WW-BS, Takes Two To Tango X-rated Pinup (Patreon)

Well, the basic two-figure composition and rendering is done.  This is
how it came out.

Some bits still bug me a tad, but I think it works well enough now.

I wanted to complete the cover reinterpretation, and will likely do
so, but I kinda liked isolating the participants in a pin-up first.
The logo is going to be kinda obscured by BaalSatyrs figure, and the
original presence of Etrigan in the right may unbalance the
composition and dilute the primary focus.  But, the combined effect
originally was of Diana being overwhelmed by a power demon foe AND in
comes Etrigan as well, as a kinda "too much to take" emphasis.  I
don't know if it can still work in my take or it will seem like
overkill, or diminishment.

So I can go comic cover plus Etrigan, but that means no word balloons
and maybe just a couple caption boxes.

Or I can go comic cover minus Etrigan and add word balloons (like
roughly in the pic now) and a caption box or two.

Or leave the pinup with word balloons?

Comments?