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“What can we do for the Rangers?” Templar asked sourly. Julius smiled, his best PR smile – brilliant, teeth showing, not touching his eyes at all.

“Actually, it’s more ‘what can we do for you?’” Julius said. “We’re here to help. We’ve brought a fairly powerful healer along with us, and we plan to do some work as a team. We’ll get to that in a minute.”

“First, I’d like to introduce Elaine. Her full background is classified – what I can say is she’s extremely knowledgeable, and has an education in diseases and plagues unmatched by most. I can also say there’s some divine shenanigans going on with her, but I can’t go into exactly what they are. She’s also a full member of the team, a Ranger in her own right. Everyone, meet Elaine.”

Julius shuffled around, letting me step forward. I felt imposing, powerful, wise, and oh-so-short. Speech time!

“Hi everyone, I’m Elaine!” I said, giving a little smile and wave. I felt so fake. “I’m a Celestial-aligned healer, and I’m here to help. I have a background on diseases that I’d be happy to share with anyone interested. I also have a powerful [Oath]skill that’s giving me an extra 3500 Magic Power, and 6300 Magic Control. It’s also not particularly high-level – nor am I – and it only gets stronger as I level up, and as the skill levels up. Any questions?” I took a deep breath, having said all that in one go. Public speaking. I thought I’d be great at it, turns out I was only ok.

There was some muttering, then Templar took charge again.

“Welcome Elaine! I’m sure we have a bunch to talk about. Let’s introduce ourselves, then start talking. I’m Markus. I’m a Pyronox-aligned Healer. I specialize in burning out disease and corruption, and keeping areas clean and pure. The doorways are my skill, and it makes sure that anyone entering the room is clean, and the room itself is clean. I don’t know how the plague forms, but even if it’s spontaneous, from too many people, it’d just get burned out the moment it forms in the room. If it spontaneously forms inside of someone, they’d get cleansed before stepping out. These here behind me are my apprentices. A motley mix of Water and Dark, and one of my Light apprentices came along. I’d also like to talk about what role the Rangers will be taking – from the sound of it, it’s not just personal protection, is it?”

Julius shook his head. “Elaine, can you handle this part?”

“Sure! It’s nice to meet you Markus. My knowledge of disease and medicine tells me that there’s a reservoir, a place where the disease is, and how it spreads. It might be in the water, in a contaminated well. It might be fleas, living on rats. It could be people, jumping from person to person. The way the plague spreads might be water, air, bug bites, contaminated food, rodents, or more.”

I decided to identify him. [Healer]. Higher-level than some of the Rangers, in the 260-270 range. This guy knew his stuff, and could be considered a classer in his own right. I was close enough to see his eyes, and dark flames flickered in them, the same way lightning flickers in Artemis’s, and my eyes were the stars above.

Pyronox.

Some of Markus’s apprentices scuffed at me. One of them opened his mouth, starting to say something, as Markus whirled on him and cuffed him.

“We listen to all healers, great and small.” He said, rebuking the apprentice who was looking down at his feet. His fellow apprentices had mixed reactions – some seemed to agree with the aggrieved apprentice, others were happy it wasn’t them being disciplined. “Yes, she’s young. Yes, she’s low-level. Yes, she’s a girl. However, I don’t see any of you being vouched for by a Ranger squad, and being called a full Ranger now, do I? When the gods step in and meddle with your life, when you feel you’ve learned as much from me as possible to strike out on your own, then you can feel free to ignore other healers. Until then, you follow my lead, my rules. And part of that is listening to other healers, and what they have to say. Regardless of how far-fetched it is.” He threw a look at Tattered Man at that. Interesting.

“Eye contact.” Sack-Head said. “I’m convinced that part of this plague is transmitted by direct eye contact.”

We turned and looked at him, my eyebrows quirking up. Disease didn’t spread by eye contact! That was silly. It was more likely that it was spread by airborne transmission. It did explain why he was wearing a sack over his head though – if he thought it was transmitted through direct eye contact, a sack over his head was a good way to avoid that.

