Wish Gone Wrong Ch 1 script(final version used for the comic) (Patreon)

Wish Gone Wrong Chapter 1

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  • Narration: Markus, a bored, privileged young man a senior, in medical school

  • Markus (thought bubble): Med school. More like Med-bore-dom. What's the point, anyway? 

  • Markus (thought bubble): Dad's already got the whole "world-renowned surgeon" thing covered. Everything's already been done.

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  • Markus (thought bubble): Dad built his empire, Mom’s got her socialite life. What's left for me? Just coasting through on the family name? 

  • Markus (thought bubble): Only my sport trophies make me unique, but once I get my degree, I won't have time for anything. Knowing Dad, he'll put me through hell at his hospital to "toughen me up."

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  • Narration: Eddy, Markus's roommate. A quiet, bespectacled, shy student with a passion for medicine

  • Markus (thought bubble): There he goes, Eddy. Always nose-deep in books. Bet he even dreams with a textbook. Look at him, all fired up.

  • Markus (thought bubble): Like he actually cares about this stuff. Probably gets a thrill out of memorizing all that gunk.

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  • Markus (thought bubble): At least he’s useful—does my assignments, cleans, drives, acts like my personal therapist... Yeah, my own little 'slave’.

  • Markus (thought bubble): Even Sarah, my ex, couldn't stand him. "Too creepy," she said. Stuck in his own little science bubble, probably doesn't even know what a kiss feels like. Loser.

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  • Markus (thought bubble): Might as well kill some time...

  • Markus (thought bubble): Ahh, an interesting-looking ad, “one wish can make all the difference”, let’s click it

  • Markus (thought bubble): Grant a wish website? Shady as hell, but maybe it’s real thing, let’s see “Type your wish below…”

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  • Markus (thought bubble): Eddy is what all dominant men wish for to step on…an obedient submissive nice nerdy guy.

  • Markus (thought bubble): but, there’s only one problem with my little roommate… I can’t fck him. Other than that, he would be a perfect partner… haha… let’s see… I wish for this…

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  • Markus types: "I want Eddy to turn into my girlfriend."

  • Autocorrect Popup Did you mean my boyfriend? Correct it automatically.

  • Markus Here goes nothing. hits grant it (he's unaware that his wish was autocorrected)

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  • An ID card mysteriously falls onto Eddy's book.

  • SFX text: Appear

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  • Eddy(thought bubble): What the…

  • Eddy(thought bubble): Must be some kind of joke..Markus playing his game on me again.

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  • Markus goes to Eddy's desk, seeing that something just drop on Eddy

  • Markus(speech bubble): That thing just appeared out of nowhere, wicked isn’t it?

  • Markus looking at the ID, in the hands of Eddy

  • Markus(thought bubble): I don’t get it so this site may be real, but by just holding this id, Eddy won’t change into my girlfriend...

  • Eddy(speech bubble): Yeah, sure…

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  • Eddy(speech bubble): Kinda looks like you, but with a cuter head.

  • Markus(speech bubble): Yeah right, like I’d ever look like some chick.

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  • Markus head losing its size, angular shape lessen, her eyes slight bigger

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  • Markus head losing angular shape even, become slightly curvy and eye larger, petite nose and lips forming

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  • Final feminine face

  • Eddy(speech bubble): Umm...Markus...well...your face...you kinda do now

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  • Markus still laughing but then touches his face and suddenly stops.

  • Medium shot showing Markus' hand on his now softer, more feminine face.

  • Markus(speech bubble): What the hell?

  • Markus(thought bubble): My face feels like I’m touching a child's face...

  • Markus(thought bubble): Something isn't right. The site... something went wrong.

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  • Close-up on Markus’ face, panic-stricken as he stares at his laptop screen.

  • Eddy(speech bubble in the distance) : Everything is all right, man?

  • Markus (thought bubble): What It changed to 'boyfriend' But how?

  • Markus (thought bubble): There has to be a way to fix this!

  • Markus (thought bubble): Damn it!

  • Website (on-screen text): "Wish granted permanently. No exceptions. One wish per person. Enjoy your new reality!

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  • Eddy(speech bubble): Markus if what’s wrong? Can I help you something?

  • Markus(thought bubble): What the fuck? How did he get here? 

  • Markus(thought bubble) Can't let him see this... what if he finds out?

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  • Markus suddenly stands up and  turns, pushing Eddy away with unexpected force.

  • Markus (shouting) Back off, Eddy! Don’t come closer! Boundaries, man!

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  • Eddy (stumbling back) Ouch! Markus, why…

  • Eddy rubbing his sore shoulder, frowning at Markus.

  • Eddy (speech bubble) That girl...wouldn’t have that much strength

  • Eddy (speech bubble) surely she'd dislike sports that make her all bulky and muscular

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  • Markus(thought bubble): What's happening to me?

  • Markus(thought bubble): Ohh no…I have a bad feeling about this.

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  • Markus(thought bubble): My strength…

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  • Markus: it’s fading...

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  • Markus (thought bubble): Gone... all my muscle... all my strength...This can't be happening...

  • Markus (thought bubble) What have I done to myself?

