Bully to shy girl (Patreon)
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I am just experimenting with mixed-ai script writing method, this is just a script that come out better than usual:
Page 1 (Setting the stage)
Panel 1: Close-up of a diploma hung on a wall. The name "Tyler" is visible. The text bubble reads, "Just a few weeks left... Can't wait to out of this dump."
Panel 2: Wide shot of Tyler, the bully captain, walking down the high school corridors, flexing his muscles and exuding confidence.Thought bubble: "Heh, running this place was a breeze."
Panel 3: Tyler giving a noogie to a smaller student, grinning.Speech bubble (Tyler): "What's up, nerd? Ready for another lesson in 'respect'?"
Panel 4: Tyler's expression changes as he suddenly feels a strange sensation. He looks at his hands feeling a tingle.Speech bubble (Tyler): "What the... Why does my hand feel so... weird?"
Panel 5: His vision blurs, the environment spins around him—he collapses in an empty classroom.Speech bubble (Tyler, weakly): "Not... now..."
Page 2 (Initial transformation)
Panel 1: Tyler, lying on the floor, looks at his hands and sees them shrinking, nails growing long and painted.Thought bubble: "What's happening to me? My hands... they look like a girl's!"
Panel 2: He feels his once broad chest tight and start to rise as two mounds form under his shirt.Thought bubble: "This can't be... My chest is... swelling?"
Panel 3: His clothes morph, his leather jacket and jeans shrink into a soft pastel sweater and skinny jeans.Speech bubble (Tyler, panicking): "This isn't my gear! Where's my jacket?!"
Panel 4: Tyler struggles to stand, feeling his new, lighter frame and his wider hips.Thought bubble: "Everything's so tight... I can barely balance on these delicate legs..."
Panel 5: Students walk past the classroom. Tyler hides, blushing with a shy smile.Thought bubble: "Why can't I show myself? What's this sudden shyness?"
Page 3 (Further physical changes)
Panel 1: Tyler examines himself, focusing on the new, petite figure reflected in the shiny surface of a trophy case.Thought bubble: "I'm... small? But... I'm the biggest guy in school... or was."
Panel 2: Tyler feels his jaw softening, face rounding, and hair lengthening to his shoulders.Speech bubble (muffled by hair): "My... face? It's so round... and smooth!"
Panel 3: Tyler notices boys walking by, feels heart race and unfamiliar sensation.Thought bubble: "Why does my heart flutter when they're near? This isn't me!"
Panel 4: Tyler hears his own giggle, high-pitched and nervous.Speech bubble (Tyler, surprised): "That... giggle? It just slipped out!"
Panel 5: Sees a pop star poster and blushes; fantasy clouds merge to show daydream of meeting him.Thought bubble: "He's... cute... No, wait, what am I thinking?!"
Page 4 (Mental shift)
Panel 1: Tyler helping another student pick up books; instinctively caregiving.Thought bubble: "Why am I helping him? But... it feels nice to be kind."
Panel 2: A group of girls approach, calling out, "Hey Tyler!"Speech bubble (Girls): "Join us! We love your new look!"
Panel 3: Tyler hesitantly goes with them, feeling welcomed, fitting in.Thought bubble: "They... like me? I've never cared before, but now..."
Panel 4: The girls gossip about crushes. Tyler blushes, timidly offering her own admiration for a classmate.Speech bubble (Tyler): "Yeah, Mike... He's always so sweet in history class."
Panel 5: The school bell rings; the girls hug Tyler, and he feels strangely right, comforting.Thought bubble: "Wow, these hugs... they're so warm, so... fulfilling."
Page 5 (Exploring new sensations)
Panel 1: Close-up of Tyler's face, eyes closed, taking a deep breath—it's the end of the school day.Speech bubble (Tyler, whisper): "That's weird... the air smells sweeter... and my voice, it's so melodious?"
Panel 2: Mid-shot as Tyler opens his new pastel-covered notebook, heart doodles in the margins.Thought bubble: "When did I start doing these? They're kinda...cute."
Panel 3: Tyler scribbling more hearts around the name 'Mike', a dreamy expression on his face.Thought bubble: "Mike... I wonder what it'd be like to talk to him, not as the bully, but..."
Panel 4: Tyler's old buddies approach, expecting their former leader.Speech bubble (Buddy): "Yo, Ty! Ready to hit the arcade and show 'em who's boss?"
Panel 5: Tyler nervously declines, hugging his notebook to his chest.Speech bubble (Tyler): "Um, sorry, I have...homework. Yeah, lots of homework!"
Page 6 (Evening thoughts)
Panel 1: Tyler, now fully appearing as the shy high school girl, seated at a bedroom vanity, no mirror visible.Thought bubble: "This room... it's mine but... it's so girly."
Panel 2: Tyler, gently brushing long hair, feels the softness between fingers.Thought bubble: "My hair used to be so coarse... Now it's like silky threads."
Panel 3: Reaching for a skincare product, applying it, and feeling a soothing sensation.Speech bubble (Tyler): "This feels... really nice. So this is what I've been missing out on?"
Panel 4: Tyler trying on different sweaters, feeling the textures and deciding which feels the most comforting.Thought bubble: "Cozy... I never cared about how clothes felt before."
Panel 5: Tyler looks down at the plush carpet, wriggling toes, and feeling the softness, giggling without self-consciousness.Thought bubble: "Hehe, I could get used to this..."
Page 7 (A new crush)
Panel 1: The next day at school, Tyler, now fully embracing the character of the shy girl, spots Mike in the hallway.Thought bubble: "There he is... He looks even nicer up close."
Panel 2: Mike notices Tyler and approaches with a friendly smile.Speech bubble (Mike): "Hey, I'm Mike... I've seen you around but we've never talked. What's up?"
Panel 3: Tyler shyly looks away, cheeks flushing.Speech bubble (Tyler): "I'm...uhh...just, you know, on my way to class."
Panel 4: Mike laughs gently, finding Tyler's shyness endearing.Speech bubble (Mike): "You're really cute when you blush like that."
Panel 5: Tyler smiles back, feeling butterflies in her stomach.Thought bubble: "He thinks I'm cute? That... makes me really happy."
Page 8 (Redefining self)
Panel 1: In class, Tyler is now attentive, participating with newfound interest.Thought bubble: "It's strange... I actually enjoy learning now."
Panel 2: During lunch, she shares a meal with the girls; everyone is laughing.Speech bubble (Tyler): "I never knew this side of school life... It's wonderful."
Panel 3: Tyler, in the library, discovers a love for poetry, a face of pure contentment.Thought bubble: "These words... they speak to me. It's like finding a piece of myself."
Panel 4: Gazing out the window, Tyler realizes the internal change is complete.Thought bubble: "I'm no longer that person. This is who I am... who I was meant to be."
Panel 5: The final bell rings, Tyler gathers her things, ready to walk home, a serene smile on her face.Thought bubble: "Time to go home... I've got a whole new life waiting for me."