“Nice to meet you Elaine, my name’s Caecilius. I’m a Mist-aligned [Plague Healer]. My secondary class is possibly mage, possibly healer – it’s never been high enough level to tell, and the class itself doesn’t tell me. Does help with my work. I go from place to place dealing with plagues, they’re my specialty.”

He was a [Healer]. In the 290-300 range. I couldn’t see his eyes, due to the bag he was wearing over his head, but I was dead curious what Mist eyes looked like. I wanted to whistle. I checked Artemis. I checked him again, carefully. Artemis was a hair higher – in the 300 to 310 range. It was close. This was a strong, strong healer. Wandering around from plague to plague seemed to pay off in spades as far as level was concerned.

“On that note,” He continued. “I’m convinced that this is two plagues we’re dealing with, not one. There’s the main plague, with the coughing, the bleeding, the sores, and the puss, and there’s a second plague, with the diarrhea, vomiting, and tongue-swelling.”

[*Ding!* Congratulations! [Learning] has reached level 120!]

“I’ve told you before, that makes no sense.” The one lady present said, snapping at him. “I’ve lived here all my life. We haven’t had a plague here in decades, and you’re saying that we got hit by not one, but two plagues at the same time? You don’t know this place; you don’t know how things are. We’re right next to the Kadan Jungle, we get diseases all the time, but a plague like this is on a completely different level. It just doesn’t make sense that two plagues occur at the exact same time. Plus, a number of people have all of the symptoms – vomiting, diarrhea, coughing, bleeding. How do you explain that?”

“Hi, by the way. I’m Verta, I’m so pleased to meet you!” She said, enthusiastically shaking my hand. “I’d love for you to tell me everything you know – and the other healers local to this town who know what things are like here.” She said that last part darkly, shooting a glare at Caecilius.

She showed up as [Laborer]. Somewhere around 180. I bet her healing class was at a similar level. Lowest level so far by a wide margin – probably a combination of doing ‘just town’ healing like mom, and not being given the same chances as everyone else – like mom. Normal eyes marked her first class as being one of the base eight elements, not that it’d tell me anything with her displayed class being a non-healing class.

Like me, when I was nothing more than a town healer.

“I’d be delighted to! One of my skills asks me to spread medical knowledge when I can.”

“Does that relate to your massive stat increase skill? Or is it something different?” Tattered Man joined the conversation. “I’m Ponticus. Light-aligned healer.” Caecilius snorted derisively at him. “Less-than-useful in a plague sadly. I showed up, figuring that I might be able to do something, and, well, Light has a huge hole when dealing with diseases. Sadly, nobody seems interested in handling scrapes and the like – I thought this would be a good leveling chance for me, everyone focused on the plague, injuries occurring, who wouldn’t want your friendly neighborhood Light healer around? Sadly, nobody has any coin to pay for it….”

I checked out his level. [Artisan]. Somewhere between 230 and 240. In spite of his young age, and poor decision to try and be a Light healer in a plague town, he somehow managed to be at a respectably high level. His eyes seemed almost faceted and glimmering, and as he talked, was slowly changing color from blue to green. I glanced at Artemis, who mouthed “gemstone” at me. At that level, his second class – his healing one – couldn’t be too far behind. I was an abnormality with the disparity between my levels.

[*Ding!* Congratulations! [Identify] has reached level 81!]

“That’s because you keep trying to charge people extortionate prices! This isn’t the capital, stop charging capital prices!” Templar – Markus – berated him.

Ponticus muttered darkly, but didn’t have much more to say. I mentally marked him as ‘brilliant healer, idiot at business’, before realizing to my chagrin that I probably also fell in the same category. Thank goodness I had Kallisto, Artemis, and the rest of the Rangers looking out for my best interests.

“I will say, I’m curious about that skill of yours as well.” One of the unremarkable members said. “Can you go into detail about it? I’m Berucus by the way, Dark-aligned healer.”

