'Embrace the curves' script (Patreon)

Here is the script for an upcoming Christmas comic. It probably won't be completed in December, but rather towards the end of January. I am adopting a more structured approach, and this is the first step: having a script.

P.S.: This is only the script. If you have any suggestions, please feel free to comment below. I can still make alterations. :)

Page 1 Christmas Eve. John and Linda exchanging gifts. 

Thought bubble (John): ‘What's she scheming with that sly grin...?’ 

Thought bubble (John): 'Demands I get her this... Just why?!' 

Thought bubble (Linda, with a playful smirk): 'Can't wait to see his face...'

Page 2 John unwraps his gift to reveal a provocative, form-fitting minidress and high-heels. A note is peeking out. 

Thought bubble (John): 'She's kidding, right?' 

Linda discovers a classy suit and tie in her package. 

Thought bubble (Linda): 'This... will be interesting.'

Page 3 

Speech bubble (John, holding up the dress): 'What sort of joke is this?' 

Speech bubble (Linda): "The real surprise comes when we read those notes together!" 

Thought bubble (John): ‘Better not be some mushy pledge of love...’

Page 4 

Speech bubble (John, reading the note, John’s voice trembles): “Stride in these, see the world anew." 

Speech bubble (Linda, reading hers, confident): “With power and allure, let desires pursue.” 

Energy bursts from the clothing, enveloping John and Linda. The pink energy surrounds John’s body, while the blue energy surrounds Linda’s.

Speech bubble (John, confused and anxious): “What's happening, Linda?”

Page 5

(John feels a strange sensation enveloping his body. His skin begins to prickle with energy)

Thought Bubble (John): "What the heck is this... tingling? Something's... happening."

Speech Bubble (John): "Ugh, it's like I'm being twisted inside out!"

Page 6.

(John clutches at himself, feeling the alarming changes taking over his physique.)

Thought Bubble (John): 'My skin... it's softening... And what's this roundness? Oh god, it's intense!'

Thought Bubble (John, in distress): 'The pain... it's searing, like I'm on fire... and my flesh is... reshaping!'

Page 7.

Thought bubble (John): It stopped... But everything's... shorter? I feel... less. Like I've shrunk."

Thought bubble (John): Omigod!

Thougth bubble (John): "And these feet... Tiny? And... are my toes painted? Manicured? This can't be real..."

Page 8.

Thought bubble (John): 'Wait—the dress, it...it was in the box, and now...it's on me!'

Thought bubble (John):  "It fits... perfectly... but how? And why's it so tight around my... hips...and chest?"

Page 9.(Linda approching in the background, now in his male format that looks like a complete alfa male)

Thought bubble (John): 'What in the...? This can't be right. My chest’s ballooned up like...like a woman’s! And my backside... it's massive! How did it get so... so round and protruding?'

Page 10:

(Linda hits John's reshaped behind, hard enough to make it jiggle. John jumps slightly, a look of shock on her face.)

Speech Bubble (Linda): Whack! "Damn, Johnny-boy, your rump's got more bounce than a brand-new sports car's suspension!"

Thought Bubble (John): “Ow! Did she need to slap it that hard? Though it feels... different.”

Speech Bubble (John): "Hey!"

Speech Bubble (Linda, mockingly): "Love the new assets, hon. They’re firm, peachy, just perfect to get a man’s motor running."

Page 11:

(John spins around angrily, the motion making her new hair and dress flair, only to freeze when she sees Linda's towering new masculine build.)

Speech Bubble (John): "Cut the crap, Linda!"

Thought Bubble (John): “He's huge... towering over me. Why do I suddenly feel so... vulnerable?”

Speech Bubble (Linda): "Well, sorry for the compliment, sugar. Though, I do like this... view."

(John feels strangely intimidated and awkwardly adjusts her new dress.)

Page 12

(John get furious at Linda)

Speech Bubble (John, furiously): "This isn't funny, Linda! Look what you've done to me!"

Speech Bubble (Linda, trying to defuse the situation): "Easy there... I was only playing. Didn't mean to ruffle your feathers."

Speech Bubble (John, with anger simmering): "A joke? You've turned me into a woman! Do you see me laughing?"

Speech Bubble (Linda, attempting reassurance): "Listen, let's just swap back, okay? Read my note, I'll read yours, and this all goes away."

