. It halted mid-air, before dropping to the ground and shattering into tiny icicles. I narrowed my eyes.

The Nebular Arrow wasn’t hot, per se. However, its base form was still created from fire. It shouldn’t have been frozen like that. Not that easily.

“Weak—”

The Lich didn't finish. Edithe leapt to the side, unleashing a blazing arrow straight at him. He raised a hand in her direction, creating a wall of solid ice. A powerful blast erupted from Edithe’s Skill, but it left not even a dent on the mirror-like surface.

“Daniel!”

My body was shifting. I beat my foot forward, placing my two arms on the ground to steady myself. More arms sprouted out next to my shoulders as I morphed into a taller, hunched form with a skull-like face.

The Human man placed a hand on my shoulder, nodding.

“[The Will of the Hero]!”

Stats:

[Available Stat Points: 0]

[Vitality]: 123 (+5) (+5%) (+10%)

[Strength]: 100 (+5) (+5%) (+10%)

[Endurance]: 108 (+5) (+5%) (+10%)

[Wisdom]: 184 (+5) (+6) (+5%) (+10%)

[Agility]: 241 (+5) (+5%) (+10%)

Edithe was knocked back by a strong gust of icy wind. Her body was coated in a thin layer of ice. However, it didn’t freeze her. It shattered her barrier, but the magic grew immensely weaker when it reached her.

I leapt past the flying red-haired woman, my claws being overcome with a black flame. I barreled straight for the Lich, dodging spikes of ice as they shot out of the ground. A burst of flame carried me over it, [Haste] taking effect on me and my companions.

“Kneel.”

I pointed at the Lich as I descended upon him, a falling star from above. The Lich’s fiery eyes dimmed for a moment. He stood still, unable to react.

“[Radiant Slash]!”

And I dug my claws deep into his chest. They tore through his robes— there was some kind of protective enchantment there. But it broke under the pressure from my attack. His bones caved in, his ribs shattering, his skull flying off his spine.

A grin spread across my face as I bared my teeth.

But no words resounded in my head.

“What…?”

The fallen skull moved its jaw.

“[Rimebloom].”

I leapt away as the Lich spoke. But it was too late. The ground beneath the pile of bones turned death-white. A sphere of ice exploded out, instantly freezing everything within its radius. It consumed the whole town, spreading out into the field of blight flowers and the rolling flatlands, turning it all into a frozen sculpture.

My companions— perhaps it was because they were far enough away, they managed to react. They used my [Haste] to flee, caught only at the edge of the ice blast. But even with my Greaves of the Wanderer, I couldn’t avoid the attack. I was sent flying away, my flaming armor shattering into pieces, and my Pendant of Greater Protection losing its magic.

A thin layer of frost crept over my body. I tore it away, breathing heavily.

“How did he do that?”

I stared at the Lich as his body slowly repaired itself, the fallen bones flying back up to his body as he sauntered over to his skull, picking it back up. Edithe coughed as she picked herself back up.

“He’s a Lich— we can’t destroy his body. We have to find the place where his life force is stored.”

“But that means…”

We couldn’t kill him. Even if we threw the most powerful spells and attacks his way, the Lich would always survive it.

He couldn’t be defeated.

Spinning around, he faced us. He said nothing, his time for talk over. Raising a hand to the sky, he spoke softly.

“[Comet Hail—”

“[Hero’s Slash]!”

Daniel swung his blade over his head. The weapon gleamed with a white energy that lit up the night. The Lich caught the Human man by the arm, a freeze grip that halted his attack entirely. The energy was released past the Lich. The remnants of white light striking out, tearing down the frozen houses to the ground.

“I know all your tricks, boy. I have walked your footsteps. I have done more than you could ever hope to accomplish.”

The [Hero] struck out at the Lich with his free hand. A deafening thud echoed as I rushed over to help him. His fist connected, but it didn’t even leave a crack on the skull. The Lich shook his head.

“[Comet Hail].”

The sky darkened. The mist from before gathered into clouds above. White clouds. One that rained meteors of ice. My eyes widened as I saw chunks of frozen rock falling at the earth, moving faster than even the arrows of the [Skeleton Archers]. It tore apart the earth, a powerful magic that would permanently change the landscape into a field of craters.

I bounded around the falling ice meteors, watching as my companion struggled helplessly in the Lich’s grasps. There was a crack. A scream. And I reached the Lich, striking at him from behind with a [Barrage of Cinders].

It forced him to let go of Daniel. I broke his brittle bones with six rapid strikes. Then I grabbed him and tossed him into one of his own falling comets. The large chunk of ice smashed him back down. It exploded on him and dug deep into the earth.

But that wasn’t all. [Demon’s Mark]. The pillar of crimson flames shot out of the earth, its heat felt even from where I stood. It melted the Lich’s ice. The frozen wasteland he turned this place into was now being dried up in an instant.