“Sure, I’d be happy to! Fair warning, it’s restrictive, but powerful. Here it is:

First, do no harm.

Healing is my art.

I will use all of my knowledge and tools at my disposal to heal those that come to me.

I will heal those I see to the best of my ability.

I will apply all measures that are required to my patients.

I will never see a patient as anything other than another creature in pain.

I will not discriminate who I heal based on class, sex, race, what gods they pray to, nor by any other means.

I will defend the patients under my care from harm and injustice.

I will only take up a knife to defend myself or my patient.

I will admit when I do not know how to heal a patient.

I will respect the privacy of my patients, and hold in confidence anything that is said to me.

I will teach and spread my knowledge to the best of my abilities, asking for no recompense.

The eyebrows of the healers were steadily rising in a uniform manner.

“What’s the payoff for something that restrictive?” Templar – Markus, the pyronox dude – asked.

“For me, 5% increased knowledge, Magic Power, and Magic Control when dealing with healing-related issues. Or, in other words, when it’s level 20, it doubles my abilities. When it’s level 40, it triples my abilities, etc.” I said, noticing Verta looked confused, remembering that education was not a strong suite of Remus – especially not women’s education.

“Downsides?” Templar, the Pyronox asked.

“Losing a level in [Oath]under minor breaks. Pain, losing a few scattered levels on medium violations. No idea what deliberately, purposefully breaking or going against it would do.” I said.

“Possibly death.” Maximus helpfully added in. “Probably just an escalation of penalties. We’re not entirely sure, as Elaine’s been carefully following it, and different oaths have different penalties. Safer to assume it’s lethal. Part of why the System is locked for young kids, to stop them doing something idiotic like making eternal vows.” Every word of Maximus was like a knife in my chest. I’d wondered on the consequences of deliberately breaking [Oath], of trying to shatter it. Whoops.

The part about being idiotic also drove a hammer home, my pride and arrogance I’d has as a reincarnated kid not only killing Lyra, but permanently binding me. I could just imagine how much worse it could’ve been if [Oath] wasn’t so well-worded. Bless the self-defense clause.

At the same time, I wouldn’t want to give [Oath] up. It was my promise, my vow, practically a way of life. It gave me structure and meaning, living up to something bigger, better than myself.

Templar turned and looked to his apprentices. “Any of you willing to try this?” He said. “This is a chance for you to shine, if it works as advertised. However, it comes at a risk. Think carefully before you decide.”

There were some looks shared, glances all around. Who was willing to step forward, take this Oath, see if it would even result in a skill? Who was going to go out on a limb, and listen to a kid so much younger than them, a girl to boot.

Who would be the first to take the Oath after me?

One of them finally spoke up.

“Ah, I’ll do it. Can’t leave the pretty Ranger hanging now can I?” He said with a wink towards me. I wanted to shudder. His motives were transparent, and he was at least 5, 6 years older than me. Poker face. Now more than ever I needed a poker face.

“You’ll need a strong degree of sincerity to make it work.” Maximus jumped in, saving my skin. “Oath, Vow, Promise, and other such related skills require effort and commitment.”

“Chill.” Laid-back apprentice said. “I got this.”

He spoke the oath, suddenly being serious. At the end of it, he suddenly started blinking rapidly, the way someone surprised by a System notification would.

“By Aion.” He swore. “That’s some skill.”

“Details?” Asked Maximus and Templar – Markus! I had to get his name straight – at the same time, glancing at each other, recognizing fellow seekers of knowledge. Just so happened they overlapped here.

[Elaine’s Oath]. A healing oath, a solemn vow of your dedication towards helping and healing others. 4% per level to healing knowledge, and magic control and power while healing. A warning, that Oaths are binding.”

“Yeah be careful about that part. It’s not kidding.” I shuddered at the memory of breaking the oath the other day.

