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Yuuuup... We made it, peeps...

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Processing combat information.

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Calculating.

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Results:

Strength: Severely Lacking

Endurance: Severely Lacking

Speed: Severely Lacking

Cognition: Severely Lacking

Offense: Severely Lacking

Defense: Severely Lacking

Growth: Severely Lacking

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Checking combat data acquisition.

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Adequate data acquirement met.

Device initiating adjustments to:

Endurance.

Processing.

Adjustment complete.

Endurance has been upgraded from Rank C0 to C1.

Victory.

Elation coursed through Viv, so visceral and real it actually hurt to experience as she tensed with excitement, every inch of her screaming in protest at this given the battering it had just received. This was it. This was how she would catch up. She pondered, for a moment there on her back, why this kind of brutal training wasn’t a regular part of User regimen, but then thought better of it. For one thing she could already tell she’d overdone it, and probably wasn’t going to be able to move all weekend, much less tomorrow.

For another… For various unvoiced reasons, Viv was starting to suspect that only members of Firesong were probably capable of this speed of improvement, torturous though the method was…

Anticipation overruled sense, and Viv ignored the scream of her muscles and bones and joints to climb to her feet and face the sparring partner once more. Managing it, she had to catch herself has she stumbled, her vision spinning, and a second later she found herself blinking blearily at the ground, a curious color lightly splattering the otherwise-white floor.

Was that… blood?

The whir of the drone confirmed it for her even before Viv tasted iron and brought a hand to her nose, pulling it away to see wet red darkening the edges of her fingers.

“Well that can’t be good…” she grumbled even as the drone atomized the blood before her eyes, her lips tingling as the scanner swept her face too.

But just the same she straightened and faced the grey man once more.

“Call.”

Comments

Amanda

I’m happy sad for the epilogue. Good job Bryce!

Kory Leach

So pumped for tomorrow morning!

Darren Dyke

Gannggstttaaaaaa

Anonymous

Let’s gooo, man I have been enjoying this so much. I used to always think that because of Rei, his friends would slowly see their growth stat rise. I have put it away for a while, because Rei was just influencing all of them. I do still have the feeling that Viv is gonna get a growth stat increase. I really have been hoping we would get to see Viv’s evolution this book with her nee ability. Or something along the lines where this book ends on her getting her ability and you just see Rei and Catcher saying “I have never actually heard of this ability. It doesn’t say user unique, but it must be damn close.” I’m sure you’re gonna do it better than me, but boy have I been imagining dozens of endings for this book with Viv.

Lukas

enjoyed this. look forward to reading the final version. so much material for the next couple books cant wait for them as well.

Adam

I love how Rei, Aria, and Catcher are trying to be furtive about Shido influencing the team's Growth so they don't get Viv's hopes up if they're wrong, and Viv already came to that conclusion on her own.

kyle walker

I kept waiting for it to say...emotional maturity: severely lacking. lol

wraithmarked

lol you gotta remember dude... this are 18 year old kids 🤣 and I write them like 18 year old kids... -Bryce

kyle walker

Yeah, I get that...I just get frustrated by her inability to see the depth of her hypocrisy and how it affects the dynamic of the group. Not a problem with the writing at all, just bugs me, which is not necessarily a bad thing.

gratch42

Interesting. In book3 does Central just freeze Firesong in an arena and flay them through advancement?!? 😨 Hoping Firesong figures out something more than just edge of life brutality to advance as quickly. Though it wouldn’t help their tactics, team play, and kind of weird it helps their offense.

Grakyn

Haven't looked yet, but this is simultaneously the biggest "Ooooooh, can't wait!" and "Do I really want to read this? Maybe I should wait!" of any post so far. My brain is confused, I don't know what to do. I lie, I'm scrolling up, I'm going to do it.

Grakyn

Follow up, that was ok, I was expecting the Bryce special, some extreme cliff hanger.

Anonymous

Can’t wait for Stormweaver 3 prologue next week 👀

Lyn Shirley

Gooooo Viv! I always appreciate the sneak peeks. I am almost done rereading all the previous chapters. Yes there is a lot of editing needed spelling wise, adding or removing odd wordage etc. but the book is good. I look forward to buying it. I hope it comes out in an audible version. As a crafter, seamstress and quilter, audible books are my constant companions. Good books are much more entertaining than music to me.

Anonymous

Seeing a Wraithmarked post this morning on my email made me think it was Friday for about 7 seconds. Truly terrible.

Linda Thompson

Interesting! The team is going to figure out something is up with Viv when she turns up hurt….. like Rei does when he pushes it. Thanks for the sneak preview. I eagerly await tomorrow 🤪

Anonymous

I always knew you would make it! Excellent writing! Congrats!

Anonymous

“User unique ability assigned”

Richard Jackway

"Implosion" (Viv's CAD creates a mini black hole that sucks everything towards it !) "Solidified EMP" (Viv's CAD creates an EMP 'spear' that she can hurtle and disable an opponent) "Inhibitor" (Viv's CAD throws a piece of itself that latches onto an enemies joints, inhibiting movement in that joint) ...sorry, had to throw out a few user unique abilities following Calum's comment.

Devin Robinson

"Blade Dance" (Speed and Congnition Overclock or extends combat range)

Devin Jaros

Obsessed with that ability name! Especially with an external, like I just picture her being like a figure skater of death gracefully gliding across the arena! 😍