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So this is pretty easy. The story is entering the last leg before final run for release I am going solo for the ebook but I am discussing with Royal guard for eventual Audiobook.

Editing start in two weeks and so I was wondering.

Should I rewrite the earlier part of the book?

By this I mean from prologue to Ch 1 there is a very big jump in time-line and it's implied how long Noah lived in the planet.

Should I show that part? Basically it would go.

Prologue __Noah wake up on planet-- show Noah fighting alone and suffering and adapting and slowly becoming friend with Parasite___Time skip__ CH 1.

If I do that I would have to erase this version of the book and do a complete repost.

This could also help me reach higher in Rising stars and get more followers.

I would love to get your opinion on this

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Carlos M K de Britto

it depends a lot on which approach you want to take... gradually talking about his development with the queen or just putting all the time passing in a single chapter... but I think it would be a very long chapter since I believe that his time adapting to the planet and to having her inside his head can't be summed up in a dozen lines... I think it's directly linked to what kind of approach you're going to take to their relationship.

Carlos M K de Britto

because I imagine that he will hate her at first, she was the only enemy he was raised by and he shouldn't lose that prejudice after two days of relationship... there's a whole adaptation with a new body and new powers, not to mention the fact that he's starving for a long time because the characteristics of his new body require dark matter.

Mrtotoro

I concur with Conner Wright comment. I prefer the current story's pace.