“It’s your call if you want to take it.” Markus said. “It’s your chance at greatness – just look at that girl over there. Level 140 or so, and a full Ranger – probably on the basis of her Oath.”

“If it helps, you can still defend yourself no problems.” I chimed in, eager to have him take it. Hey, who didn’t want their name immortalized in a skill that someone else had? “It just stops you from taking offensive action preemptively. Oh, and don’t ignore people asking to be healed. Kinda hard in a plague actually…” I trailed off, realizing that giving him this skill in the middle of a massive disease outbreak might not be the best introduction to the skill.

“I’ll do it.” He said grimly, making up his mind.

“Are you sure?” Markus asked him. The other healers were watching him raptly, eager to see what happened to the first penguin pushed off the cliff. Were the waters safe, or was there a deadly trap in them?

“Yes. You should know why I am.” He gave a significant look to Markus.

“You know I’d never kick you out.” Markus said.

“Yeah, but I feel like a burden. Maybe this will help.”

Markus sighed. “It’s your call.”

I could tell he took the skill, as I got a notification at the same time.

[*ding!* Congratulations! A skill you created has been passed along to others! A tiny amount of experience that other people gain with the skill will go to you as well.]

[*ding!* Congratulations! You’ve unlocked the General skill [Teaching]. Would you like to take this skill? Y/N]

[*ding!* Congratulations! You’ve unlocked the General skill [Teaching Medicine]. Would you like to take this skill? Y/N]

I thought about the skills being offered, checking my current general skills. Mmmmmmmmm. [Recollection of a Distant Life] was my weakest general skill, but I liked it more than a low-level teaching skill right now.

Maybe one day I’d be a teacher. That sounded nice.

[Name: Elaine]

[Race: Human]

[Age: 14]

[Mana: 3970/3970]

[Mana Regen: 6111]

Stats

[Free Stats: 174]

[Strength: 43]

[Dexterity:   79]

[Vitality: 65]

[Speed: 80]

[Mana: 668]

[Mana Regeneration: 1100]

[Magic Power: 626]

[Magic Control: 1121]

[Class 1: [Constellation of the Healer -   Celestial: Lv 144]]

[Celestial Affinity: 144]

[Warmth of the Sun: 117]

[Medicine: 124]

[Center of the Galaxy: 126]

[Phases of the Moon: 104]

[Eyes of the Milky Way: 94]

[Veil of the Aurora: 110]

[Vastness of the Stars: 127]

[Class 2: [Pyromancer - Fire: Lv 39]]

[Fire Affinity: 39]

[Fire Resistance: 39]

[Fire Conjuration: 39]

[Fire Manipulation: 39]

[Fuel for the Fire: 31]

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[Class 3: Locked]

General Skills

[Identify: 81]

[Recollection of a Distant Life: 79]

[Pretty: 101]

[Vigilant: 110]

[Oath  of Elaine to Lyra: 111]

[Ranger's Lore: 67]

[Running: 74]

[Learning: 120]

Comments

Mr. Bigglesworth

First! This chapter felt alot like a very bad attempt to continue justifying the use of a Skill that actively abuses her. Oath is horrific, and extremely niche, and should be carefully removed, altered, or another Skill learned to mitigate its effects. Trying to justify the current horror of it is just wrong on way to many levels to count.

Nim

It's interesting. I mean "the plague spreads by eye contact" is utterly absurd in the real world. And so far, what Elaine knows from Earth has been pretty valid...except for anything that would rule out magic. So, is she going to explain that eye contact disease isn't a thing? Or is she going to ask whether maybe it COULD be, here?

Miguel Wolmers

I feel like she should give up identify in exchange for reaching medicine... It would probably gain a lot of levels explaining plagues and viruses. Don't think identify is particularly useful for her anymore to keep a slot for it.

Til Weisheit

In medieval times healers thought a plague were caused by bad air and suggested drying out swamps. This killed mosquitoes and helped against the plague. So avoiding eye contact with a sack could also avoid aerosols and actually help, even if it is not based on the real reason.

