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152. A Dime a Dozen

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“Ugh, what happened?”

I groaned as I sat up, rubbing my head. There was this dreadful feeling hanging over my head— a haze that seemed to cloud my memory of the moments before I collapsed. Why did I lose my consciousness? My mind slowly whirred. Was I knocked unconscious?

I blinked, the implications of such a thing settling in. Was I attacked?

I leapt to my feet, glancing around, creating a Star Forge at my side. Readying myself for an attack from any direction, I stood steadfast, peering through the foliage of trees, only to see a bright light peeking over the horizon.

“Huh. It’s… morning?”

“It is.”

I nearly jumped as a voice answered me. Daniel sat under a tree, yawning as he faced me. I looked at him, then at the red-haired woman napping off to the side. Wasn’t Edithe the one supposed to be keeping watch?

Why was Daniel the one awake now?

“What happened?”

I was very confused. Perplexed by the whole situation. The Human man just sighed, speaking bluntly.

“You fell asleep, Salvos.”

I stared at him.

“What?”

“Yeah, you transformed into a Human and immediately dozed off.”

“...you’re lying.”

He shrugged.

“That’s what Edithe told me. You can ask her when she wakes up— or just go back to sleep. It’s up to you.”

Standing up, Daniel stretched his arms and legs before sauntering over to the campfire. He produced some foodstuff, no longer looking at me as he spoke.

“Since you can sleep now, why not try having some breakfast? Maybe you’ll actually like it.”

I watched the Human man in disbelief. He was lying— he had to be lying. And yet, a groggy feeling stopped me from getting to my feet. It made me feel lazy. Like I didn’t want to move. Like I just wanted to lie down and let darkness take over me.

My eyes widened, and reality shattered.

“NOOOOOOO—”

—--

My companions stared at me as I rocked back and forth, hugging my legs tightly to my chest. They were having their first meal of the day. Breakfast, or whatever you called it. The smell of the food wafted my way, but I didn’t indulge in such disgusting practices like them.

I was a Demon, not a Human!

“You sure you’re not going to try any, Salvos?”

Edithe proffered me some dried meat. I shook my head vehemently.

“Absolutely not! I don’t have to eat, nor do I want to eat!”

She exchanged a dubious look with Daniel. He grinned as he scarfed down his food.

“Well— of course. You don’t have to eat, just like you don’t have to sleep too, right?”

I glared at him.

“I don’t need to sleep! I stopped feeling sleepy the moment I transformed out of that stupid Human form!”

I crossed my arms, scowling. I was now back to being myself, no longer pretending to be a mortal. I had my enchanting horns and comforting claws back on me.

“It’s because of that [Partial Mortality] Skill— when I transform into you stupid Mortals, I get your dumb, dumb, dumb needs to sleep and eat too!”

I made sure to emphasize the last ‘dumb’ to make it clear how dumb I thought this dumb situation was. Somehow, Edithe still didn’t get it.

“Come on, Salvos. It really isn’t that bad. Maybe the reason you’ve always hated food is because you never really had a need for it. You could just transform back to a Human and give it a little taste test, right?”

“No!”

I stood up, stamping a foot on the ground.

“I will not do that! I’m never going to be a Human, or Kobold, or Cyclops ever again!”

Spinning around, I marched five steps— and sat down. My companions watched me come to a stop, blinking. They spoke at the same time.

“What are you doing, Salvos?”

I hesitated.

“I… um, have to choose a Class. So, I’ll be blacking out now.”

Class Available:

Requirements for twelve Classes have been met from reaching Level 100 in your Subspecies!

Twelve?! I had twelve Class options for me to choose from? Edithe told me that most Humans only got five or six Classes to choose from during their first ever advancement. I got double that! I excitedly began sifting through my choices.

[Warrior]

A [Warrior] is a beginner Class specializing in melee combat. A [Warrior] fights with their brawn over their brain. They rarely use magic, preferring to bring the fight to their enemies than otherwise.

+3 to [Vitality]

+3 to [Strength]

+1 to [Endurance]

+1 to [Wisdom]

+1 to [Agility]

Huh. That sucked. It was just so… basic? There was no way I was choosing the straightforward [Warrior] pick as my Class. Next!

