Early Access: STORMWEAVER 3 - Chapter 9 [WIP] [ROUGH] (Patreon)

So you'll notice this Chapter has been marked as WIP, which is a first. It's also not something I plan on doing again (not cause it won't happen, but cause if it does it will definitely unplanned).

A lot of people though, have commented on how much they enjoy seeing the writing process of these chapters, and something happened with this chapter that I thought at least those people would be really interested to check out. 

This scene... was not intended to be in the book. I was planning to time skip a few hours to the afternoon where a certain character isn't speaking to another character (different pair this time), and kinda retro-explain. I wanted to get the story moving a little quicker. 

Then though, I sat down, and just... felt like the squad was emptier for not having had this conversation on paper, and I just couldn't connect with them and their feelings because of it.

So... I started drafting out the convo, and before I knew it it was all on the page.

I'm really glad I did it. I think it adds to the dynamics of the squad we haven't seen too much of just yet in book 3, but since it wasnt intended for the book I wanted to pop it out for you guys early so you can see what the rest of the chapter looks like once it's done, and you can decide for yourselves how the dynamic of their emotions would have changed if you hadn't actually seen the exchange.

If you want the full finished chapter without reading, that's still aimed for Friday so long as writing goes as planned!

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• Chapters will be dropping as Bryce completes them. That means anywhere from every 1 to 2 weeks on average, though sometimes waits may be longer.
• Recall that these are rough chapters, with no editing other than a single pass-through as Bryce writes.
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