After discussion (Patreon)

I have revised the Prologue. It will post with another chapter in the morning.

It would be too much trouble to post it because I’m writing in the car while my wife drives. Love her but I should be getting bravery level ups.

Anyway- vacation travel is taking more time than expected but I hope to have not just the revised prologue but also a new chapter tomorrow morning.

The prologue is twice as long now and includes material I was going to put into the next interlude but perhaps is necessary before the confrontation.

let me know what you think please

also- not sure if I’ll finish the next chapter of Law of Consequences in time for tonight but I’m trying while still trying to be present for family vacation.