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Alright! A little bit of delay in getting this page up due to some time off but we're back on track. Here's the second page of Sharlene's shower fun.

My favorite part of this page was trying to get the dream sequence for Sharlene's memories right. I considered drawing the imagery from scratch, but decided it would be better if I used some asset art from Chapter 1 as it would better invoke the feeling of memories. I was able to get them to look hazy and faded by using an inverted screen tone layer and blending the underlying tones together. Next, we'll be catching up with you know who...

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ArdenW

Uh-oh. We have trouble on the horizon.

TimParaxade

Sharlene's wet body looks so fucking HOT from this angle! (or any for that matter)

RainbowScreen

I'm so hyped! get him Sharlene!!!

Anonymous

Marvin...ya dumb ass! :-o

Maginpui

Dude kinda looks like Mob from Mob Psycho lol

A-T

Oh man things are about to prick up.

Anonymous

Fan of hair down Sharlene <3

erotibot

yeah he does. but I didn't see mob psycho before I started this xD

Tahldon

Oh Good Lord, this page, man. First of all that Sharlene angle is just a snare in and of itself, which helps the eye flow down the page from her thoughts (amazingly positioned near her head) and further down to the climax panels. Panels because things lead right into a physical burst of emotion with her hitting that wall! Whew~ Great work as usual, Erotibot! Also, let me take a moment to highlight the appreciation of the little movement effects you add in. Subtle but excellent touches. How are you not looking at this page and doing that kissing the fingertips gesture that chefs do the whole time? :O

erotibot

I think A LOT about panel placement, and how to best tell the story sequentially. A story isn't told just because there are words and art, it's how you place it together that helps convey feeling, emotion, and ultimately a sense of time and space. It's pacing, really - but it's also much more than that. I'm glad you're picking up on my efforts though. Today's stream is actually going to be about this topic specifically, Hope to see ya there!

Buzzkill

I'm pretty wowed by this page too. Sharlene's wet hair makes her look almost like another girl. In a very good way. Somehow her masturbating fingers, on the spread, convey a delicate touch. Actually, I like the entire hand. The position of the hand does a pretty good job subtly reinforcing the illusion of Sharlene's thigh, tummy, and pelvis being three dimensional. Actually, maybe that is why I like it so much. The foreshortening is nice, but somehow I find the other techniques you used more interesting. And of course, the picture was very erotic.

Stone Quillian III

Could this be the start of Sharlene falling for Marvin? If so, she'll do whatever it takes to be his girl.