Page 13

Speech Bubble (John, reluctantly): "Fine, let’s do this... but it better work."

Linda speech bubble: “Stride in these, see the world anew." 

John speech bubble: “With power and allure, let desires pursue.” 

Page 14:(John leans against the wall)

Thought Bubble John: 'My head's pounding, like... like a heartbeat in my brain... What did she do to me?'

Thought Bubble John: 'Why is she smiling like that? Shouldn't she be also feeling weird?'

Page 15(John somehow manages walk to a mirror in the living room)

Page 16

Thought bubble (John): 'Who is that? That can't be... Me?' 

Speech bubble (John): "I-I don't even recognize myself... This red hair, these curves... Did Linda really just..." 

Page 17

(wedding ring disappears from John's finger)

Thought bubble (John): 'God, but I look... incredible.'

Page 18 (John scrutinizing her new reflection, touches her face and then trails down to her hips.) 

Thought bubble (John): 'Everything's so soft, so smooth, and... and when did I start caring about that?' 

Speech bubble (John, murmuring): "I-I mean, I guess if I'm a girl now, I should enjoy it, right?"

Page 19 (John running hands through her long red hair, a new sparkle in her eyes.) 

Thought bubble (John): 'It's so weird but... the way my hair falls, the sway of my hips... It feels so natural.' 

Speech bubble (John): "And I'm liking this... is it wrong that I'm liking this?"

Page 20 (John, now more comfortable, experiments with a few feminine poses in front of the mirror.) 

Thought bubble (John): 'Damn, I'm like, a total babe. Men would be all over me... Wait, why'd I think that?' 

Speech bubble (John, shocked): "Am I actually thinking about guys now?!"

Page 21 (John's face reddens as she realizes her new desires.) 

Thought bubble (John): 'My heart's racing at the thought. I've never felt this way about guys before, but now...' 

Speech bubble (John, whispering): "I need... I want their attention. Their hands on me... Wait, WHAT?!"

Page 22 (John pulls at the hem of the tight minidress, blushing profusely.) 

Thought bubble (John): 'This dress, it's like a magnet... for men's eyes. And I want them to look, don't I?' 

Speech bubble (John, breathlessly): "This is so messed up... but it's turning me on."

Page 23 (Linda leans against the doorframe, watching with a grin as John accepts her new form.) 

Thought bubble (Linda): 'Enjoying the view, Johnny? Or should I say, Janey?' 

Speech bubble (Linda): "You look like you're getting the hang of this, sweetheart."

Page 24 (John, now embracing her identity as Janey, turns the tables on Lee.) 

Thought bubble (Janey): 'This all felt like a curse, but now... why not make it a blessing?' 

Speech bubble (Janey, with a sultry gaze): "You know what, Lee? Why don’t you show me how a real man treats a lady?"

Page 25 (Lee, caught off guard by Janey’s forwardness, stumbles over his words.) 

Speech bubble (Lee): "W-well, I mean... I'm not sure you're ready for that, Janey." 

Thought bubble (Janey): 'Stuttering? That’s cute. He's totally into this.'

Page 26 (Janey steps closer, her perfume filling the space between them.) 

Speech bubble (Janey): "Oh, I'm more than ready. Unless you're not up to the challenge, of course?" 

Thought bubble (Lee): 'Damn, I wasn’t expecting her to be this... aggressive. But I'm definitely not complaining.'

Page 27 (Janey presses herself against Lee, her hands roaming over his broad shoulders.) 

Thought bubble (Janey): 'His body is so strong, so protective. It feels right to be this close.' 

Speech bubble (Lee, with a smirk): "Trust me, Janey, you won't be disappointed."

Page 28 (Lee leads Janey to the couch, their chemistry undeniable.) 

Speech bubble (Janey, whispering into Lee's ear): "Let's skip the small talk and get right to the... hands-on experience." 

Thought bubble (Lee): 'This night is going to be unforgettable.'

Page 29 (As the the camera zooms out, Janey and Lee explore each other with fervor.) 

Thought bubble (Janey): 'Every touch sends shockwaves through me. I never knew my body could feel like this.' 

Speech bubble (Janey): "Don't hold back, Lee... Show me everything I've been missing."

Page 30 (Janey and Lee fall onto the coach, their clothes flying off in a frenzy.)

END.