Nim

Right, people can have the right plan for the wrong reason. But also, someone who is too sure they know how things work can get themselves in trouble dismissing ideas in a context where some of what they know doesn't apply. I hope she's not going to come in strong with scientific knowledge and then be proven wrong, because she didn't account for magic. It would be educational, but she's had some painful "mess up and learn from it" moments lately. I'd like to see her grow this time through handling things WELL, whatever that means in this case :)

Anonymous

Maybe she'll have a Start a Medical School arc.

SpaceGoddess76

In your status at the end of the chapter the Identity skill should be Lvl 81

Malthe Mørk Mejlby

There's a double space in the [Fuel for the Fire] spell at the end And the Oath of Elaine

BladeTytan

How is a Skill that boosts all facets of Healing (You know, the only thing the MC can do) "extremely niche"?

Yomuashi

I'm a little iffy on this chapter. She tells her oath, weakness, skills, level, class, and everything to a bunch of healers? Doesnt seem like a smart move at all.

Robert Mullins

She arguably has to even if she didn't want to. One of the last lines of the oath is about to teaching others her knowledge, and knowledge of how to get an extremely powerful healing skill should be right in line with a reasonable interpretation of the oath.

K Hilliard

That tidbit about her gaining a fraction of experience from anyone taking her oath is going to snowball into something OP if she keeps going around showing how effective a healer it makes her. ...assuming the guy doesn't break it stupidly somehow and die.

Robert Mullins

Just verified with the author. A request to learn about the details of her oath if made in good faith and with intent to learn medical/healing skills or knowledge, would compel her to answer via her oath. A request that she does not see as a good faith request for medical knowledge would not compel her. So in this particular example, if Elaine believed it was just idle curiosity she could refuse but if she believed he was genuinely trying to learn about her healing skill for the sake of using it himself or passing it on then she would have to.

tibbish

If lots of people take the Oath sure. Given its restrictions + that most people aren't healers I think few will ever take the Oath so its probably not going to be something that really levels her up much in any reasonable time frame. Perhaps if she gave the Oath out for decades and had thousands giving her tiny amounts of XP then it'd matter.

tibbish

@Sean: prior to the mid to late 1800's people thought all kinds of crazy stuff about what caused disease. Here is a video (meant to be darkly comedic) that shows what a Plague Doctor was like in the 1500's: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lybBHQW0X7g I don't think things much improved until Germ Theory became a thing unfortunately. Note that all the reasoning for the disease and prescriptions for treatment are real and cited in the video. As is the Doctor's ruinous fees at the end. Plague Doctors, and apparently most medical services, were normally priced extremely high. The reasoning was the risk of being around sick people was considered near suicidal + few ever got better to pay in installments later on. So they'd charge a high fee and if you couldn't pay oh well. The only part that is different from how it was in reality is that they'd usually charge the fee upfront and not after they treated you. Also there isn't any reason to believe the disease in story is magical at this point.

tibbish

Well it does only help with healing so that is fairly niche.

tibbish

If she became a teacher this would make sense but as is in story Identify is worth keeping. It is free instant info after all and that is highly valuable.

Miguel Wolmers

I guess, but at the same time for the story it ties in to her oath and will probably level that faster as well. Since teaching is a part of the oath. I want her to get rid of pretty but we all know that won't happen.

Helios

So she gets experience from others taking her oath, but does she also gain the negatives? Do their actions reflect onto her should they break, defy or misuse the oath?

Charles Owens

No but this and the "Teaching medicine" skill gives another reason for the faraway potential goal of being a teacher for medic rangers or something like that. She could have her students take the oath and then still get xp from a ton of students while being safe.

SelkieMyth

No - it's the "You are the creator of this skill" that's causing this trigger.

