WIP Sue-FKing Savage Land very rough prelim layouts Pgs2-6 (Patreon)

 Just so you all can see where it is going here are the layouts for the
rest of the scene of Sue and the King in the Savage Land from that collaborative
story.  If you can see anything at all, that is.  These are very, very rough preliminaries.
 

I may have gone a tad overboard on the length of it. 

Should I post such prelims here, or should I only post more finished artwork?