Disinterest to a romantic (script) (Patreon)

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• Panel 1: We open on a small, cluttered bedroom. Jake, a 17-year-old high school student, is leaning back in his chair browsing on his computer. Posters of cars and video games adorn the walls. He's a typical guy's guy, with a disinterested expression.Speech Bubble (Jake): "Another boring night, just video games and homework..."
  
• Panel 2: Jake's attention is drawn to an ad on his computer screen. It's for a new virtual reality game that promises an "ultimate transformation experience."Speech Bubble (Jake): "Ultimate transformation? That's a weird gimmick for a game."
  
• Panel 3: Intrigued, Jake clicks on the ad. An electric pulse flashes from the screen, surrounding him.Speech Bubble (Jake): "What the—?! Did the computer just short circuit?"
  
• Panel 4: Jake's body begins to tingle and a light starts to envelop him. His eyes widen with shock.Thought Bubble (Jake): "What's happening to me? I feel... weird."
  
• Panel 5: Close-up on Jake's face as his features soften. His eyes become larger and more innocent, the first hints of his transformation into Angel.Thought Bubble (Jake, transitioning): "My face... it tickles. And why do my eyes feel... different?"
  

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• Panel 1: Continuing from the first page, Jake's hair lengthens, slowly cascading down his shoulders. The messy texture refines into smooth, straight, brown locks.Speech Bubble (Jake, transitioning): "No way... my hair!"
  
• Panel 2: We watch as his shoulders narrow and his chest begins to bud, the sensation causing him to look down in astonishment.Thought Bubble (Jake, transitioning): "Is this what... growing breasts feels like?"
  
• Panel 3: Jake's clothes start to morph, the fabric shimmering as they transform into a crisp school uniform reminiscent of Angel's. A soft sweater tightens around his now slender frame.Thought Bubble (Jake, transitioning): "These clothes... they're so snug and... right."
  
• Panel 4: The transformation hastens. His hands become dainty and legs slim. His height reduces, making the change from a rugged boy to the petite form of a girl.Thought Bubble (Jake, transitioning): "Everything is shrinking... am I getting shorter?"
  
• Panel 5: Jake, now fully Angel, stands in the center of her room. Her expression is mixed with confusion and curiosity. She plays with her new ponytail, an instinct she doesn't understand.Speech Bubble (Angel): "This is... unexpected. But why isn't it freaking me out more?"
  

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• Panel 1: Angel examines herself in the mirror, a blush creeps onto her cheeks as she realizes her transformation is complete.Thought Bubble (Angel): "Oh my gosh, I'm... a girl. And I look so... young."
  
• Panel 2: School books and a bag appear magically on her desk. She touches them curiously.Thought Bubble (Angel): "I have a weird urge to do homework... that can't be right."
  
• Panel 3: She picks up a pencil, it slips from her delicate fingers, landing near the door.Speech Bubble (Angel): "Oops... hehe, so clumsy."
  
• Panel 4: A knock on the door. Angel quickly turns, her heart racing. A door label changes from "Jake" to "Angel" as if it was always meant to be.Speech Bubble (Angel): "Come in?"
  
• Panel 5: Angel's older brother, now seeing her as his sister, bends down to pick up the pencil. The brush of his hand against hers sends a wave of unfamiliar feelings through her.Speech Bubble (Angel, blushing): "Thank you... um, do you, maybe, want to help me... study later?"
  

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• Panel 1: Angel sits on the edge of her bed, nibbling her lip as she flips through a teen magazine, lost in thoughts of crushes and curiosity.Thought Bubble (Angel): "I wonder if... anyone will ask me out?"
  
• Panel 2: She writes in her notebook, the pages are filled with doodled hearts and the names of older boys.Speech Bubble (Angel, whispering): "It's silly, but I can't help it..."
  
• Panel 3: She gets ready for school. Trying on a denim skirt, she feels a mix of excitement and nervousness.Thought Bubble (Angel): "Will I catch his eye in this?"
  
• Panel 4: Walking to school, she peeks at an upperclassman, biting her lip, her cheeks flushed.Speech Bubble (Angel, to herself): "He's so... mature. I wonder if he notices me?"
  
• Panel 5: At school, Angel helps a male teacher carry books, her helpfulness exaggerated by her longing to be close to an older man.Thought Bubble (Angel): "He's kind of attractive... in an adult sort of way."
  

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• Panel 1: In class, Angel is daydreaming, her gaze locked on her teacher. Her eyes are filled with innocent adoration.Thought Bubble (Angel): "He must be so experienced in... love."
  