Mr. Bigglesworth

@Blade Tytan How is a Skill that ONLY boosts all facets of HEALING not extremely niche? Does it help her fly? Does it give her Fireballs? Can she see the future with it? Nope, it's healing only, and healing is niche. Not only is it niche, it utterly restricts her from practically all forms of EFFECTIVE self-defense, can kill her if broken, and is a mere 5% of an extremely niche setup. Run your logic past me again so I can make sure I didn't miss anything vital.

SelkieMyth

5% per level. So an almost 7x multiplier. Which is only going to grow larger. At level 200, it'll be an 11x multiplier. Which is getting into "completely insane" territory. At level 1000 it'll be a 51x multiplier. That's some solid multiplication going on

Mr. Bigglesworth

Yet it only applies to HEALING. 100000000xmultiplier or even larger means nothing if she can be casually disabled in combat and murdered due to an Oath that tortures her for being only human. The fact that she doesn't even try to find something else that works, or mitigate it, or even look into having it broken isn't aggravating, it's insane. The fact that the Rangers are willing to train her in snap shielding and 'alway ready/prepared' yet leave this glaring pit of pain to disable her in combat at a moments notice isn't plot armor, it's plot acid.

K Hilliard

From the way it was worded, I get the feeling the bonus XP is limited to skill XP towards leveling her Oath as others level their Oaths. It can power up her Oath boost, but not get her leveling XP. Or, does leveling up a skill contribute towards overall leveling in this story? I've lost track. Reading too many stories.

SelkieMyth

Actions determine getting exp. healing someone can be both class exp and skill exp, but apart from that the two aren’t tied

tibbish

Each member of the team is specialized and yes specialization can breed weakness in certain situations just as much as it gives strength in others. Having her be lousy in combat while being a incredibly good healer isn't so bad of a trade off if the rest of the team is pretty good in combat. Which they are. So calling it plot acid seems a bit too much to me.

tibbish

It'd break suspension of disbelief to have a woman get rid of Pretty! It'd be like expecting a male character to get rid of Bigger Dick in favor or some utility skill! Not going to happen!!!

Miguel Wolmers

Yeah I mean, this isn't azarinth healer. It's refreshing to actually see a healing focused mc for once instead of a mc that starts that way and ends up jack of all trades like all other novels. She has a role, she plays it to a T. It doesn't really cut off too many of her self defense methods because she can still defend herself, she just can't initiate the attack. If her skill extended to monsters then yeah it would be a problem. Also her class is celestial healer, why should she be able to fly, throw fireballs, or see the future with it? It's just one skill in her 9 skill slots. Does pretty help her do it? Identify? Lore? Recollection? No. Oath is her most powerful skill right now, even after her class skills.

Mr. Bigglesworth

@tibbish Having her be lousy in combat when the ENTIRE team depends on her healing is a NIGHTMARE weakness in ALL situations. There's literally no logical reason they are not trying to address this, get it worked on, or even fixed, or even removed! I mean let's not even go into how she's just told a roomful of rando characters the things that can completely remove her from a fight, no biggie, right? Wrong, they just sell that info to w/e asks and Bob's your uncle, she's useless in a fight. Plot. Acid.

Miguel Wolmers

Exactly! That's why I never mentioned pretty lol. But yeah, I get where you guys are coming from but I feel like identify has not had much of an impact in terms of giving her new info. It feels more like a reminder of info she has already learned and doesn't provide much new. Plus she has her whole team of more experienced rangers to go to for information on the world. I feel teaching and learning would be a better combo than teaching and identify. Unless identify helps her diagnose patients (but I feel that should be a separate skill)

