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So. This question is for Gold, legend and Overlord.
As you can see the new volume is really important for my story, which makes me stress quite a bit. Yesterday I tried to write but my mind was blank since I was hesitating so much.
So even as I write, I am trying to bring all the different plot points to show it to you. But I don't know what you guys think about the pace?
1)It is too slow. Accelerate we want to see more fights.
2)The revelation are good, show more.
3)I do not care about this volume more smut and adventure outside of Lustburg.
4)I don't particularly care either way. Write how you see fit.
Of course those 4 points are just guidelines. If you have an opinion outside of it you can write it. Please I hope to get some feedback. It could really help me.

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Anonymous

The pace is balanced builting up so far i guess.. as for the story it's been good so far and it's your story so i can only give you some opinions about progression of the story or some smut. Keep doing what you're doing.

Anonymous

I enjoy the balance of intrigue and action (both kinds giggity). I’m hoping that within the next 5 or six releases we’ll have cleaned up the traitors and Sol can become the King.