Susan Storm and SuperSkrull comix Pg04 (Patreon)
Published:
2018-08-19 00:07:08
Edited:
2018-08-19 00:12:43
Imported:
2021-06
Content
This may be one the hardest pages to finish I have ever done. I nearly broke thru the paper erasing and redrawing and erasing and redrawing again and again, trying to get the composition right. Notice I changed the very end of the first half. Yet I failed to do the close up angle I wanted because there was not enough space and the existing word balloons that could not be erased away completely unbalanced the space. I wanted to emphasize Sue's deliberate provocation of Kl'rt by going to a close up of her eyes from a very upper looking-down angle, yet it did not work and I just settled for making the eyes look human at the least. Limp result, I know, and I am sorry for it. But I could not keep at it longer for just one panel so I let it go. The next half was a bit worrisome with the slap as I wanted to make it look violent yet not lose the eroticism. I rather liked how it came out at the end.
Now I can at last move on to finish the following pages!