Hot Shit High Ch.2, Pg 60 (Patreon)

Another experiment in paneling here, now let's see if it paid off. If it works, the eye should flow from the moment of the slap down into Sharlene's speech balloon directly below it, through the character's eyes, and then down into Marvin's "FINE!", all the way to the floor, and then back up to the insert panel. 

It's always risky to ask the reader to zig-zag through a page layout like this, but I think I've figured out a way to make it work - at least when needed. In this case, I wanted to keep the characters on their respective sides in the engagement. Guiding the reader through the page is a tricky thing to do, but it makes reading the page more fun if you can pull it off. 

Hope you guys like this one - more on the way! 

Thanks, and lots of love for all of your support! <3