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Well would you look at what I found 🥺 (also, yes, I did delete the poll, but not to worry!) (Patreon)

Published:
2023-06-19 13:00:11
Imported:
2023-06

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Dolls by Bunny Bheb!

Not sure if I'm gonna keep these or sell them as truly unique one-offs on the upcoming Kickstarter.

Guess we'll find out!


Also quickly, yes I did delete the poll, but don't worry! I heard your feedback loud and clear! I'm considering adding a couple chapters to give the story a better wrap, like maybe ending after they meet their trainers or something. Sadly I do have a max word count for Podium, but I will see what I can do!

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Anonymous

Love them!

Anonymous

So will the epilogue be the epilogue if you add chapters

Anonymous

Is there a reason why podium has a maximum word count?

AJ

I wonder what your next project will be I’m looking forward to it

Blyss

these are awesome

K Cianci

I think the story has a perfect wrap as is - satisfying and not a cliffhanger but still builds anticipation for the next book.

jacob shlagel

My wife loves to crochet or as I call her she is an amateur hooker seems like crochet plans for different characters would be a cool add on pledge

Anonymous

If Podium's rules are forcing you to make an inferior product, you tell Podium to suck it.

Voror

The dolls are adorable! For the novel, I didn't comment really or rate because I was thinking it over. I did find I agree with some of the criticisms brought up though at the same time, I was mostly good with where we left off with things in this books? It's odd I guess to describe but I was left pumped for things to come still. Concluding with the setup for what challenge awaits Rei and them along with accepting the Kamiya deal with us getting an idea on the trainers they'll have worked well. Then you had the conclusion with Viv which finally grants what she was hoping for and also fully confirms the suspicions about Shido would all be doing.

PapaJohn

I wouldn’t mind me a pocket-Rei and/or a pocket-Aria

Jacob Clemens

One thing I hope for in book 3, not that I'm telling you how to write or anything like(don't want to be banned), im hoping to see the stat breakdown of the whole team. Not just rei. That would be cool.

Voror
>>111062073

That actually would be really cool to see. Even as something in the back of the volumes so we can compare things volume to volume. Could also really highlight how fast the rest of the team is growing even if it's not Rei fast

mbaruh

Honestly I think the book wrapped up in a good spot. I think them meeting the trainers should be left for the next book. There was some criticism (which I don't fully agree with, but it's beside the point), but it's about the book as a whole. Adding a couple of chapters at the end won't really address it IMO and might just make the book end at a more awkward spot.

Kory Leach

The only problem with a Rei toy is that he evolves so often his outfit gets outdated! Well, a potential strong suit (pardon the pun) for merchandising! Lol