Mr. Bigglesworth

@Miguel Wolmers Your right, this isn't Azarinth Healer because AH makes sure she addresses weaknesses, and pushes learning to fight effectively while also being an all around god tier healer. I understand we are on different wavelengths on that. Having a role and playing it to a T is great, however her role is arguably the team healer. I'm not sure how you believe that cutting out the ability to attack before being struck in world where mages like Artemis can use Railgun type attacks is somehow 'still able to defend herself' and I'm half-awake so mebbe I read that part of your comment wrong. She can't initiate the attack? That is like a problem yes, but the more relevant issue is she can be UTTERLY and COMPLETELY disabled by someone stabbing themselves and running up to her in a fight. BOOM team dies. Her class is Celestial Healer, why should a celestial fly, throw fireballs of holy hand grenade, or see the future in a grain of sand? Stop limiting the options please. Pretty makes her a good face, and probably is the reason the three kidnappers didn't torture her to a mindless shell. Identify is as the author said used to feed us info so that isn't going anywhere. Lore, your asking about LORE? Srsly? The one her own sub-conscious said was a priority to level for Ranger Ninja Mage stuff? Recollection? How can she drop the only Skill she has right now that boosts her Medical Knowledge light years ahead. All the Skills you talked about have super important things for them, but Oath? Oath is a boost in healing, a multiplier, that gives not only a torture session on casual mistakes, but can literally kill/disable her in combat at the drop of a teeny tiny hat. It's a liability, and the fact that it doesn't do anything except provide a niche boost at the cost of complete and utter vulnerability is beyond the pale now. Especially that the Rangers are letting it go and not even attempting to fix. Plot. Acid.

tibbish

@Mr Bigglesworth: nah not really. Its only if her team mates start to get overwhelmed fast and she can't get to them in time to heal that its a issue. There have been some close calls in story but not unreasonable ones. And in story its already been mentioned that the fatality rate for teams is pretty dang high without a healer. As far as just telling everyone her potential weaknesses (I don't think they know her 2nd class though right?) that could indeed be a issue but one that doesn't matter much in a practical sense. After all even if they didn't know her weaknesses her combat ability is lousy anyways. So she'd still have to depend on her team to save her anyways.....so nothing really changes. After all she isn't a front line fighter and is really only a supporter who'll either be hiding far in the back or in the wagon. So I'd still have to disagree about it being plot acid. Very sub optimal from a combat/self defense perspective? Oh absolutely. But not at all plot acid. And watching a somewhat pacifistic build try and make it in the world is part of the draw of this series. At least to me anyways.

tibbish

Hopefully interesting idea: author have you thought of allowing the MC to use her shields in a more active defensive role? That is instead of just block direct attacks use them to hinder opponents. By that I mean have the MC use small shields judiciously while a opponent is moving or winding up for a hit that block the movement of arms or legs. That would cause their hits to lose much of their power or trip them up constantly. Quite frustrating in mid combat!! Even using them to block the vision of a caster or a fighter temporarily would be enough to help in a fight. And, hypothetically of course, she could use her shields to restrain someone by forming them close to their skin and making a straight-jacket like shape to it. Would be effective against someone who is much stronger than her I'd expect. Even if it only held a very strong warrior still for a few seconds it'd be incredibly useful mid combat. It could be a bad idea but as described in story the MC's shields sound like they deploy effectively instantly + are opaque enough that it might work. The biggest issue is that I don't think she can form her shields out very far so she still would be of limited utility in a fight. I think it'd go a long way towards addressing some readers' issues with her seemingly near total inability to defend herself + the Oath limitation while still fitting within the limitations of the character's personality and skill set.

Mr. Bigglesworth

@tibbish So far they have fought nothing except animals, they haven't fought other humans equal or higher level, that would know to go straight for the healer, and probably read up on her Oath weakness. The fatality for teams is high without a healer, with a healer it mitigates the team losses but does nothing to address how Oath cripples her. Her team cannot cover her against a dedicated enemy that focuses on her. Repeat, not dumb beasts, but someone like Swimmer that isn't a low level scrub. In that situation, with even a modicum of effort they will be able to find out how easily Oath cripples her and apply it. At that point her value to the team is sub-zero because she's not just unable to heal, she's a liability beyond price. They have not fought actual thinking opponents of equal or greater level, ever. She's just given her entire set of weaknesses and issues to a roomful of random people. To think that none of these wonderful healers that will charge folks to be treated in the middle of a plague would pass/sell that information on is....unrealistic at best. She still hasn't bothered to train her shields to create molecular edges, and she isn't bothering to find a workaround, fix, or adjustment for Oath. For something that literally could kill her if she THINKS the wrong way. It's ludicrous, dangerous, and insane, plain and simple.

