2nd work delivered in Fiverr (Patreon)

The 2nd work arrived very soon! This one is a little different from all the other orders, it is like a comic page. In my opinion, it's okay. The final pic could be much better, but since it was three pics at the cost of one, I think is a good work. What do you think?

This work was done by neroulfur at Fiverr.