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The Doll

The ground began moving again, but everything was still dark. David was terrified, holding on to his wife and daughter. Martha and Jenny. Their eyes had began adjusting to the dim light quite some time again, they had no idea how long they had been stuck in this nightmare. He remembered inviting a ‘’witch’’ over for her 21 year old’s birthday party. He thought it would be fun to have some magic tricks to entertain guests, but her was wrongs.

The woman was no magician, she was indeed a true witch and the only entertainment she was willing to provide was for herself. She had said something that was playing back in David’s mind. 

‘’You think I’m here for your spoiled brat’s birthday? No. I’m here for my own daughter’s birthday.’’

Then she flicked her magic wand and the rest of it was a blur. They woke up in some kind of moving truck, or on a boat, he wasn’t sure. All he knew is it was a large, dark room, with a ray of light at the top of the walls and it moved around from time to time. 

‘’Don’t worry’’ He said, trying to sound confident. ‘’I’ll get us out of it. I’ll pay whatever they want and they will let us go. I promise I will do whatever it takes.’’

Suddenly, the ceiling busted open and the trio was greeted by a giant face of the witch staring right at them. David began to scream like a scared little girl in unison with his wife and daughter. Martha, his wife, looked down at his legs only to realize he had started urinating on himself, wetting his trousers. 

The witch’s gigantic hand moved over the box and all of a sudden the family was unable to talk. Their screams shut down by a magic spell.

David almost fainted as he realized they were in a shoe box. A giant-sized cardboard box with a giant-sized high hill shoe inside it. This couldn’t be happening.

‘’Glad you finally shut your mouth’’ the witch said with a grin. ‘’I told you, you are to be a gift to my daughter. Everybody at her school has a collection of mortal dolls to play with and she has been begging me for weeks. When I saw your ad online, looking for a magician or a witch, I knew you’d be perfect for it. Especially you David. When I checked your profile, I saw right through you and I can’t say I’m surprised about this… current situation.’’

Her giant hand picked up an hysterical David, unable to scream, he almost fainted. 

‘’Stay with me little guy. Oh, would you look at that, I think we have a Betsy Wetsy here. That’s a good name for you. Tsk tsk. I hope you haven’t soiled my shoe. I knew I should’ve put you in a diaper in the first place.’’

David squirmed in the witches hand, trying to get free from her. He started kicking and biting it.

‘’Ouh, we got a little fighter here. Bad little Betsy.’’

She easily flipped him over and with her finger nail she slid down David’s soaking wet pants as they fell in the shoe box on his wife’s face.

‘’You can keep them Martha. I don’t think Betsy will need those anymore. Now let’s give her a little correction.’’

She began snapping David’s butt with her finger, effectively spanking him with her huge hand until tears of rage and pain started pouring down his face, but he was unable to make any sound as the finger was hitting his butt again and again, reddening it.

‘’Oh, darling, don’t cry. It’s okay. Mommy knows you didn’t mean to wet your pants. It was just an accident. Here, let’s get you ready for my daughter, okay?’’

She put him back down in the box and Martha and Jenny rushed to hug him as he sat there in his drenched underwear, crying his eyes out.

‘’Here, the witch declared, it’ll be easier for you to do it down there. Martha, would you kindly change Betsy, she’s had a bit of an accident and I don’t think we can trust her in big girl underwear anymore.’’

She tossed a bunch of clothes in the box. A very girly set of doll dress and shoes and to top it all off... a diaper. A disposable, baby blue and white diaper.

‘’Come on now, if you want a chance to ever get out of here you better do as I say sweetie, otherwise I may make you wear the same thing.’’

Promptly, Martha grabbed what looked to be a pair of Pampers, except they were David’s exact size. The man lied on his back, humiliated by what his wife had to do and his daughter had to see. Jenny turned around to look away.

‘’Now now, said the witch, Jenny honey, look at your father. He’s not your father anymore but your little sister Betsy. I said look at her sweetheart. Or would you prefer you be the little sister and start messing yourself like a dirty, babbling baby every day? That’s what I thought. Look at Betsy. Isn’t she cute, getting in her Pampers? This will be the first of many changes, let me tell you that. If you behave you can stay the big sister and keep your big girl undies. You’re not a Betsy Wetsy, are you Jenny? You can keep your panties dry like a good girl?’’

Jenny nodded. David had just been put in a diaper, getting back on his feet, staring at the ground, too ashamed to face his family. He started putting the dress on over it. 

‘’Aw, our little Betsy is all dolled-up. Almost ready to go. Now what will we do with the both of you? Hmm? What is it Betsy, you want to say something? Fine, I’ll allow you to talk this once, but if you keep yelling I will make you regret it. Don’t think your Pampers won’t come down for another spanking sweetie.’’

With a wave of her hand, David was able to speak again. He took a deep breath, still in a state of panic and started talking:

‘’Please, I’m begging you, leave them out of this. You can do whatever you want with me, but let them go! I will do what you ask of me.’’

‘’Interesting. Well it appears my little Betsy has more balls than what I gave her credit for. Fine, I’ll make a deal with you. I will let your family go back to their normal lives, but in exchange, you will remain my daughter’s little living doll… forever. Or until she grows tired of you at least, which might take a few years. You will wear the dresses she puts on you, your Pampers will be changed when she feels like it and you won’t be able to speak save for just a few sentences. Is that clear?’’

David had a last long look at his wife and daughter who were shaking their heads, trying to convince him not to do this.

‘’We have a deal. Let them leave.’’

The witch snapped her fingers and David’s eye grew wide as she picked him up again and slowly put the lid back on the box.

‘’Mommy I’m wet!’’ Is all he was able to say as his diaper was filling up and his family disappeared.

Written by Allerted
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