Page 70 WiP(s) Marvin x Sharlene Collage (Patreon)

Here's a peek at the upcoming page, featuring a collage of Marvin and Sharlene. I'm going to use narrative boxes and sound effects to guide the eye through this one. Still haven't constructed the figure for the first panel above, but here you can see the process for the 2nd and 3rd panels (I'm calling them panels even though this page doesn't feature any gutters).

I'm thinking I'm going to have to revise the dialog in the last page to match what I want to write in this one. Also, I realized that I'm forgetting to draw Marvin's handcuffs... Damn, I knew that would happen eventually. I'll have to fix that too. Anyways, the power poses here will make sense once the dialog is figured out. I can't believe I didn't flesh out this part of the script. For some reason I just wrote "Marvin and Sharlene have sex", forgetting that I'd have to fill in context-sensitive dialog to bridge the scenes together afterwards. Sometimes it's the little things that matter.

Ah well, let's look forward to this one together. See you again soon with the results!