Frisky Fantasy [Witcher short] - Draft 1 (Patreon)

Hello everyone! As promised, here is the first draft (revision 3) of the Witcher short. If anyone has any comments, critiques, suggestions, or remarks, please feel free to share them!

I am locking the script in on Thursday, June 15. So if there are any changes that should be made, be sure to make the suggestions before then!

Keep in mind that this is supposed to be a short - the upper limit I am shooting for is 90 seconds, with 60 seconds being the sweet spot.

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[Black screen]

TRISS (playful, teasing): "Okay. Open your eyes."

[Wide shot of Geralt sitting in the chair, with his eyes closed. Triss is not visible. He opens his eyes, and then after a moment, his eyelids shutter slightly as he lets out a disappointed sigh]

*GERALT sighs disappointedly*

[Close-up of Geralt talking, moving his hands as he speaks]

GERALT (unamused and frankly tired of Triss always pulling stunts like this): "Damn it, Triss."

[Close-up of Triss talking, smiling smugly]

TRISS (overflowing with frisky smugness): "What's the matter?"

[Wide shot of Triss slowly wagging her ass at Geralt]

TRISS (frisky and smug): "Are you upset that my fat ass is tearing these skinny pants apart at the seams?"

[Close-up of Triss running a hand over her ass]

TRISS (playfully): "Or are you upset that it's not Ciri shaking this big butt at you?"

GERALT (taken aback, and a bit by surprise): "What?! I..."

[Wide shot of both Triss and Geralt in the scene. Ciri is not visible. Geralt is sitting upright, slightly defensive.]

GERALT (slightly offended, decidedly flustered): "She's my... she's like a... I'd never..."

TRISS (enjoying Geralt's discomfort): "Oh, relax."

[Close-up of Triss talking]

TRISS (playfully): "There's nothing wrong with fantasizing about her."

[Triss's eyes move to make an eye-line toward Ciri]

[Shot of Ciri sleeping]

TRISS (playfully): "I know I do."

GERALT (firmly, but not forcefully): "This is highly inappropriate."

[Close-up of Triss talking again. She's still looking at Ciri as she speaks.]

TRISS (smugly): "That's never stopped you before."

[Geralt resting his mouth against his mouth, taking a single deep breath in and out of his nose, refraining from speaking, before speaking again]

GERALT (forcing calm on himself): "Take her clothes off. Please."

[Close-up of Triss smiling smugly at Geralt, before moving off-screen, implicitly bending over the bed (not shown, to hide the transition)]

[Wide-shot of Triss bending over the bed, propping herself up and sticking her ass out. She's looking over smugly at Geralt.]

TRISS (teasing, with a bit of bite to her tone): "Why don't you make me?"

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[Geralt banging Triss, bent over the bed; dialogue is littered throughout]

TRISS (in between deep breaths): "This is so much better than tending the horses."

GERALT (in between breaths, slightly upset at the conversation topic): "I told you I'd rather forget ever walking in on that."

TRISS (in between deep breaths): "Jealousy does not befit you."

GERALT (in between breaths): "Trust me, there was no jealousy."

GERALT (in between breaths): "What if Ciri wakes up?"

TRISS (in between deep breaths): "Relax. She sleeps like a rock."

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[X-ray through bed sheets to reveal Ciri is masturbating to Geralt and Triss banging]