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Here's a new story that I'm working on, in which a farm boy falls in love with an Oni.

https://pastebin.com/qeV1EaDh

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ZBL

oh. oh yes

Kalik Long

I haven't even opened this yet, and I'm already excited.

Snekguy

3500 word update

Zathas

This might be a bit of a nitpick, but the use of the word "universe" in the context of line 98 seems a little... out of place in the established setting.

Snekguy

2000 word update

BadTouch

Enjoying it so far. The setting is a great change of pace and very welcome. You paint a vivid word picture.

Snekguy

2500 word update

Snekguy

Here's a haiku: Love your big red boobs I am tall enough to ride Oni lemme smash -Satou

Snekguy

Glad you're enjoying it, the setting is a lot of fun with this one.

Snekguy

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Kalik Long

Line 289: "gravelly and course". You want coarse there.

Snekguy

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Lev

Oh, another story from You. Let's start reading! :)

Snekguy

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Jonathan Billings

I'm really liking this one so far. Great setting and learning a bit more about Japanese culture. Good times

Snekguy

2500 word update

Jack Fables

Great story, keep it up!!

Jonathan Billings

Hey, on line 606, there's a line of dialogue that goes "I won't be bite". I think you meant to say I won't bite.

Snekguy

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Snekguy

2000 word update, sorry the updates have been getting later and later, this heat wave is killing me.

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Snekguy

2000 word update, finished! I did an extra update today because I want to play the new Jurassic Park game obsessively tomorrow. I hope you guys enjoyed this one. I'll start the editing process soon and make an Ebook for you guys once it's all polished up.

Ezekiel Paul

That was a really sweet ending. A really sweet story overall. I liked it!

Jack Fables

Awesome story man. Really inspired

Anonymous

Would love to see a continuation of this story in the future. Great story.

Snekguy

Glad to hear you guys enjoyed this one! The first 20,000 words are edited, chapters 1-5.

Snekguy

Another 20,000 words of editing are done, chapters 5-7.

Snekguy

The final 10,000 words are edited. I'll do the Ebook and upload it to all the various websites tomorrow.