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Here's the first 2000 words of a new story:  https://pastebin.com/NLSRqXks

When an ecological disaster threatens to plunge Caden's kingdom into a famine the likes of which has never been seen, he must journey to a ruined city in search of an ancient artifact that is rumored to be capable of commanding the heavens themselves. Unbeknownst to him, the city is protected by a fierce tribe of reptilian warriors who view it as sacred, and who will kill to protect its sanctity. 

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AnimeFem

oml I'm excited for this story already!

rocks217

like the theme already

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “This is madness,”

Anonymous

I really wanted to reply with a quote from a certain movie but I was able to stop myself.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Good, Caden!”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'The next item that he handed to Caden'

Indexo's Vault

Ooo! New story! But I got force myself to wait a bit because I know I’ll tear through it within a day lol.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “All that I have left to give you now is my blessing,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'The inn came into view'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'When he eventually came to a fork in the road'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'It had taken several long days of walking' Had a minor miscommunication with the client, he just wanted fantasy races to be present in the setting, he didn't actually need me to make them a large part of the plot, so I nixed the part about the Elven forest.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'He had read many books on astronomy'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Caden began to point to items on the shelves'

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at 'Caden began to descend the sandy incline'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Again, the desire to flee reared its head' Made a small edit to change the sextant to a compass just because it serves the same purpose in the plot while being far less complicated. Also tweaked the female's body type at the request of the client.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'He unfurled his map and lay it flat on the rock'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'My visions have grown dark as of late'

Shazammy

Hey Snek, is this more of an adventure story or the usual political drama?

Snekguy

This is an adventure story, there won't be any politics in this one.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'She slowly climbed back down the rocky spire'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Caden rolled up the leg of his pants'

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at 'The reptile lunged, swinging her heavy axe'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Keep still,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'How long had it been since he’d bathed properly?'

David Boucher

Cliches of the Snekguy story: 1. Alien girl(s) bigger then human men. 2. Alien girl is aggressive hissing snarling thing who no man in their right mind would ever want (i.e. Borealan animals that stink of the Na'vi from Avatar). 3. Human man ends up dominating larger female for some reason or another. 4. Or alien girl dominates over human man. 4. And let's not forget: Alien girl has HUGE knockers.

Hamerad

You know you don’t have to read his stories right? Also, ‘stink of the Na’vi’ (the tone of which gives the sense you think the Borealans are just copies of the Na’vi), have you looked at any of the concept art? In fact, even the first description of the Borealans in the first story will tell you that the only thing they have in common with the Na’vi is height

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'She struggled more ardently'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'She crossed her arms' Just a heads up, I'm going to take a bit of a semi-day off tomorrow and resume work on Monday, I got some stuff I need to do.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'She crossed her arms' I was dissatisfied with the quality of my previous update, I advanced the relationship between the characters far too quickly, so I've redone it and paced it better.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “And what fate is that?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'What was she doing?'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'As they made their way through the corals'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'She sat back down on the rock beside him'

Anonymous

Looks like he gave a little too much away...

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'She began to butcher the animal with practiced speed and precision'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “So I have hunters chasing me, and I have no idea where I’m going,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'They ventured ever deeper into the cave'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'The winding cave system'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'The coils of her tail tightened around his limbs'

Snekguy

Today I went back and read through 20,000 words of content, making a few edits here and there with the goal of improving the flow of the story, and providing the characters with more believable motivations. You can find all of the edits in this Changelog, which lists all of the changes that I made so that you don't have to re-read anything, and you can continue to read the subsequent updates with no disruption. https://pastebin.com/rxUPNcCH

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “There will be time enough for that later.”

rocks217

Snek really loving this story, but I am curious what is your next story?

Snekguy

Glad to hear it dude. Up next is either going to be a Worlds Apart remaster, or Worlds Apart 2. I'll do both, I just haven't decided the order yet.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'She looked miserable'

Anonymous

It would be cool if FEMALE DARAGON X Human Male 😍

Anonymous

Or FEMALE TURIAN X HUMAN

Snekguy

I've actually written both of those stories! Heart of the Mountain - Female dragon x male Human Joint Venture - Female Turian x male Human You can find them in the master Pastebin, or by using the Ebooks tag.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'As soon as they found a suitable place to rest'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Caden and Kadal stood frozen for a moment'

Snekguy

Had to run a lot of errands today so I'm gonna take a semi-day off.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'He took up a defensive stance, wiping away the blood that was leaking from the corner of his mouth.'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'A yelp of pain made her recoil'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Why was her own heart quickening so?'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Their lips parted once more to leave them gasping for breath'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Caden drew back'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Her loincloth rode low'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'She lay there before him'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “People from beyond the Western shore are not so different,”

Anonymous

Keep it up man. This one has something I've been looking forward to for a while. Loving it.

Snekguy

1500 word update, new content at “We should get out of the water,” I wrote a full update today, but I wasn't satisfied with the rest of it, and I ran out of time. I'll add it to tomorrow's update to make it extra beefy.

Snekguy

Glad to hear it dude! I'm assuming you mean small dom/large sub? If so, you'll like the scenes I have planned.

Snekguy

2300 word update, new content at “You sorcerers are certainly creative,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Kadal groaned as he buried himself up to the base'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Their ruthless pace pushed them higher and higher'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'As they neared, the city came into clearer view'

Snekguy

1500 word update, new content at 'He followed her gaze' Gotta get up super early tomorrow so I cut today's update a little short.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'They passed beneath a massive arch'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'This is the only lead we have'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Caden suppressed his wonder'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Over the threshold was another long corridor'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Tell it that the world’s orbit is degrading'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “It is done,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I would be glad to, if we ever make it back,”

Snekguy

1200 word update, new content at 'There was heated discussion amongst the reptiles' Finished! 108,000 words in 58 days, not too shabby. Now, I just have to edit it, which should take just under a week.

Lincoln Neal

Do you have a Pinwheel story scheduled next?

Snekguy

I'll probably be working on a Worlds Apart remaster, and Worlds Apart 2 next.

Snekguy

I'm taking a bit of a break today to recoup before I start editing. Also, we have some Kadal concept art on the way.

Snekguy

4000 word update, I added in a new fight scene to spice up the sequence beneath the observatory. New content from 'A series of glowing symbols appeared in the marble' to “This handle is false,” Actual editing will begin tomorrow, and should take about 6 days.

Snekguy

The first 20,000 words are edited, from Chapter 1 to Chapter 3.

Snekguy

Another 20,000 words edited, from Chapter 3 to 'She was alerted by the sound of rustling leaves,'

Snekguy

15,000 words edited, from 'She was alerted by the sound of rustling leaves,' to Chapter 7

Snekguy

Another 20,000 words edited, from Chapter 7 to Chapter 9.

Snekguy

10,000 words edited, from Chapter 9, to 'There was another wet pop'. My output may be scaled back a little for a day or two, this heatwave is cooking my brain.

Snekguy

Another 10,000 words edited in spite of electrical storms knocking out my power for most of the day. From 'There was another wet pop' to Chapter 10.

Snekguy

Another 15,000 words edited, from Chapter 10 to “This handle is false,” Only 10k left to go.

Snekguy

Finished! The story is edited and chaptered, and I will be making the Ebook tomorrow.

Indexo's Vault

I think the best part about reading your stories is that even with these one off books you always manage to make such a deep and interesting world, that feels so lived in, and not just hastily thrown together.