Dragon Sorcerer- Blurb (Patreon)

The audio publisher wants me to send them the blurb. This is what I've been using on RR- but I probably need to rewrite it some.

Any thoughts on what parts work for you and what doesn't?

Is it snark if you're a dragon?

Nico is rudely ejected from his home by murderous adventurers. He was only a young dragon, at fifty, and barely beyond his adolescence.

Of his entire clutch, only he and one sister remained, but now he is alone. While fleeing, his magic activates and creates a connection between him and a fearless young woman, who watched as he crushed the knights sent to drive him away from her father's cattle herd.

In the process, he ends up taking on a human form to hide from the adventurers who are still pursuing him. The irony being that once those adventurers discover his magical ability, they insist he attend the Imperial Academy as required of all with magical ability.

Of course, he has to hide his true nature, which isn't always easy, given a dragon sized ego.