[Mage]

A [Mage] is a beginner Class specializing in magic A [Mage] manipulates mana to do their bidding. They rarely get their hands dirty in combat, using spells to defeat their enemies above all else.

+3 to [Endurance]

+3 to [Wisdom]

+1 to [Vitality]

+1 to [Strength]

+1 to [Agility]

Another beginner Class? Alright, moving on.

[Archer]

An [Archer] is a beginner Class specializing in...

Again? Skipped.

[Rogue]

A [Rogue] is a beginner Class specializing in...

Seriously? How many ‘beginner’ Classes were there?

I was Level 100. An Archdemon. I have vanquished thousands of foes and overcome enemies double my level. I have achieved feats that no one else in entire nations could ever hope to match.

From the Netherworld to the Plaguelands, I survived the harshest environments, escaped encounters with the strongest monsters and Demons, and mastered powerful magic through sheer talent alone.

I was Salvos.

I wasn’t going to accept any beginner option for my first ever Class!

I still have eight more Classes to choose from. The next one better be good!

[Runner]

A [Runner] is a beginner Class of the [Messenger] path...

[Baker Apprentice]

A [Baker Apprentice] is a beginner Class of the [Baker] path...

Three more. Surely there had to be at least one good option—

[Deacon]

A [Deacon] is a beginner Class of the [Priest] path…

[Smith Apprentice]

A [Smith Apprentice] is a beginner Class of the [Smith] path...

Why?

Is this happening because I was mean to Daniel?

I promise not to be mean to Daniel ever again.

Please just give me something that’s not a beginner Class. It doesn’t have to be super special. Anything will do! Just something that’s not for beginners!

[Precise Archer]

A [Precise Archer] is an [Archer] who has demonstrated accuracy beyond the beginner level. Their marksmanship would be lauded by lords and ladies, praised for their ability to strike each and every one of their targets without any aid from their Skills.

+5 to [Endurance]

+3 to [Strength]

+3 to [Agility]

+1 to [Vitality]

+1 to [Wisdom]

This was… something. It was certainly better than what I was given so far. But I wouldn’t really say it was good. It was better. That was it.

Hopefully things kept improving.

[Summoner]

A [Summoner] is a [Mage] specialized in Spirit summoning. They have befriended Spiritkind and made a pact with them. Now, they do not fight alone, instead accompanied by the Spirits whom they have found as allies at their side.

+5 to [Wisdom]

+3 to [Endurance]

+2 to [Vitality]

+1 to [Strength]

+ 1 to [Agility]

A [Summoner] wasn’t a basic Class, huh? I was pretty sure Edithe explained it to me once. One could become a [Summoner] at nearly any level. Its requirements were fairly simple: you simply had to be a practitioner of magic while interacting with Spirits a great deal.

It wasn’t really anything special. But… if I became a [Summoner], I’d be able to summon Mistshard and Druma, wouldn’t I?

Or would me being a Demon get in the way of that?

I was definitely considering this path. Maybe it would even help with becoming a kind of [Space Mage] in the future!

[Diabolist]

A [Diabolist] is a [Mage] who has studied Demonkind, becoming a pariah, living in exile from society. They have seen the desolation of the Netherworld, spoken with ambassadors of the Demon King, and met Archdemons of great power. The [Diabolist] seeks this power, learning the ways and magicks of Demons, no longer interested in the teachings of mortal men.

+8 to [Wisdom]

+5 to [Vitality]

+5 to [Endurance]

+2 to [Strength]

+2 to [Agility]

Now this— this is good.

This seemed like the kind of Class you’d get at Level 40, not Level 10. It was exactly what I was hoping to get, considering everything I’ve done. I would’ve chosen it, no questions asked, if not for the description.

Learning the ways and magicks of Demons? This Class… maybe it was very beneficial for mortals. However, I was already a Demon. I already knew ‘Demon magic’, right?

I still had one more option. I hoped it would be good.

[Adept of the Fae]

An [Adept of the Fae] is a [Mage] who seeks out the mysteries of Fairykind. They wish to learn the mystic arts which make these Fairies so special— the secrets which the Oracle of Light, Melissa, kept to herself until her death. This pursuit may be a foolish one, with no teacher to guide them, but a [Adept of the Fae]’s curiosity will drive them forward in their path regardless of the consequences.

