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All right... well this one had a big series of back and forth iterations before finally settling on something quite simple. At first I tried a set of panels with Sharlene delivering some impassioned dialog, while Envy and Mi-hee fought behind her in the background. The comedic juxtaposition of these elements intrigued me, but the flow felt off somehow. 

So next I tried a sequence of panels with Sharlene grinding on top of Marvin, moving back and forth while telling him what she needed to say. It wasn't terrible, but the panels needed to be small on the page for the effect to work, and I felt like it lacked impact...

So finally, after thinking it over and over, I remembered I was making a SEX comic after all, and decided I should have one nice, big, fappable image of Sharlene instead (because I love you), and the results were much better. I think I was hung up on creating a sequential moment here, and it took me long enough to realize that I didn't actually need to do that. Often times when the problem seems insurmountable, the simple solution is usually the right answer.

Envy and Mi-hee's spat got turned into a cartoon cloud fight, and I managed to merge the planned third and forth panels into one, squeezing both clasped hands and faces in the same image for greater effect.

Anyways, I wanted to have this one done by now (and the lines are coming along), but some Holiday plans might get in the way, so we'll get 'er up when we get 'er up, and I promise she'll be pretty.

Speaking of that, I want to wish you all a safe and happy Holiday, and until we speak again, please stay warm and healthy!

Much love!