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  • Eddy  (thought bubble) He changed again, Exactly how i wanted…hmm

  • Markus  (thought bubble) The ID! Everything started changing when that fell. It must be the trigger!

  • Markus  (thought bubble) I need to get that card back.

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  • Markus (speech bubble shouting) Eddy, give me that card now!

  • Eddy (speech bubble stuttering) W-wait! Markus... or, I mean, shouldn't you be...more cautious? Isn’t your body kinda delicate now?

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  • Hands transforming into dainty feminine hands with long pink nails

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  • Hands transforming into dainty feminine hands with long pink nails

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  • Hands transforming into dainty feminine hands with long pink nails

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  • Hands transforming into dainty feminine hands with long pink nails

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  • Markus(speech bubble) interrupted seeing his hand grown nails and became dainty: Delicate?

  • Eddy(speech bubble): Right, and...she doesn’t need this height...should be way shorter than me

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  • Markus height significantly decreases

  • Markus(speech bubble): Huh What…

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  • Markus height decreases

  • Markus(speech bubble): What’s happening? Am I shrinking... 

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  • Markus now almost a head smaller than Eddy

  • Markus(speech bubble): I do, I FUCKING DO!

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  • Eddy (realizaiton thought bubble) This is amazing! I can't believe this is happening. So whatever i say that is happening with Markus…I wonder how far I can push this…

  • Markus(thought bubble): Weak, small, and...feminine? This can't be real. I'm a freaking med student, not some...some...

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  • Eddy is now almost one head higher than Markus. Eddy glances back at Markus, a mischievous glint in his eye. He knows what he can do.

  • Markus(thought bubble, seeing his face, desperate): Fuck he figure it out.

  • Eddy (speech bubble, playful) You know, Anna... that anger burst that you just had. Girls tend not to be as... violent.

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  • Markus (thought bubble): Deep breaths, Markus. Don't freak out. Focus. Maybe a little pleading will work on Eddy. He’s always been so good to me...

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  • Markus (Muttering, in a begging position waiting for Eddy to place the card into his hand) Eddy, please... can you give me that card back? I... I need it.

  • Eddy (Thinking) This is too much fun!

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  • Eddy holds up a hand, stopping Markus. A sly smile still plays on his lips.

  • Eddy(speech bubble) That’s more like it, Anna. But you’re not quite there yet. I think you need a bit of a makeover.

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  • Eddy(speech bubble): Your ex, Sarah, left some clothes here. Want to give them a try? You've changed a lot, so who knows? Pink's always been your color, right?

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  • Markus speech bubble: What is happening? These clothes... they're moving on their own!

  • Markus speech bubble:: Eddy, what is this? Stop it!

  • Eddy(speech bubble): Just relax, Anna. Let the magic do its work.

  • Markus speech bubble: No way! I'm not wearing this!

  • Markus speech bubble: Wait... it fits? How is this even possible?

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  • Markus (thought bubble): Sarah was one of the most fragile girls I've ever dated... and now her clothes fit me perfectly?

  • Markus (thought bubble, contemplating): Oh, that means... I'm becoming just like her... delicate and... girly?

  • Markus(thought bubble): I can't believe it. Despite being pink, I actually kind of like it. He's really messing with my head.

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  • Markus thought bubble: He went nuts, time to back away, before he messes me up even more

  • Eddy speech bubble: Wow, Anna you look very cute, your clothes matches your body type now, haha

  • Markus(while trying find door handle from his back): Eddy, listen Man, let’s just talk this whole id card thing, it was as i thought it would been great joke to…to see your reaction to a cute girl, but-

  • Eddy(speech bubble) If things had gone your way, I’d be the one transforming into your girlfriend, right?

  • Markus(speech bubble) Eddy, please, I didn’t mean for this. Let’s just forget all about it!

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  • Markus, opens up the the door(thought bubble): I need to get away

  • Eddy Oh, but Anna, why is the hurry? We're just getting started.

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  • Eddy(speech bubble): Face it! You're purely a girl, inside and out. You've never had a drop of male hormone in you, just pure, undeniably femininity. Crazy about fashion, clueless in sports, with your heart set on boys. Dreaming of a fairy-tale wedding and a house full of kids?

  • Eddy(speech bubble): That’s you—even if your body hasn’t caught up with those dreams yet. Sure, your body might not scream 'woman' with its lack of curves, landing you in the sights of bullies who see a 'a little a boy pretending to be a girl’. 

  • Eddy(speech bubble): You tried to ignore them, but the whispers followed you everywhere, seeping into your dreams and making you question yourself. Was there something wrong with you? Were you not "girly" enough? 

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  • Markus stands for a second in trans as the words go through him, his eyes glowing pink, then he escapes the room. Information overloading the sfx says

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  • door slams

  • Eddy(thought bubble): This year is going to be so much fun!

  • Eddy(thought bubble): Let's see how the main bully handles a little bullying with her underdeveloped body and changed mindset

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  • Eddy(thought bubble, the id card disappearing from his hand) Looks like everything is set

  • Eddy(thought bubble): It's time for me to switch gears as well, without Markus... or Anna in my life, things can definitely be different.

end of chapter 1