+10 to [Wisdom]

+5 to [Vitality]

...consequences?

This description made me wary. The Stat Points it gave out were very specialized too. Once again, it felt fitting. Like the [Diabolist]. But this took it a step even further.

I was only worried about what it said towards the end. It was ominous. Yet, it would further my goal, no?

Fairies were masters of space magic. That was how they could cross from the Spirit Plane to the Mortal Realm all by themselves. I needed to learn how to do that. I scoured the sprawling Motharis Mountain Range in search of the dangerous Brilsum Ruins Dungeon just so I could speak with a Fairy.

It was time for me to choose. I had a dozen options. Most of the Classes were worthless to me. Only [Summoner], [Diabolist], and [Adept of the Fae] had any worth.

[Diabolist], however, was… almost redundant. It would let me master Demon magic. I was a Demon. I knew Demon magic by default. Maybe it was a Class that Human [Cultists] lost their minds over, if they got the option for it. It definitely had the best Stat boost of all my choices. It might be the strongest of them.

But it was the least useful to me.

So, all that was left was [Summoner] and [Adept of the Fae]. If I chose the former, I might be able to see Mistshard and Druma again. We’d be able to fight alongside each other, just as we once did over a year ago.

Edithe wouldn’t have to be upset that she wasn’t a [Summoner] any longer, because I’d be able to summon her Spirits for her any time she wanted. However, did she want that? Could Mistshard and Druma even keep up with us now that we were around Level 100? And going back a little bit, was it even possible for me to summon Spirits as a Demon?

It was too uncertain. I wanted it. I vied for things to return to what they once were. But I had accepted that things changed, and even if I tried to reverse things to the old, it wouldn’t be the same.

Honestly, there really was only one option for me the entire time. I was given twelve Classes. Only one of them truly suited me.

[Adept of the Fae]. Could it be dangerous? Probably. But a vague, nebulous warning wasn’t going to stop me. It gave me what I wanted and needed, both at the same time.

It was the only logical choice for me.

Class Chosen!

You now have the Class [Adept of the Fae]!

Gained 5 Stat Points!

[Wisdom] +10

[Vitality] +5

Gained 3 Secondary Skill Slots!

Gained 3 Secondary Skill Points!

Secondary Skill [Banish] is now available!

Secondary Skill [Spatial Sight] is now available!

—--

“Ouch… my head.”

Waking up from an evolution never really felt like anything. It was like the world vanished for a moment, reappearing shortly after. However, waking up from getting a Class was painful.

Whatever change that went through me didn’t affect my body at all. It only affected my mind, and it made my head ache with intense pain. I glanced up, blinking as I saw a figure standing over me.

Daniel had his arms cross, a sneer spread across his face.

“Good morning, sleepyhead. How was your nap?”

I stared at him. Slowly, I got to my feet, and he braced himself.

“Wait, that was a joke, don’t—”

I walked past him, murmuring to myself.

“You promised not to be mean to him. Just ignore him. You promised—”

He blinked as I continued on my way.

“...oh thank god, I thought my balls were screwed.”

I didn’t hit him. I had other things to do. I still had a Title to choose, after all. I got them at Level 100, so they should all be good, right?

Title for Great Feats:

Requirements for two Titles have been met!

You now have three Titles available!

Titles:

(Unarith’s Fiend)

You have slain the High Zealot of Unarith and brought chaos and fear into the city! The terror you have caused makes you a Demon in the eyes of the Cult of the Old Gods, bolstering your spirit and your pride!

+5 to [Vitality]

+7 to [Strength]

+3 to [Endurance]

+3 to [Wisdom]

+5 to [Agility]

(Scale Champion)

You have won the Trial of the Scales, bringing victory on behalf of the Risen Dragons! They see you as their champion, the brave warrior who fought for their cause, earning you their praise and gratitude!

+4 to [Vitality]

+4 to [Strength]

+4 to [Endurance]

+4 to [Wisdom]

+4 to [Agility]

(Savior of Falisfield)

You have liberated Nixa’s largest province of Falisfield from a rampaging Greater Demon! You have saved the city of Silvergrove from falling, and avenged all those who have been killed in the destruction! You are a hero in the people’s eyes!

