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So after a lot of going back and forth that bored everyone, wondering if  the whole "epilogue" for this story was too much of a digression from the core Skrull-Terrax-Sphynx-Galactus narrative, I decided to test making splitting that part off as a follow-up story or sequel.

So here is the core fic, with some new edits for flow and consistency.

And the split-off follow-up.  Which can be considered in continuity or not if you want, and to which I did some further rewrites.   I added a bit to the ending which I felt was lacking. 

Feel free to complain if you think this makes it worse.  

I will probably place the single combined fic in its previous version in the archive as well, for those who would rather keep it all together as it was before.  

I don't know if it is worth the hassle of changing it at Hentai Foundry.  So I will wait on that for now.


Comments

madcow1207

Hey Ksennin, it's nice to see that you are writing again, but you really need to be willing to just say something is done and move on to new works.

ksennin

Art is never finished, just abandoned. But this I am kicking to the curb now, I swear!