tibbish

Well they kinda did go up against humans once. Remember that 'adventurer' team that kidnapped the MC? But yeah usually it seems the Rangers are there to take care of the monsters that the locals struggle with. Still though almost everyone knows to go after the healer every time. Healy-bugs are irritating if you let them keep regenerating their friends to whack on you!! You're right that a smart opponent that is targeting only her is a terrible opponent for her but that is fine. Remember she isn't going to be the strongest character at everything around anyways and doesn't even really want to be. She absolutely can, and should, be able to be put into situations where she can die. The risk of that is a big part of what drives the story's tension. i agree that there is huge amounts of untapped potential WRT her shields. I think she can do a whole lot more with them and it does strike me as odd as someone who is A) supposed to be real smart and B) has past life Earth experiences to draw on (video games!!) hasn't figured out what else to do with them. Hopefully the MC is allowed to use those advantages and talents and put her skills to novel use.

Mr. Bigglesworth

When someone can gut 5 small children and toss them in front of your healer thereby forcing her to heal them instead of her team, that's not a problem. That's plot acid. "Repeat, not dumb beasts, but someone like Swimmer that isn't a low level scrub..." I already mentioned how the only reason that the only reason for failure on that guy's party was their levels.

tibbish

In that situation she could just apply the triage model and only heal those who needed up to the point where they'd survive the fight and then come back to them when the fight is over. Its definitely a bad situation for her but its not nearly as unteneble as you're making it out to be.

Håvard

So they have to bring 5 children to the fight, either wound them before the fight start or during the fight. So they are going to carry those children looks like it would help her team until they can vest them self of the children. If they are wounded before the fight She have no restriction on what she can do other than harming the children. Also this is going to work on anyone. if an child is bleeding out I can guarantee you any ranger healer would be ordered to save them while the rest of the team hold off the enemy. If the rest of the team cant handle the attackers what difference would it make if she where an bad stone mage? she is 1/3 to half the level of her companions. Somewhere around 1/4-1/10 the power they have. Yes, she would be really helpful as an damage dealer in that fight that her team is going to lose without her. yhe....

Milandaanza

I’m kind of sad it’s Elaines Oath and not Elaines Oath to Lyra. I feel like immortalizing Lyra as well would have been an amazing thing in the system for Elaine.

Milandaanza

Yea I got the vibe it only levels the oath skill and her oath skill can only be her max level. Still super strong but I doubt most people can create unique skills let alone spread them

Milandaanza

I disagree. Identify has a lot of potential uses especially on figuring out things like ‘what kind of parasite is this’. She already gave up daggers to be a more effective Ranger; I’m not sure if she should give up another skill especially not know. Maybe if she was planning to settle down and teach ie ranger training arc but now? No. This system makes your choice hurt

Miguel Wolmers

The only thing is that I don't think identify can get that specific (atleast it hasn't yet) unless the skill evolves so that it gives her more specific information. In your example "artemis has x parasite in y location" so far it just feels like it gives her information she already knows or just a slight nudge to something new

SelkieMyth

100% I’ve thought of this. We’re in a low to none direct combat arc. I have some plans for some “improvement” arcs down the line.

SelkieMyth

IF Elaine had told the story, and the part to never forget- yeah she’s be immortalized as well. But it’s deeply personal to her, something she’s almost never shared. Only her parents and Artemis know. She hasn’t told the other rangers, and even then they don’t know the full story

Milandaanza

I personally wish that the name had come up anyway and made them want to ask. But that’s me and I love the idea of Lyra and Elaine being immortalized together. Since her skill is Elaines Oath to Lyra them gaining the skill with only half the name seems weird to me; like a hidden part of a skill name? Bleh.