+3 to [Vitality]

+5 to [Strength]

+5 to [Endurance]

+3 to [Wisdom]

+3 to [Agility]

...these Titles sucked.

I'm sticking with what I have for now.


Author's Note:

I'm surprised that many people didn't realize Salvos needed to sleep because she transformed to a Human, and that it's not a need when she isn't transformed. I thought it was quite clear last chapter, but apparently it wasn't. Tried clarifying it this chap, let me know if it was clear enough.

gib thoughts as usual

Comments

Adam Daw

Classes were a bit of a letdown :/

Lictor Magnus

I thought it was clear, but I could see how people would be confused. Whenever this goes out to the public maybe you should put up an authors note about it at the end. Or you could just ignore the comments until this chapter comes out lol

MelasD

Nah, comments are good. Let’s me know to clarify and improve stuff

Kevin Caffrey

I thought it was clear, but I was also confused that it hit her immediately. It makes things pretty awkward if she accumulates some sort of sleep/hunger debt in her default form and has it hit her all at once after she transforms. On the other hand, it would also be a bit broken if she could avoid sleep altogether by just switching out of mortal form when she gets sleepy. The thing that makes the most sense to me is if she accumulates fatigue and hunter in her mortal form, so after a cumulative of 16 hours or so in mortal form she would need to sleep (even if that’s spread out over multiple instances of mortal form). From a narrative point of view it was impactful for her to pass out right away after getting the skill, but it also didn’t make a lot of sense.

Adam Daw

I mean, the baker and the Smith were funny :D and I thought the summoner was nice reference to their past adventures. The Fae and Spacial Magics stuff makes sense - tying those two together isn't uncommon. Maybe it will become clear that this was actually quite rare to unlock and only available due to her encounter with the fae, which is probably obvious and certainly seemed like a rare occurrence. The description just seemed a little light. I guess we'll have to see what the abilities actually "do".

Nick Tinsley

she really did kinda get skrewed for a capstone level she really got nothing good. isn't this the level that makes normal demons capable of fighting kingdoms solo...she got the desire to never use one of her primary skills again and a couple shit spells

Kevin Caffrey

She hasn’t looked at the non general skills yet, though, has she? It’s a bit early to call them shit.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. Gotta say I thought the implication of her passing out was extremely clear. A really good example of show not tell.

Anonymous

And now her flames will be white and of creation :P

luda305

"And we the Fae shall call you Twinkletoes." "I am Salvos." (Add emphasis) "...Salvos Twinkletoes." "...i can live with that. "

Gonvas

I didn't realize that her sleepiness was just "normal" sleep. Since it came out of nowhere and she couldn't resist it ... (RKO xD )

Robert

So I have a couple of questions regarding this. 1. Obviously it was intended for laughs and to open it up for Salvos to freak out in this chapter but what is the in universe reason for this fatigue hitting Salvos all at once? Was there some hidden fatigue bar that was building up the entire time Salvos was pretending to be human? If so was that bar just never going to matter if she decided to become a matriarch instead? 2. Is this eating and sleeping requirement of mortal form going to build up and force Salvos to eventually sleep and eat if she wants to be able to use her skill? If so is the compensation of having not having lowered stats, which at this point is a rather small percentage of the total a worthwhile trade to not being able to protect herself a third of the time in mortal form (sleep), or use her time to better herself by studying or experimenting? It feels like no, if fact it doesn't even feel close. 3. Her main benefit that she's gained from this evolution that we know of so far is her demonic essence skill. Is this skill restricted to being used in her demon form? If so that seems a weird mismatch for a evolution that is supposedly about her being more aligned with her mortal form. 4. Unless the plan is that Salvos tries food and loves it and has a sweet tooth banana-split eating montage this evolution seems like it gave her more reasons to avoid mortal form instead of embrace it. Is there benefits I'm missing other than the benefits she already had outside potentially 'food is yummy' somewhere down the line? IIRC an earlier chapter mentioned that evolutions that had restrictions or imposed negatives were unusually powerful so I can only assume her non-general skills she got must be absolutely OP bonkers to make up for how meh everything else is. I suppose it gives more skill slot efficiency if nothing else. The classes were okayish, it's hard to be excited about them when we don't really have a reference to their relative strength. Hopefully we will see something uniquely interesting come out of it.

