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Hello, this has been a side project I've been working on ever since I finished the rewrite for Melas. It's another story: a litRPG Fantasy with a non-human lead. A real Strong Lead. And obviously, an action story. It will be rather different from Melas, and I was hoping to get your guys' impressions of it before I release it on RR on November.
It's called Salvos, and it's a story that follows a Demon named Salvos from her birth in the Netherworld and how she slowly evolves over time.
Any feedback would be greatly appreciated, however I would especially like to know what you think of Chapter 0. I tried writing in a different style for it, and I'm not sure whether I like it. Does it feel too pretentious? Too edgy? Do you feel like such a style would repel new readers once I start publishing it on RR? Let me know what you guys think!