Diana and Etrigan comic page 5 rough layout (Patreon)

I meant to post this about two weeks ago but then decided to wait until I had it more finished or could get a better scan.  But had some RL troubles that kept me off my desk and unable to do any of it.  And now I am unsure on the decompression of the scene that takes up too pages just to show Diana riding Etrigan.  It may be too much space/time devoted to fairly repetitive panels, and it may be wiser to remove some and move the story along faster.  The full body profile panels of the right page could be cropped to show just the lower body for example.

I will work on it tonight so please chime in with your opinions of whether I should rework it or finish it as it is.