I bent over Daniel. He wasn’t moving.

“Daniel, are you—”

I paused. His right arm was limp. But more than that, it was entirely shattered. I could see the whites of his bone peeking out of his skin, blood seeping out around it, instantly freezing from the extreme weather.

“Healing potion, where’s the healing potion?”

“Behind you, Salvos!”

Edithe called out as she blew apart a falling comet. I spun around, letting out a plume of blue fire from my mouth with a roar. The Lich returned with a cold breath. A zephyr that froze even my most powerful flames.

“Begone, Demon.”

He flicked a finger, and a lance of ice shot at my shoulder. I stumbled back, gritting my teeth.

“You—”

I gathered everything I had. Right now, I was stronger than I have ever been. I raged with my fire, baring my teeth at him. [The Primordial Spark] erupted like a wildfire that spread out at the Lich.

But he shook his head.

“[Ray of Frost].”

It was a simple sounding Skill. It didn’t sound like it’d do much. And yet, as he raised his hand, a beam of ice shot out and cut through the earth. It didn’t just dig a shallow hole, one that barely scratched the ground’s surface. It left a scar behind where it cut.

It opened up a canyon where it touched the earth. A massive crevice that fell deeper than even the deepest caves I have ever been in. It came at me, a magic that made my most powerful flames wink out of existence in a mere moment.

I braced for the attack. It would kill me. But I couldn’t dodge it. Not this. It came—

“Stop!”

A voice called out. Edithe stood before me, her arms spread wide. The Lich’s magic… disappeared. A ravine lay before her. But she stood in defiance against this destruction.

“I’ll go with you. Just please, don’t hurt my friends.”

I stared at her.

“What are you doing, Edithe?”

She glanced back at me, a wry smile on her face. Behind her, the tempest of ice comets came to a halt. The Lich approached her, joy clear in his voice.

“You’ve finally come back to me, Lilian. Yes, they may live. Thank you for bringing  her to me. Oh, thank you.”

His tone changed. He sounded grateful towards us. I wasn’t sure what was going on, but he took Edithe by the arms from behind. I sputtered.

“You—”

“Salvos.”

She placed a hand on my shoulder. Slowly, both her arms wrapped around my neck. She shook her head and whispered.

“Take Daniel and get out of here.”

The Lich pulled her away as she drew her hands back. I paused, seeing what was in her hand. Nodding, I hefted the Human man over my shoulder. I ran off before the Lich could change his mind, although he likely wouldn’t.

He was too preoccupied with Edithe. He didn’t even look once at me as I disappeared into the distance. I glanced back, watching Edithe as she walked away, following after the Lich, heading to the northwest.

And then she was gone.


Author’s Note:

I’m honestly just very tired right now. Do me a favor guys: if you have a complaint, either keep it constructive, or don’t say anything at all if you can’t be constructive.

The amount of negativity I’ve been getting for the past few chapters is especially overwhelming right now because I’m A) writing 3+ chapters a day, B) in the midsts of moving apartments and speaking to lawyers, and C) the issue people have been having hasn’t been an issue in my eyes, so there’s nothing to change at all.

I’m willing to accept C) when I’m less tired. But right now, I just need a clear mind to focus on writing. Otherwise, I’ll have no choice but to stop reading comments entirely. Thank you.

Comments

Katherine

Eh, it feels like people are more angry than usual lately. Selkie got a backlash too all because they released three interludes that everyone knew was coming anyway.

Addanc

Hey MelasD. I have a complaint. I want moar salvos but there no moar chapters

Lictor Magnus

You either die a hero or live long enough to become a crazy dry bones bowser that ignores the perfectly good princess right in right of you.

Lictor Magnus

The anger at the Selkie interludes has always confused me. Plenty of stories have epilogues from a different characters perspective that eventually connects to the main tale.

Shakango Resident

ou just keep on trucking Melas people are gonna people but hey I appreciate what you do.

Paul Matson

Lich escalation, thanks for the chapter!

Anonymous

Thank you for the chapters. I'm loving the new skills! They have their pros and cons, and I think it will be tons of fun to see how the skills grow. Plus seeing how Salvos deals with new things is always amusing!

Robert

There was definitely lot of malicious trolling going on in the comment section of the last few chapters. I think I remained almost completely constructive but for my part I apologize. The power gamer in me definitely influences how I mentally approach any story involving numbers and skills.

Kevin Caffrey

I don’t know if this will help your mental state or not, but most people only criticize stories if they care about it. In a way, it can be considered a compliment. I know if I dislike a story I will usually just stop reading, whereas I’m more willing to try to provide feedback to an author for stories I like. Granted, some of the comments have been pretty trolly, but it seems like they are a vocal minority.