Nick Tinsley

based on the stat points its a first time evolution. those level 10 spells are surely going to be amazing.

Venalitor

Salvos's mortal forms have needs now. Wow. Trash tier. Edithe really is dumb if she can't see the problem. Also doesn't explain why she would fall asleep instantly after transforming. She should have been fresh at that point.

Melting Sky

The girl's been awake for like 3 or 4 years straight. Why exactly would you expect her to be "fresh at that point?"

Shakango Resident

I don't agree with most of these comments this is an evolution and not in some dumb numbers but in her potential for understanding and growth as a entity known as salvos she could become a princess she could do and be a lot more on any plane by becoming partial mortal she could understand and learn things removing a lot of her her ignorance and therefore being able to access personhood and stop being treated like less than or not a entity thats self actualized like she desired. So i don't see sleeping or these other things as a disadvantage, sleeping can be wonderful to removes stress and dream s and there is more to eating then just consumptionll.l Thanks for writing this author I hope this reaches you

Nick Tinsley

I mean maybe but Salvos has always been about bettering herself in a based on the numbers and skills way rather than hanging around in a hippy comune...I get where you are coming from but I'm not sure how having a pleasant dream is going to help her accomplish any of her driving goals. "Oh daniel last night I had a dream about how much I like icecream and now I realized how foolish I have been, lets just cast the chocolate fudge spell to travel the realms and help my buddy and get you home.." Since the very beginning Salvos has been ridiculously goal oriented I cant see her seeing these changes as anything but useless bs that is getting in her way.

Aclys

The implied 'sleep debth' is probably the main contention and potential problem. It obviously doesnt apply for a sense of hunger, or she'd be ravenous too. But say she now continues to go for weeks before she turns into her partial mortality form a gain... will she immediately conk out and snooze once more? That seems like an incredibly dangerous liability if so. And if it doesn't.. why did it happen when she did it the first time? Not expecting us to get the explanation for that outright.. but its definitely going to be something to be curious about going forward. Being able to skip sleep by turning non-mortal is hardly broken considering she used to not need sleep at all in the first place. I mean.. sleep would have to do something positive for her for it to be an upgrade. That said I do see how this is an evolution of sorts, she's become even more mortal-like while in such a form and there are definite advantages in terms of maintaining the disguise.. the downside being potentially getting her throat slit while asleep and so on. Bit of a sidegrade in that sense so far? The wierd part I guess is how her demonic form, which used to be her 'true' form priorly, is now a skill while her actual true form seems.. well, there's a purpose to it too I dare expect since its clearly not for passing as a mortal nor is it clearly the ideal battle form... Some kind of intermediary utility form that doesnt have the flaws of needing sleep like a mortal nor being so large and ... complicated as her demon form.. so more of a utility mode? Will be fun to see going ahead!

Anonymous

Seems like this chapter has generated decent discourse about whether Salvos's new abilities are good enough or not, but, personally, I'm not sure why the in-universe system needs to be criticized from the perspective of 'game balance' or what have you. To me, the narrative potential of the new abilities is what's interesting, and adversity creates plot - yeah sleeping and eating are a hassle for Salvos, but Salvos having to deal with sleeping and eating? Gold. Since I don't really understand the perspective, I'm curious if some of the people who do feel like the new evolution/class are bad, would you want them to actually be more powerful? Or if the story just directly acknowledged them as having been bad options, would that be okay?

Nick Tinsley

honestly and I know I have been trolling this a lot but whatever, one of the things that annoy me most about it is that the sleep thing was mostly as far as I can tell just a cheap gag with no real thought into why she would fall asleep immediately. The "narrative potential" of that gag was "oh I can see this coming a mile away and it's kind of stupid" but then you start thinking about the implications of a sleep deficit and since it isn't at all explained you are left with "oh the author did something with probably catastrophic consequences based on a system that would cause that for a cheap gag that wasn't even really funny". Game balance aside that's really really annoying. Plus from a narrative perspective salvos has been trying to get this awesome level 100 achievement for like what half the story so far and when she does she gets basically nothing for it but a cheap gag.