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NO ONE GET TOO EXCITED! IT IS NOT A NEW CHAPTER!

Over the holidays I sat on some feedback I got from several people here and on Reddit, and I decided Chapter 40 did indeed need a major tweak, or I'd be missing out on an important chance to continue to solidify a significant relationship in the story that hasn't gotten as much attention this book as I'd like.

For that reason, Chapter 40 has be reworked with that change, so enjoy a reread if you're into that kind of thing! If not, it doesn't change anything moving forward, so you can wait for a minor surprise when the final book drops!

(And, as an apology for the false hope this post will send through many, a very small sneak peek of Chapter 41, wich I hope to have out Friday!)

Cheers all!

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A few rules & reminders:

  • Chapters will be dropping as Bryce completes them. That means anywhere from every 1 to 2 weeks on average, though sometimes waits may be longer.
  • Recall that these are rough chapters, with no editing other than a single pass-through as Bryce writes.
  • On a similar note, we are not asking for advice or corrections at this time. If Bryce wants feedback, we will certainly reach out, thank you! If you want to voice concerns or complaints about the chapter, you may now do so over on the Reddit discussion thread! Notifications are turned off on those conversations, so they're a free-for-all now (within the rules of the subreddit, obviously)!

That's it, so without further ado... Enjoy!

Comments

Anonymous

is there a plan to ever give rei an atypical weapon or will he only be an atypical because he can switch Types?

Adam

Does anyone else have the sneaky suspicion that Reese is going to find some way to mess with our boy again?

Kory Leach

I really liked the original version, BUT it works way better with Vic being the hothead letting her tongue run rampant as it’s exactly her character in a way that Aria hasn’t been.

DeanDer

Since I'm a "Viv" hater, my view is biased. Having Viv in the dialogue takes away some of the intimacy between Rei and Aria. Having Aria stand up for him in addition to her "bringing" Rei out of his nightmare added more depth to their relationship.

Tiffany Miller

I liked it! I love Viv hate her with Grant. Like really hate it so much. But then not a fan of every relationship in a series being a straight one

Voror

I actually liked the original version with Aria, though this is fine too. The sheer anger does fit Viv more I agree with the blowup, though after everything that's been done to Rei plus what Aria just had to witness firsthand I could see her being angry enough to fly off the handle like that. Excited to see what Aria's evolution ends up being. I'm not surprised after that last fight really.

Alex

The iron bishop and the headmasters assistant aren't straight.

Anonymous

I must admit that I like the original a lot more. Viv's been a character I've just really disliked--I can't tell why, but... I guess she just kind of gets on my nerves. I liked the "intimacy" of Aria and Rei in the scene (I ship them very hard :D). Anyway, please no harem ahhaha.

Heather Herren

Just think.. 4 well recognized A types under the same roof… all connected in some way…..

Scott

Rei, and Dent, and Lennon and ... who is the 4th?

Anonymous

Honestly liked the original version better. It showed that Aria was willing to get angry for Rei and that even she had a line. I feel like replacing her with Viv cheapens the interaction in the moment and just falls back on the tried and tested.

Carolyne

I love it. It makes sooooo much sense that Viv would be there and a voice he would respond to no mater what!

Xien

Sooooo.... Who's got oversight of central to be investigating the first rigged parameter test that landed ray in the hospital?

Samantha Sandlin (edited)

Comment edits

2023-04-02 21:52:39 I've been wondering this, too. I thought Central was the head of the military so who would be over them? There is no central government, other than the MIND.
2023-04-02 21:52:39 I've been wondering this, too. I thought Central was the head of the military so who would be over them? There is no central government, other than the MIND.
2023-01-14 11:05:11 I've been wondering this, too. I thought Central was the head of the military so who would be over them? There is no central government, other than the MIND.

I've been wondering this, too. I thought Central was the head of the military so who would be over them? There is no central government, other than the MIND.