Susan Storm and SuperSkrull comix Pg04 (Patreon)

This may be one the hardest pages to finish I have ever done.  I nearly broke thru the paper erasing and redrawing and erasing and redrawing again and again, trying to get the composition right.  Notice I changed the very end of the first half.  Yet I failed to do the close up angle I wanted because there was not enough space and the existing word balloons that could not be erased away completely unbalanced the space.  I wanted to emphasize Sue's deliberate provocation of Kl'rt by going to a close up of her eyes from a very upper looking-down angle, yet it did not work and I just settled for making the eyes look human at the least.  Limp result, I know, and I am sorry for it.  But I could not keep at it longer for just one panel so I let it go.  The next half was a bit worrisome with the slap as I wanted to make it look violent yet not lose the eroticism.  I rather liked how it came out at the end.

Now I can at last move on to finish the following pages!