• Panel 2: The bell rings, snapping Angel back to reality. She gathers her books, feeling the butterflies in her stomach.Speech Bubble (Angel): "Gotta focus on school... and maybe just a little on love."
  
• Panel 3: Pause for reflection, Angel sits under a tree, thoughts swirling about her new desires, and whispers to herself about the mysteries of affection.Thought Bubble (Angel): "What would a kiss feel like? And is it really that... heart-fluttering?"
  
• Panel 4: Girlfriends gather, giggling with Angel. They talk about boys, and Angel giggles along, her body language coy and unassumingly flirtatious.Speech Bubble (Angel, to friends): "Kissing burns calories, right? Not like I'm thinking about it or anything..."
  
• Panel 5: As school ends, Angel scribbles in her notebook, the day’s encounters a whirlwind of emotions. Her transformation complete; her mind now that of a curious and inexperienced young girl yearning for older, experienced men.Thought Bubble (Angel): "I hope he'll notice me tomorrow... maybe I'll drop my pencil again."
  

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• Panel 1: The sunlight filters through the school library windows, where Angel sits alone at a table, her notebook open. Her eyes flit to the clock, counting down the minutes.Thought Bubble (Angel): "Just a few more minutes until he arrives for study group..."
  
• Panel 2: Suddenly, her heart skips a beat as she sees Zack, a senior and the object of her crush, approaching the table. He’s carrying a stack of textbooks.Speech Bubble (Angel, nervous): "Hi... Zack, right? Ready to study?"
  
• Panel 3: They sit across from each other. Angel’s leg brushes against Zack's under the table, sending shivers up her spine. She quickly pulls away, blushing.Thought Bubble (Angel, flustered): "Did he feel that? Was it too forward of me?"
  
• Panel 4: Zack asks Angel for help with a difficult problem. As she leans in closer to explain, her ponytail brushes against his arm.Speech Bubble (Angel, earnest): "So, you see, this equation simplifies if you..."
  
• Panel 5: Angel feels Zack's gaze on her, and she looks up, meeting his eyes. There's a moment where everything else falls away, and it's just the two of them.Thought Bubble (Angel, heart racing): "His eyes are so... captivating."
  

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• Panel 1: Angel, returning home from school, catches her reflection in a puddle. She's in her uniform, her hair reflecting the soft golden hour light.Thought Bubble (Angel): "Am I the same person that walked into school this morning?"
  
• Panel 2: Inside her bedroom, she changes out of her school uniform and into a cozy sweater and denim skirt. She feels oddly at peace with her reflection.Thought Bubble (Angel): "This is who I am now, isn't it?"
  
• Panel 3: Angel sits at her desk, starting her homework. Her concentration broken as the memory of Zack's eyes lingers in her mind.Speech Bubble (Angel, whispering): "I wish I could study with him every day..."
  
• Panel 4: She sends a tentative text message to Zack, asking if he wants to meet up for more study sessions. Her finger hovers over the 'send' button.Speech Bubble (Angel, hesitant): "Is this too much? Will he say yes?"
  
• Panel 5: She hits send, and a sense of excitement washes over her. She clasps her hands together, hoping for a positive response.Thought Bubble (Angel, hopeful): "Please say yes, please say yes..."
  

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• Panel 1: Angel is lying on her bed, waiting for a text back. The evening turns to night. The moonlight spills over her room, casting everything in a soft glow.Thought Bubble (Angel): "I shouldn't have texted him... What if he laughs at me?"
  
• Panel 2: Her phone buzzes, and she snatches it up. It’s a message from Zack agreeing to meet again. Her whole body feels like it's floating.Speech Bubble (Angel, ecstatic): "He said yes!"
  
• Panel 3: The next day, Angel is at her locker. She pulls out a new lip gloss, applying it while thinking about Zack.Thought Bubble (Angel): "Will he notice this? Is it too much?"
  
• Panel 4: Zack passes by her locker and compliments her on the lip gloss. Angel can barely contain her bubbly joy.Speech Bubble (Zack): "That color suits you. Ready for round two of study session?"
  Speech Bubble (Angel, giggling): "Yes, I have been looking forward to it!"
  
• Panel 5: As they walk to the library, Angel slips her arm through Zack's. She's never felt so bold, so girlish, and so right.Thought Bubble (Angel): "This is right. I'm where I'm supposed to be..."
  

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• Panel 1: Angel sits at a cozy café booth across from Zack. The table is small, intimate, and she's fidgeting with her straw, both nervous and excited for what feels like a date.Thought Bubble (Angel): "Is this what a date feels like? My heart won't stop pounding..."
  