MelasD

I'm generally fine with feedback as long as it is pointing out a problem. Complaining about a new Skill doesn't seem like there's any solution other than to retcon everything I have planned for it. Imagine you're the chef at a restaurant. Someone orders the steak, but the steak is an American ribeye. The customer wanted American sirloin, and is unhappy they didn't get American sirloin. So, march up to the chef and start complaining to the chef's face. No one will be happy about it. Everyone agrees that these kinds of customers haggling customer service employees are the worst. So, why do people do that online too? It just baffles me. And it really hurts my head and kills my productivity.

riseris

I think the biggest issue is that you established that skills with downsides would come with big bonuses to make up for it, except Salvos got a big nerf yo her primary racial characteristic with literally nothing to show for it. Also there still hasn’t been any kind of explanation yet for the stupidity of her passing out immediately upon switching to mortal form. That’s still beyond dumb in my opinion. Also honestly I haven’t seen any excessively negative criticism in the previous chapters. At least nothing near what I would consider excessive. Most all the criticism has been pretty constructive in my opinion.

MelasD

> except Salvos got a big nerf yo her primary racial characteristic with literally nothing to show for it She only needs to sleep as a mortal, so it's not a nerf to her primary racial characteristic. She can eat and sleep to blend in better with mortals. She no longer has a -4 to her Stats as a mortal. If you want to talk about downsides: back when she first got [Mortal Form], she was getting a total of around -20 to -25, which was around 10% of her total Stat Points at the time. > Also there still hasn’t been any kind of explanation yet for the stupidity of her passing out immediately upon switching to mortal form. It has been explained. She needs to sleep to set her sleep schedule in her new form. As a Kobold, she sleeps 3 hours, Cyclops 6 hours, Human 8 hours. > Also honestly I haven’t seen any excessively negative criticism in the previous chapters. You haven't, but I have.

Robert

Constructive comment/question The evolution description for Daeva said it was the next step in a changeling's evolution. While the added limitations for partial mortality make it unattractive to use unless absolutely necessary. Since eating and sleeping are part of the skill now it seems logical to assume that these are what "the next step," is referring to, whether by gaining a better understanding of mortals by living like one or something else. These exact same additions are are also what make it unattractive to use. In one of the comments from a previous chapter you mentioned that it wasn't really a nerf because Salvos would only really use the skill in settlements. Implying that you're aware that the skill is unattractive to use. With this in mind it seems like there's a clash between the stated intention of the evolution path and the tools the path gave to accomplish that stated intention. For the final version it might be worth considering an alteration to the evolution description to eliminate this clash.

Anonymous

The Lich was scary and amazing. Loved the chapter - don’t listen to the negative stuff! It’s your story, tell it your way.

Lowe K. Lyesmith

The series is just kinda TOO GOOD, so people are really passionate about the characters. Which unfortunately translates to immature comments.

Lowe K. Lyesmith

People calling other people "bae" are always scary. Bein a Lich is just icing on the skull.

Lowe K. Lyesmith

The only thing that seems like a real nerf is the amount of time needed between transformations (NOT the sleep), it would be fairer if the only limit were the needed sleep time after mortal transformation. Buuuuut... there could obviously be (probably is) a narrative reason for that, so I'm not even sure about this. (really wish I were a demon, having to sleep and eat really is a bother 😭)

buca117

In fairness, this last year has hit a lot of people really hard. MelasD, you moved house and are busy doing something you love but are struggling with at this present moment. A lot of people have lost loved ones, lost income, lost friendships, lost any sense of security whatsoever, and the thin threads keeping them going are the handful of chapters they're getting from their favorite authors. So when things start going wrong even there, their already stressed psyches lash out inordinately strongly. Try not to take the unreasonable negativity as an attack and treat it as what it probably is: the emotional outburst of a person that's taken a beating day after day for more than a year.

AlyxHaestrom

I'm loving the story, keep doing you! Good luck with all the real life stuff, I know how stressful that can be.

Anonymous

I've noticed that, at least from what I see, patreon comments are generally the most negative for some reason. Weird that it's like that, and I disagree with most of them - like the ones saying partial mortality is worse if you look at it only from a combat perspective at lvl 1 while ignoring everything else

Elle

Sorry there's been so much negativity. The story is great, you're doing great - and besides, you're the one that knows how it's going to unfold. We don't. Try not to let it get you down

Heraclitus

Yeah, I really don't get the complaining. It seems kind of obvious that one of the main themes of the new evolution was a better ability to blend in with mortals. That is to say, while it definitely made her stronger, not literally every aspect and skill was centered around purely increasing her strength. Some parts did, and others didn't. You can argue that there are downsides to the evolution, but only if you see everything in terms of did it make her stronger or not. There are other aspects to evolutions beyond that. Especially when the major thrust of her evolutions haven't been getting more powerful (she didn't chose those), but instead blending in and better understanding mortals. Which she can obviously do now.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Garis

Some people can't understand "balance" it's why extremely OP protagonists are popular.