• Panel 2: They share a dessert, and Angel tries a bite from Zack's fork, their fingers brushing. Her cheeks flush a deeper shade of pink.Speech Bubble (Zack, playfully): "You've got a little... here. Let me..."
  
• Panel 3: Zack reaches across the table, softly wiping away a dab of whipped cream from Angel's lip. Her breath hitches at the contact.Speech Bubble (Angel, breathless): "Thank you... Zack."
  
• Panel 4: Conversation flows effortlessly. Laughter fills their booth. Angel bites her lip in thought as Zack tells a story, her body language open and inviting.Thought Bubble (Angel): "He's even more amazing up close... and his smile, it's so genuine."
  
• Panel 5: As they leave the café, Zack offers her his jacket. Angel slips it on, the scent of his cologne enveloping her in warmth and a new, thrilling sense of protection.Speech Bubble (Angel, coyly): "It's a little big, but I like it... It smells like you."
  

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• Panel 1: They walk in the dimming sunlight, finding their way to a secluded park bench. The silence between them is charged, each heartbeat loud in Angel’s ears.Thought Bubble (Angel): "I can feel the tension... Does he want to kiss me?"
  
• Panel 2: Zack turns to her, their faces mere inches apart. Angel gazes up at him, her wide, innocent eyes filled with anticipation and a touch of fear.Speech Bubble (Zack, softly): "Angel... have you ever been kissed?"
  
• Panel 3: She nods no, biting her lip again. Zack leans closer, and she closes her eyes, surrendering to the moment.Speech Bubble (Angel, whispering): "No... but I want to."
  
• Panel 4: Their lips touch in a soft, uncertain kiss. It's gentle and exploratory, a contrast to the rush of emotions flooding through Angel.Thought Bubble (Angel): "It's like nothing I've felt before... my whole body is tingling."
  
• Panel 5: The kiss deepens, and Angel clings to Zack's shirt as if it’s the only thing anchoring her to the world. His hand rests on the small of her back, pulling her closer.Thought Bubble (Angel): "This is... incredible. I feel so complete..."
  

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• Panel 1: They part, breathless. Angel's lip gloss has smeared, and Zack is smiling at her messily painted lips.Speech Bubble (Zack, teasing): "Guess I'm wearing your lip gloss now, too."
  
• Panel 2: Angel starts to clean up the smudges with her thumb, giggling nervously at their sweet clumsiness.Speech Bubble (Angel, playful): "It's a good look for you."
  
• Panel 3: Resting her head on Zack's shoulder, they watch the stars come out, the silences between them comfortable now, filled with unsaid emotions and shared warmth.Thought Bubble (Angel): "I could stay like this forever..."
  
• Panel 4: As the night grows colder, Zack tugs Angel closer, and they share his jacket, wrapped up in an unexpected coziness. Angel's head rests against his chest, listening to his heartbeat.Speech Bubble (Angel, contented): "This is the best night of my life."
  
• Panel 5: They make their way home, stopping in the shadows of a large tree. Zack pulls her into his arms for another kiss, this one more confident, more sure, both of them bolder from the first.Thought Bubble (Angel): "Kissing him feels like... diving into a whole new world."
  

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• Panel 1: The kiss turns to a passionate make-out session, their bodies pressed together. Angel is lost in the sensations, the warmth of Zack's body, the softness of his lips, the taste of him.Thought Bubble (Angel): "So this is what making out is like... I'm dizzy with desire."
  
• Panel 2: Zack's hands explore Angel's back, tentative at first but growing bolder as he feels her shivers. Angel reaches up to tangle her fingers in his hair, pulling him closer.Speech Bubble (Angel, between kisses): "Zack... more, please."
  
• Panel 3: They pause, both of them flushed and exhilarated. Angel bites her lip, looking up at Zack with eyes that reflect the stars above, filled with wonder and a hint of newfound knowledge.Speech Bubble (Angel): "Was it as magical for you... as it was for me?"
  
• Panel 4: Zack kisses her forehead and smiles, a promise in his eyes. Angel's heart swells with happiness, and she knows she has fully embraced her femininity and desires.Speech Bubble (Zack): "More than you can imagine."
  
• Panel 5: They part ways with one last lingering kiss, a silent acknowledgment of the connection they've made. Angel touches her lips, the memory of the kisses still vivid as she walks back to her room alone, a satisfied smile gracing her lips.Thought Bubble (Angel): "I'll carry this night in my heart... always."